Disclaimer: I do not own D.N.Angel
I would like all honest opinions and criticism.
This story is boy on boy so if you have a problem with it, then please do not read this.
Btw the words in the parenthesis ( ) means either Dark or Krad is talking.
"Oh Daisuke, you are gonna have so much fun tonight. Your little party is gonna be great!" Emiko was so happy. She was glad Daisuke was having this birthday party for he had just turned 16. Daisuke on the other hand was nervous. He wanted everything to be perfect.
(Oh everything is going to be fine. Don't worry Dai.) Dark said with pure honesty.
"I just don't want things to be messed up," Daisuke responded nervously.
An hour passed and the guests had arrived: Risa, Riku, Saehara, and Satoshi. They came in with gifts. Then, they began to play games and eat. It soon came time for Daisuke to make a wish on the cake. "Let's sing happy birthday everyone," Emiko said. The song started and after a minute it was finished and everyone was waiting for Daisuke to blow out the candles.
Saehara was becoming impatient. "Come on Niwa, your taking forever. Just make a wish already.
Daisuke closed his eyes and made his wish. I want something special to happen between me and someone special to me.
He blew out the candles and then they cut the cake, ate ice cream with it, and then went up to Daisuke's room.
Saehara began to get bored. "Hey people I have an idea. Let's play 'Seven Minutes in Heaven'."
The Harada sisters agreed. Satoshi was nervous. Even though he didn't show it, he was very nervous. It was all because he had a crush on his only true friend, Daisuke. Daisuke was nervous too because he really didn't want to play.
"Alright, lets play." Saehara reached into his bag and pulled out a plastic bottle and set it on the ground, he spun it and it landed on Risa. "I'll show you there is nothing to it." He went over to her they both went into the closet. They came back out seven minutes later and Risa has a disgusted look on her face. Everyone else decided they might as well play. It came to Daisuke's turn and the bottle landed on Satoshi.
"Umm…"
"Ha! You got to do it man. It's the rules!" Saehara coaxed, he was going to get a kick out of this.
"But Hiwatari is a boy…" Daisuke was blushing red.
"Come on Niwa! Just do it!" Risa pressured. The boy sighed. It seemed that there was no way he could get out of this. Satoshi's heart was racing in his chest. He wondered if this was actually happening. This was gonna be his first kiss from a guy. He had been kissed by a girl plenty of times but he had never kissed a guy. They both entered the closet.
They looked at each other wondering if they really wanted to do this. "Let's just get this over with fast." Satoshi heart was racing a mile a second. This was really happening to him. Daisuke leaned in with his eyes closed to kiss Satoshi when all of a sudden Krad began to take over Satoshi's body. He finally gained complete control just before their lips touched and before they knew it, Daisuke and Krad had kissed. Their lips had touched. Krad was so confused. He had just been kissed by the one he was just about to kill.
Daisuke felt weird kissing who he thought was Satoshi. He had never done this before and he never thought he wanted to until just then when he got a bulge in his pants. He then got the urge to go farther. Though he didn't know what he was doing, he seemed to be guided. Daisuke put his tongue out; waiting for the one he was kissing to open his mouth. Indeed Krad did and Daisuke explored Krad's mouth.
(What the hell Krad! You know I've wanted this.) Satoshi was angry. Krad had stolen the kiss he had longed for.
When Krad got ready to explore Daisuke's mouth, Daisuke broke the kiss. His eyes grew in terror. He realized that he had been kissing Krad. He felt a little sick.
(Dai transform into me now) Dark was ready to fight Krad.
"It's okay Dai. I'm leaving now. Hmph. Goodbye for now, my precious angel." And with that Krad allowed Satoshi his control and he was his normal self. Satoshi mind was racing. How could Krad do this to me? He knows I like little Niwa? Why? Everything's ruined. Satoshi knew that the one little kiss had caused Krad to develop feelings for Daisuke.
Daisuke on the other hand, was shocked. His first kiss was with a guy. And the guy was Krad and not Satoshi. Oh my god. I can't believe it was a guy that made my first kiss. It was good but still. I like girls don't I?
I had to end it there for everyone to want to read what happens next. I should have the next chapter in a couple of days.
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