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Disclaimers: I don't own the characters from DBZ .... SO BITE OFF.
The TIme has come
By Katrina Brolly ^_^
Standing on the edge of the shoreline, she could hear the waves crashing against beach. Katrina felt a change in the wind... she knew something was wrong with about to happen, she could feel it.
" Brolly..."
She never physically met him, but she knew him better than anyone else. They were somehow mind linked at birth, she the princess of a long dead star kingdom, last of the magical beings in the universe, and he, a warrior in the highest sense of the world, the legendary Super Saiyjin, one of the most powerful beings in the galaxy's. They had often telepathically communicated, actually she did most of the talking, and he was very quiet.
Brolly
No reply
Brolly.... I know that u can hear me...what's going on
Still no reply
'Time to play on the Saiyjin's ego'
I can understand why the high and mighty Legendary Super Saiyjin wouldn't want to talk to a lowly girl
A lowly girl that just happens to be the princess of an entire planet
That's me ...the princess of a dead planet
......................
Brolly... its okay, I've long since gotten over the pain....it was my parents own fault, they wanted to form an alliance with Freeza, and when his empire died, so did my world
.....but enough of my busted up life....I'm worried about you...why do I feel this sense of...of turmoil
My father has decided to begin his plan against prince Vegeta
Katrina knew what he was talking about. For years Brolly's father had planning his revenge against the royal family of Vegetasie. She knew that his father controlled him most of the time, but she also knew that with each passing day, Brolly was getting stronger and stronger, and soon he would be able to gain control over his body once again.
I will kill that old man sooner or later
sooner than later is what u are probably hoping
A Saiyjin warrior is trained in the art of stategy, with patience my father will meet his demise at my hands
But Brolly that is something that you lack, Patience
.....................
Oh you big baby, I was just kidding, jeeze
Know that you are the only one that I ALLOW to speak to me like that
Allow eh...well what would I do without you kindness?
And what would I do without you sarcasm
Lets hope you never have to find out
There was silence between them for a moment.
Brolly....I have to tell u something
What is it ....girl?
She had been trying to figure out the right way to tell him for a while, but she knew what he would tell her
I'm coming to New Vegetasie
That's where I'm leaving it off for now.....please email me and tell me what I can do to improve the next chapter, I want feedback people, feedback, If I don't get At Least 5 reviews this story stops here and I start on another. Please if you have anything negative to say just email me and tell me my mistakes at silverfox192001@yahoo.com . I will listen to all reviews and send thank you's to everyone........okay R&R ill catch u later
Disclaimers: I don't own the characters from DBZ .... SO BITE OFF.
The TIme has come
By Katrina Brolly ^_^
Standing on the edge of the shoreline, she could hear the waves crashing against beach. Katrina felt a change in the wind... she knew something was wrong with about to happen, she could feel it.
" Brolly..."
She never physically met him, but she knew him better than anyone else. They were somehow mind linked at birth, she the princess of a long dead star kingdom, last of the magical beings in the universe, and he, a warrior in the highest sense of the world, the legendary Super Saiyjin, one of the most powerful beings in the galaxy's. They had often telepathically communicated, actually she did most of the talking, and he was very quiet.
Brolly
No reply
Brolly.... I know that u can hear me...what's going on
Still no reply
'Time to play on the Saiyjin's ego'
I can understand why the high and mighty Legendary Super Saiyjin wouldn't want to talk to a lowly girl
A lowly girl that just happens to be the princess of an entire planet
That's me ...the princess of a dead planet
......................
Brolly... its okay, I've long since gotten over the pain....it was my parents own fault, they wanted to form an alliance with Freeza, and when his empire died, so did my world
.....but enough of my busted up life....I'm worried about you...why do I feel this sense of...of turmoil
My father has decided to begin his plan against prince Vegeta
Katrina knew what he was talking about. For years Brolly's father had planning his revenge against the royal family of Vegetasie. She knew that his father controlled him most of the time, but she also knew that with each passing day, Brolly was getting stronger and stronger, and soon he would be able to gain control over his body once again.
I will kill that old man sooner or later
sooner than later is what u are probably hoping
A Saiyjin warrior is trained in the art of stategy, with patience my father will meet his demise at my hands
But Brolly that is something that you lack, Patience
.....................
Oh you big baby, I was just kidding, jeeze
Know that you are the only one that I ALLOW to speak to me like that
Allow eh...well what would I do without you kindness?
And what would I do without you sarcasm
Lets hope you never have to find out
There was silence between them for a moment.
Brolly....I have to tell u something
What is it ....girl?
She had been trying to figure out the right way to tell him for a while, but she knew what he would tell her
I'm coming to New Vegetasie
That's where I'm leaving it off for now.....please email me and tell me what I can do to improve the next chapter, I want feedback people, feedback, If I don't get At Least 5 reviews this story stops here and I start on another. Please if you have anything negative to say just email me and tell me my mistakes at silverfox192001@yahoo.com . I will listen to all reviews and send thank you's to everyone........okay R&R ill catch u later