Okay, this will be sort of an introductory chapter, and then they'll get longer for the rest. Please read and review!

Disclaimer- I don't own Tokyo Mew Mew


It was an ordinary day at Café Mew Mew. The café had closed half an hour ago, and Ichigo, Minto, Zakuro, and Retasu were cleaning up before going home. Pudding was down in the basement talking to Ryou while Keiichirou was washing dishes in the kitchen.

They were just taking a short break before finishing, and just talking about whatever came into their heads while they were resting.

Just then, a thought came into Ichigo's head.

"Hey, what do you think Pudding's doing down there?" she inquired of the others curiously. "Didn't she say she had some 'secret Fon family trick' that she wanted to try on someone?"

"Ah... yes, I think so." said Retasu. "She asked me to try it, but I was busy, so she ran downstairs to ask Shirogane-san, I think."

Minto sighed. "She had this weird feather thing that she had tied to a string. I think that's probably part of... whatever she's trying to do."

Zakuro nodded silently in agreement.

Just then, they heard a loud poof! coming from the basement.

"What the...?"

"What was that?"

"We should probably go down and check, I guess." stated Ichigo. "Or maybe Akasaka-san could do it, he's probably done with the dishes, and I have a date with Aoyama-kun soon. I don't want to be late this time."

She was about to walk to the kitchen to tell Keiichirou about the poofing noise, until she heard Pudding's triumphant cry. "Yes, na no da! It worked!"

Pudding's running footsteps echoed up the stairs as she ran, beaming, into the main part of the café. She smiled widely. "Pudding has done it! Pudding's secret Fong family trick has worked! Pudding has hypnotized Shirogane-oniichan!"

The mews stared, with the exception of Zakuro, who blinked once and then looked uninterested again.

"Anou... Pudding-san... what do you mean?" asked Retasu confusedly.

"Pudding... you can't have really hypnotized him..." said Ichigo in an overly patient voice.

"But Pudding did! Na no da!" Pudding insisted. "Pudding used her magical feather-on-a-string! And now Shirogane-oniichan is hypnotized, na no da." She beamed up at her fellow mews.

"Pudding, if you really expect us to believe this, we're going to need some proof." Minto said skeptically.

Zakuro nodded. "Yes, Pudding. If he is really hypnotized, then you will need to show us."

Pudding looked down at her feet. "But Pudding can't right now. Shirogane-oniichan is sort of... unconscious right now, na no da."

The mews stared at her again.

Ichigo spoke first. "Unconscious...! But why, Pudding?"

"Well... Pudding thinks that maybe the extreme power of her Fong family secret trick magical feather of hypnotizing might have been too much for him. But he should wake up soon, na no da!" Pudding smiled happily.

"Does Akasaka-san know about this?" asked Retasu.

"Yup!" Pudding replied happily. "He was the one who said I should try it on Shirogane-oniichan, na no da!"

"Well, fine. But as soon as he wakes up, you're going to need to show us." stated Minto.

Ichigo smiled as a thought came into her head. "I hope your Fong family secret trick really worked, Pudding, because if Shirogane-san really is hypnotized, then we can all have a lot of fun with this. I might even be able to get a pay raise!"


Well, that was fun to write. Hopefully it was an interesting first chapter. Like I said before, please read and review.

Oh, and before I forget, thanks again to Kish's Kittie for the story idea!

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