Hey! I've had this idea in my head for quite a while and decided to finally let it out, its my first Dragonballz Story so constructive criticism is appreciated, Enjoy!
Chapter 1
Victory Over Frieza
Bardock punched and kicked everyone in his way charging at Frieza's spaceship.
"FRIEZA!!" he yelled as several minions of Frieza grabbed him. "COME OUT YOU COWARD!!! "he thrashed about struggling to get out of the grip of the minions. Suddenly the purple circle on the ship moved aside as Frieza lifted out in his hovering chair and raised high above his ship. The minions released their grips and backed away in fear.
"L-Lord Frieza…." One of them whispered. Bardock smirked as a blue ball of energy formed in his palm.
"your time has come Frieza!" he yelled pouring every last bit of energy he had left into it. "you've terrorized us for long enough! NOW DIE!!" he screamed and threw the giant ball of energy at Frieza. When the tyrant raised a single finger of his he started forming a Death Ball. It was then that the other millions of saiyans realized that Bardock was right all along. Their rage grew as they stared at Bardock.
"You can do it Bardock! You HAVE TO!! For the Saiyan Race!!" they all yelled. They began cheering for Bardock.
The saiyan smirked through gritted teeth as all of the saiyans reached their senses. Frieza's Death Ball was complete as he threw it down at Bardock's approaching blast. Both attacks clashed creating massive energy bursts when they collided. They struggled together trying to beat the other. Frieza's brow furrowed as he didn't expect this to be so hard. He poured more energy as Bardock's attack began being beaten. Bardock grit his teeth in frustration as he was being pushed back.
'no….I cant lose! I HAVE to beat him!! I HAVE to beat him!!' Bardock thought. He poured more energy into the blast that came from nowhere. Frieza grit his teeth and yelled in anger and poured every last bit of energy into his Death Ball. Bardock's eyes widened as he began losing. He looked around and saw all the Saiyan's cheering for him, telling him to keep going, suddenly, he saw somebody who was thought to be dead, King Vegeta barely was able to manage to walk forward.
"Bardock!" King Vegeta exclaimed as blood dripped out of his whole mouth as he clutched his injury. "you have to…..defeat…..Frieza….do it for your honor, for all the terror he's caused, do it……..for your…..pride….do it….for your…….." King Vegeta coughed out blood and then grit his teeth as rage built. "DO IT FOR THE SAIYAN RACE!!" he roared. "DO IT FOR THE SAIYAN RACE!! DO IT! FOR………..for……..do it for" he coughed blood multiple times "DO IT FOR KAKAROT AND RADITZ! DO IT FOR YOUR TWO SONS!! GET REVENGE FOR YOUR WIFE! FOR YOUR FAMILY! Please…..just kill….Frieza…." and with those last words, the mighty Saiyan King's eyes rolled into the back of his head as he fell into deep space.
"KING VEGETA!!" the saiyans cried. Inside the ship the young Vegeta saw a hole to escape from. He dived into it head first and outside into space. He saw and heard his father yell everything he did until he fell into deep space. Vegeta's eyes widened as tears built. the young saiyan looked away as the tears fell. A few saiyans charged at the lifeless body of the fallen king and held the king as to not let him fall into space.
Bardock's eyes widened. He gritted his teeth in anger. "for the saiyan race…." He began. Frieza raised a brow.
"Hmm?" he whispered.
"for the saiyan race….for my wife…for Kakarot and Raditz…..for MY PRIDE!!!!" he screamed as his hair was raised into the air as his hair kept on flashing between black and gold. An image of Goku appeared next to him and slowly mixed into Bardock's features. Bardock screamed as he saw a vision of his grown up son. He finally pushed the Death Ball back and it hit Frieza. The tyrant's eyes widened as he screamed in immense pain. Unbeknownst to Bardock King Vegeta had woken up which was noticed by everyone except Bardock himself.
"THIS IS FOR THE SAIYAN RACE!! MY WIFE!! And…my two SONS! Raditz! And KAKAROTTT!!!!" he screamed.
Frieza screamed as the Death Ball engulfed him completely slowly annihilating him. The Saiyan's cheered. King Vegeta smirked slightly as he coughed out some blood. The young Vegeta unsteadily stood up and walked forward. Bardock looked at the young saiyan prince. A blood line was going out of Bardock's mouth and other injuries were also visible. His red bandana was laid down on the ship as it had slipped from his hair while he was pushing against the Death Ball. He slowly descended down to the ship and picked it up and tied it to his head. He turned around slowly and stared at all the Saiyan's cheering for him. He took a deep breath and then released it. He ascended and flew to King Vegeta. He bowed kneeled down in front of him although there wasn't really any solid ground.
"King Vegeta, with your permission I would like to go to the planet my son was sent to" Bardock said.
"is that so" King Vegeta said as he was silent for a few seconds. "Alright, permission granted" he said.
"Thank you King Vegeta" Bardock said and descended down to Planet Vegeta.
'its amazing that even after all that he still has this much energy' King Vegeta thought.
Bardock went to a healing pod and later departed unbeknownst to him that there was a party held in his honor.
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