Author's note: hello everyone! I'm very excited to begin writing my first story and a Naruto story at that! But first I should explain how I write…
Dialogue looks like this
Name: "Speech", (actions of the characters), thoughts of the character, Jutsu of the character(s)
The order may get mixed up sometimes depending on the situation.
Alright the time that this story takes place in is sometime after Naruto returns in Shippuden…
Everyone this is my first story ever on this site so criticism is appreciated however keep any "flames" civil at least…
Also some characters may be out of character (OOC) this is a fan fiction after all! (Don't worry OOC shouldn't be unbearable) Enjoy!!!
Disclaimer: no sadly I don't own Naruto… if I did, things would've gone a lot different.
"Chapter one: Ichiraku Rumble"
Ayame: "Thank you! Please come again!" (Ayame sighs as the last customer leaves, then she walks into the back room where Teuchi is cooking)
Ayame in Kisame's voice: "Hey Itachi how come I'm stuck disguised as the girl? Wonder how much longer we'll have to wait until the brat gets here… I'm starting to get bored" (Kisame chuckles menacingly as his comment)
Teuchi in Itachi's voice: "Stop complaining… he's on a mission right now so there's no telling how long he'll be gone."
Kisame: "Well certainly we won't just stay here all the time until he gets here, these people have lives don't they"
Itachi: "If you hadn't killed them I could find out…"
Kisame: "Heh. It seemed like the best course of action at the time, at least we won't have to keep an eye on them anymore. I wonder what kind of a mission could take a week? I mean he's still technically a Genin so they can't send him on anything major."
Naruto: (from the other room) "HEY! TEUCHI!!! I'm starving can we get some ramen!? Come on I know you're back there!" (Naruto's stomach was growling so loud you could hear it from the other room)
(Teuchi/Itachi and Ayame/Kisame walk out to the counter with smiles plastered on their faces looking cheery as can be)
Teuchi: "Naruto! Welcome back from your mission. You must be exhausted… huh? Who's this?" (Teuchi asked staring at the pale girl with even paler eyes sitting next to Naruto)
Naruto: "Heh, this is Hinata Hyuuga. She was on my last mission with me. I'm treating everyone to some ramen. Choji should be here soon, but don't worry I'll take care of the bill!"
Hinata: "Thank you Naruto! That's so nice of you." (Hinata was staring at Naruto with admiration almost the whole time)
Naruto: "Yeah it was a real tough mission, we had to recover the blueprints for some lord's palace from some missing ninja that was contracted by a criminal organization to steal it. We ended up have to catch the ninja and make them take us to the organization's base, and then we had to take care of all the criminals and escort them to the lord to be arrested!"
Teuchi: "Wow that sounds like some mission! No wonder you want some of my ramen."
Naruto: "Yeah! Thanks Teuchi!"
Itachi: Well this complicates things a fraction one or more extra distractions to deal with if we don't move quick…hmmm Hinata of the Hyuuga and Choji of the Akamichi (Itachi began thinking of any possible way to complete his mission without too much trouble)
Ayame: "So are you two on a date or something? That's so nice… I mean you look like such a good couple!"
(At this Hinata's face turned a bright shade of red and she looked as if she might faint)
Naruto: "What!!! Ha! No I told you I'm treating my team to ramen! I mean even though Hinata is cute, nice, and…" (Naruto continues on for about three minutes complimenting Hinata on just about everything she ever did)
Hinata: Naruto thinks I'm cute! He thinks I'm nice a-a-and (As Naruto continues to compliment her, Hinata's face turns a deeper shade of red until finally she falls of the stool and collapses on the ground)
Naruto: "Wha! Hinata are you okay! Umph!!!" (Itachi stands undiguised behind Naruto with his fingers jammed in his pressure points on his neck)
Itachi: "Good work Kisame… lets get going." (Itachi scoops up Naruto with one hand and tucks him under his arm)
Kisame: "Heh! Too easy I expected a fight at least." (Kisame performs a hand seal and disperses his disguise)
Kakashi: "Then you'll get one!" (Kakashi runs out from a building across the street, performs some hand seals, and rushes at them with Lightning Blade)
Itachi: "Kisame go…" (Itachi tosses Naruto at him, turns back to Kakashi and performs hand seals)
(Kisame jumps, catching Naruto in the air, breaks through the roof of Ichiraku Ramen, and darts across the rooftops towards the gates)
Itachi: "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu" (Kakashi dodges to one side of the fireball breaks through the wall and hits Itachi dead in the chest with Lightning Blade)
Kakashi: "Got you! Argh!!!" (Itachi explodes and Kakashi is blown through the wall into the back room) "Heh got carried away I guess… Sharingan!!!" (Kakashi pivoted to his left blocking a very hot pot of ramen, catching the kunai right behind it and using it to block three kunai that had bounced off the ceiling. However while he blocked the three kunai, Itachi appeared behind him and kicked him out the back wall)
Itachi: "hmph… huh?" (Kakashi disappears leaving a wooden log in his place)
(Kakashi breaks out of the ground throwing three kunai and shuriken)(As Itachi dodges the projectiles, five ninja dogs break out the ground and attack. Two bite his legs and hold him, two bite his arms and hold him, and the last, the biggest one, stands on his hind legs and holds Itachi's torso in place.)
