Hi first story please tell me what you think, all comments are welcome

'youko'

'Thinking'

What happens now?

She cried tears flowed down her cheeks in a steady flow; the same question burning a scar in her mind. 'Why', why had he done that, was there something wrong with her, wasn't she good enough.

Two hour had passed since she had found them, tongues entwined on top of the night club roof were the whole gang was having a night out, she had just ran from the vicinity not want to face the others, and not wanting to listen to him calling after her saying how much he loved the other woman, and how he was intending on breaking up her soon as he found the right moment. Wondering what she had done wrong Keiko had sat down under an oak tree, in a near by park, sniffing slightly she laid down on her back, allowing the tears to dry and stain her face, her eyes swollen slightly into a light pink colour.

Looking up she could see the night sky through patches in the trees, stars twinkled and winked at her, playing peek-a-boo with the leaves. To her being here seemed so peaceful, so far away from everything that set out to hurt her. Even Yusuke who over the years had continued to chip away from her pieces of her once whole heart, and now after declaring publicly his love for Botan, had left it shattered and to her unable to fix. A sigh escaped her lips and before she drifted into deep sleep lulled gently by the soft wind, three words left her lips 'what happens now.'

Watching as the girl fled the build, pushing past unconcerned dancers after finding Yusuke on the roof with Botan in his arms; he couldn't help but shake his head in disgust. It wasn't that he though his friend repulsive, he just couldn't believe he had let someone as good as Keiko go, he didn't have anything against the Botan but there was something about Keiko that drew people to her, himself included. He began to think of all the things attracted him, her smile, her personality strong but fair, her acceptance of him and every other demon in their group – most humans would run a mile, his fans included.

Yes the fox thief had fallen and hard, he just couldn't get over the detectives stupidity, 'if she was my mate I wouldn't even look at another woman.' Kurama sighed as the fox sprit emerged in his mind,well Youko she isn't are mate and right now I don't think she wants another suitor. Right now I want to slice up the detective for being so blind, you're not the only one both him and Botan are in the bad books with everyone.

It was true, the music seemed to have dulled into a low drone, and everyone was staring icily at the punk and blue haired grim reaper waiting for an answer to why they had devastated Keiko like that. (After the end of his conversation with Youko, Kurama was now staring at them, but with a cool, calm look.) Yusuke straightened himself up and glared back at them before saying "she wasn't suppose to find out like that" a sneer from Hiei was what he got in return "ohh how was she suppose to find out." Yusuke made a low growl sound, "I was planning on breaking up with her" it was now Shizuru turn "so you made her wait all that time for nothing" Yusuke looked saddened slightly "back then we were young" with that he grabbed Botans wrist and took her out of the club "man he really has changed" came the words from Kuwabara as he rubbed the back of his head due to being uncomfortable. With that being said everybody got up to leave, the volume of music had seemed to have been turned up again, but the night was ruined.

Kurama stood outside the club, the slight breeze moving through his hair "are you coming fox" grunted Hiei "yes we should get home" come Yukinas soft voice. He turned to the group, "no I think I'll walk, I have some thinking to do" and with that he turned back on his heel and headed down the street. They all watched him walk away, Shizuru light a cigarette "I think he has a soft spot for her" she said watching the smoke rise slowly into the air, "foolish fox he's been human for to long" Shizuru smirked at him "don't lie Hiei you do to" he glared at her "just because I don't agree with what the detective is doing, doesn't mean I like humans." With that last word Hiei vanished into the night, "well he's getting better, at least he doesn't threaten to kill us anymore" Shizuru said casually "yea maybe for some of us" muttered Kuwabara the two remaining women laughed lightly at him. Shizuru let out a soft sigh "well Yukina looks like your staying at our house, the last train to Genki's has already left, want to watch some movies when we get in." The small ice demon smiled lightly "yes that would be lovely Shizuru" before anything else could be said Kuwabara was on his knees swearing his love for Yukina, and promising to protect her with his life. Suddenly a foot collided with his face sending him flying onto the pavement "stop being a moron an call us a cab" putting one hand through her hair and taking a long drag of her cigarette she sighed to herself 'jeez why do I have an idiot for a brother.'

Walking down the pavement, Kurama seemed in a daze which for him was completely out of character, he just couldn't keep his mind off her and Youko wasn't helping. Why don't you do that human thing, what is it now………oh why don't you court her. Kurama groaned inwardly, haven't you been listening, she wouldn't want to be courted, not this soon after her break up with Yusuke. A humph came from Youko well why don't I talk to her, out of the question, you would make matters worse like I'm going to expose her to a pervert like you.Youko huffed indignantly, me a pervert I'm just good with the ladies, and you are just jealous an image of youko sticking his tongue out came into Kurama's mind so immature what would all those who fear you think.

Sighing again, Kurama took in his surroundings, finding he had walked into the middle of a park; he was about to carry on when something caught his eye. There lying beneath a large oak tree, was no other than Keiko! Her small body was curled up into a ball as she slept peacefully, walking over to her he could see tear stains on her cheeks and he felt his heart break, at the fact that he was helpless to stop her pain. Picking her up gently as if she was some precious jewel, he took he back to her apartment using his demonic speed, then his plants to unlock her bedroom window, placing her gently on the bed leaving behind a kiss on her forehead on a single blood red rose on her pillow; he then left as silently as he had come.

Keiko twitched slightly as the cool wind brushed over her body, early morning sunlight filtered in through the window, blinking slowly she sat up. The night before came back to her, and remembering she had fallen sleep under an oak tree, made her wonder how she got back to her room, was it a dream. No what had happened was real, it was to cruel not to be, looking down onto her pillow, she noticed a single red rose lying there she had an idea who it was from, but why he would take the time to take her home was beyond her. Picking up the flower, she took in its beautiful scent maybe all this wasn't as bad as she thought; grinning to herself she took the flower to some water.

Well what do you think???