Sky's Misquidventure

(Pt. 1)

Deep down in Minecraftian waters, where only squids dare to go, something bad was brewing.

"Lord Squid."

"Yes?"

"Our squidentists have done it."

"Good, very good, our plan is ready then. All we need now is to somehow lure him here…"

Sky was out for a walk collecting flowers for Dawn. He thought it would be a nice gift for her. He was walking home with his arms full of flowers, when he saw a flash come from a lake he was walking by.

"Huh? What was that?" He wondered. "Ahh never mind, probably a reflection from the lake water," he told himself, but his curiosity wasn't satisfied. "I can polish my butter and then go exploring at sundown."

After Sky had gone home, polished his butter, and took a short nap, he went out exploring. He told Dawn that he'd be back before sunrise and not to worry about him while he was gone. Sky took a butter sword just in case he got in any trouble.

He was walking toward the lake when he noticed the flash again. It wasn't coming from the lake, but a diamond block on the shore of the lake next to a chest.

"Sweet! A chest!" He exclaimed, "I wonder what's inside?"

He opened the chest and found that the entire thing was filled to the brim with butter. He took a lot of it because suddenly something happened.

"KA-CHUNK!"

Sky looked down to see what had happened, but it was too late. A piston removed the block he was standing on. He had time for only one reaction before he fell into the deep dark hole that lay beneath him.

"Oh SHIT!" he yelled.

Down, down, down Sky fell into the pitch darkness of the hole. He hit his head on the wall and his vision went blurry. When he reached the bottom of the hole he fell into water. The last thing he saw before he blacked out… was a squid wrapping its tentacles around him, dragging Sky further down.

When Sky woke up, his entire body hurt. He breathed in stale air and felt water all around him. Sky opened his eyes only to see that he was in a cage that was half submerged in water. He sat up and looked around; he saw that squids were swimming all around him. There had to be hundreds of them. About three blocks in front of him was a diamond throne and what was sitting in it was the King Squid. Right behind the throne was a sort of ray-beam shooter thing pointed directly at him.

"Ah, so he has awakened," the King Squid noticed, "How does it feel to be captured by your biggest enemy?"

"Where have you taken me?! And what is that thing behind you!" Sky demanded.

"I can't tell you where we've taken you, but I can tell you that the thing behind me will finally make you powerless," It answered. "We are going to use it on you right now."

This is it, the end, they're going to kill me and win. Sky Army, I'm sorry, I've failed you as your commander. Sky thought.

The squids warmed up the ray-beam shooter. Then two other squids got in a container that seemed to be connected to the ray-beam. The machine started to hum as it got more and more power.

"Commander Sky is now powerless to the might of the Squid Army!" shouted the squid King, "You will be confused and useless against us after your transformation!"

"Wait, transformation?" Sky asked.

But it was too late, the ray-beam fired at him. It hit him with incredible force. Sky was blinded by excruciating pain. It filled his entire body and in his bones. A thousand times more painful than being hit by lightning. He blocked it with his butter sword but it was only absorbed by the beam along with all his other butter. He took on the beam full force.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed in agony.

He was blacking out. His vision was getting blurry, the room was spinning. But then all the pain stopped. He fell over, his consciousness slowly going out. A tentacle flopped out by his face. It seemed to be all sparkly and butter colored. He realized it was his tentacle. They had changed him into a squid.

(Please don't sue me for this; part 2 will come out soon.)

Please critique my writing so I can make it better.

Don't do hate comments it makes me feel sad and then part 2 will never come out.

After this fanfiction is done I will do another one called "Escape from Mob Land" I'll give you the summary for that right below:

Mob Land is a place where only mobs exist, no humans. Anyone who goes in never returns, at least not the same. Join Sky, Deadlox, TruMU, and Captiansparklez as they sent to Mob Land by Herobrine after an encounter with him. When they wake up after their banishment, they find something strange has happened to them… They'd been turned into mobs.

(Note that this adventure takes place after Sky's. So his friends know all about him being a squid.)

I will also do a little bit of artwork for these stories so you can see the setting they are in. I'll probably put them on Sky's real facebook page.

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