Kakashi: "Itachi! Give up! you can't fight the entire leaf village. Now tell me where you're taking Naruto. I don't want to kill you." (Kakashi spoke these last words with a grim certainty staring directly into Itachi's eyes which surprisingly were devoid of Sharingan) Why isn't Itachi using Sharingan… what is he up to?
Itachi: "kill me? Don't get full of yourself Kakashi… I won't tell you anything, now die." (Itachi explodes scattering the ninja dogs. Itachi appears in front of Kakashi unleashing a flurry of blows before kicking him through yet another wall, but he disappears in a puff of smoke.)
Kakashi: (from outside Ichiraku) "Shadow Clone Jutsu" (Kakashi and all his clones close in Sharingan blazing) "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu"
Itachi: "hmph…" (Itachi vanishes as twenty fireballs incinerate the area where he once stood)
Itachi: (as he begins performing hand seals, everything turns pitch black) "Shuriken Shadow Clone" (Kakashi grunts and a series of pooping noises from the clones are heard and the darkness recedes) "die Kakashi Hatake…" (Itachi stands behind Kakashi gripping a kunai)
Guy: "Dynamic Entry" (Guy flys through Ichiraku and connects with Dynamic Entry right to Itachi's jaw sending him flying, however he disappeared in a puff of smoke and reappeared holding an unconscious Hinata at Kunai point)
Itachi: "Enough… move and she dies. It would be a waste of time to continue fighting." I can't believe I'm resorting to this… but I can't waste anymore of my energy right now.
Kakashi: "Itachi! Why are you after Naruto now? The nine tailed fox is supposed to be the last Biju extracted. There is no way you have them all!" at least I hope not for all our sakes… at least I can confirm if our spies were correct or not.
Itachi:"The fact that you think you know so much about the Akatsuki is amusing… but you've wasted enough of my time… if you follow me she dies." how did he find out that information… nevertheless he can't do anything about it (Itachi throws down a smoke bomb and disappears)
Kakashi: "Guy we have to report to lady Hokage…"
Guy: "But Kakashi they have both Hinata and Naruto! If we don't follow one of them they may die!"
Kakashi: "if we follow Itachi he'll kill Hinata for sure. He'll likely drop her when he's a safe distance from the village and sure he's not being followed. Besides I need to tell Lady Tsunade the information was correct"
Guy: "Then we follow Kisame! He'll lead us to Itachi anyway. We can't let then desecrate the youth of Konoha!" (Guy's eyes flashed dangerously with the red hot fire of youth and determination) "Wait a minute how did you get any confirmation out of that!?"
Kakashi: "Ha-ha that's my secret! Don't worry they won't get away with it… the Anbu are tracking Kisame now."
Guy: "I just hope they're up to the task…"
Kisame: (from atop a building across from the destroyed Ichiraku ramen) "No I don't think they were! Water Shark bomb Jutsu!"
(Guy and Kakashi split up and dodge to either side of the blast)
Kakashi: "What the hell!!!" why would he come back after he was home free!? Wait where is Naruto something's not right about this! "Shadow Clone Jutsu"
Kisame: "I'll tear you to ribbons!!!" (Kisame draws his sword and starts laughing maniacally carving deep gashes in the ground and the walls when Kakashi or Guy dodge his attacks)
Guy: "That's it! Take my fiery power of youth! Leaf Hurricane!!!" ( Kisame blocked the blow with his sword but was still sent sailing into a building) "There that's all taken care of… ugh! Damn my leg!"
Kakashi: "Guy! Come on we got to get you to the medical center quickly!" (Kakashi picks Guy up gently and starts to head towards the medical center… however not even Sharingan could have predicted what happened next.)
(A huge explosion tears through the entire block demolishing entire building and melting streets and Kakashi and Guy are caught right in the middle of the destructive aftermath!)
At The Hokage Tower
Tsunade: (Tsunade snaps awake after hearing the explosion and stares at the massive fireball lighting up a good portion of the village) "What in the hell was that!!! Shizune get me all available squads even the Genin! Make sure you get Neji and Hinata especially! MOVE!" why does EVERYTHING happen to this village!!!
Shizune: "Yes lady Tsunade!!!" what was that huge blast? Could Orochimaru have returned or is this catastrophe someone else's doing?(Shizune began to run and make clones of herself instructing them to gather everyone)
(Shizune made it outside of the Hokage tower before something caught her attention)
Shizune: "Oh that can't be good!"
Chapter End
O.K. Hope you enjoyed the first chapter! And don't worry more characters and more in depth dialogue will be along shortly, this is only the prologue!
Please let me know how to improve the dialogue and the fight scenes. And some OOC is expected as this is a fan fiction… just a reminder!
Be patient the next chapter is in progress!!!