WARNING: This story contains sexual assaults, foul words and unpleasant scenarios. If you don't want to rip you innocence off, it's better for you to leave this story. But if you want to continue then read at your own risk. You've been warned. (OCC)
Disclaimer: I own nothing except the plot, characters are belong to Masashi Kishimoto.
I was rooting for a series, but it came as two shots.
Plot: (AU)Writing smut stories was Sakura's passion and way of living, she was able to reach the top 5 most viewed writers in Green Mind Pages. A sudden twist in her life when ScorpionRings, her desired writer to vanquished in the near future. Criticized her work for being unrealistic and boring.
What it really feels like...
Written by: BloodhairXPinklocks
Pairing: SasoXSaku
Chapter 1/2
It was a good day and a perfect night to write. Sakura stretched her muscles as she opens her computer after a long day of reading hentai mangas and watching porn. She's now ready to place her special card for the next chapter of her smut story.
Sakura Haruno loves to write smut stories, it was her passion and definition of art. Ino, her friend was the one who discovered her hidden talent and potential. At first she doubts in engaging herself in writing industry, but at the very end, she regrets nothing.
Sakura logged in to her account and replied to her reader's feedback about the last chapter she've published. She smiled, most of the feedbacks she received makes her heart flutter. It really feels good when someone encourages your talent.
When she exited the reviews section, her phone rings.
Calling.. Pig...
When she saw the contact name, she answered it immediately.
"Hey forehead!"
"What now pig?"
"I just finished my shift in the flower shop, I'm on my way to home."
"Yeah, be careful."
"Thanks, by the way have you written the next chapter?" Sakura clicked the 'New chapter' button and typed the chapter's title.
"I'm working on it," Sakura answered.
"That's good, don't publish it until I got home. That's an order from the one who discovered your hidden talent," Ino stated in an arrogant way.
Sakura snorted "Sure you did, but don't expect a 'thank you' from me."
"That was a very brutal of you, Forehead." Ino alleged dramatically.
"I AM brutal," Sakura confirmed.
"Yeah right, whatever you say. I'm going to hang up now, sorry for bothering you," Ino said.
"It's alright, I'm going to message you before I publish it," Sakura said before Ino hangs up.
She started to write with confidence.
'It will be a big blast for sure,' Sakura thought in excitement.
It is the chapter she and her readers were rooting for, the sex scene between her two characters. Sakura is a type of writer who writes smut stories with no romance in it. She likes force sex and Sadomasochism type of stories.
It's been 5 years since she started, she remembers about how Ino pursue her writing skills. Her confidence that time was low that's why she doubted if her knowledge is enough to unravel in public. But now that she had reached the top 5 most viewed writers in Green Mind Pages, her confidence boosted.
She believes that gender matters when it comes to writing smut stories. Instead of saying that she's a woman, she pretended as a man. Her username was named 'Himitsu', a Japanese word that means 'secret'. The only person who knows about her works was Ino since she wanted to be more private about her personal life and identity.
Her works brought her to the Top 5 most viewed writers in Green Mind Pages. She currently leveled as the 4th. ScorpionRings was the number one and obviously the most deviant of all. PervySage was the second, Cursing Gray the 3rd, Himitsu the 4th and TENJI the 5th. It's also a belief that the top 5 in the list are all men. But the funny fact is Himitsu, the 4th was actually a pink haired girl with a 'little' pervert mind.
Sakura was a little bit competitive. She swore to herself that someday, she will reach the number 1 spot and in order to do that, she trespassed the enemy's base. Meaning, she read their works too. Listing all their strength and weaknesses in writing. PervySage was good in writing intimate scenes, it was very descriptive and hot. CursingGray however, has a unique style in writing smut. Every word has a curse on it, but it suits the character's personality well. PervySage and Cursing Gray's weakness is to write a story through third person's point of view. She also noticed that CursingGray is a little bit mean when he receives rants about him. On the other hand TENJI is a type of writer who loves to write romantic sex scenes, intimacy with love. It was her weakness.
She admits that it was difficult for her to see her co-writer's weaknesses. It's stressing her out . But the only person whom she considered as 'pain in the ass' was none other than ScorpionRings, the one that she wants to beat. He pissed her off not because he did something wrong that displeased her, but because he shows no weakness from his works. It was neat and well polished, the sex scenes are realistic and can make you masturbate several times until your body erects all the proteins you have. Something Sakura lacks off.
Once Sakura typed the final word, she rechecked it and changed the errors. She polished the whole chapter for 1 and half hour.
When she felt the satisfaction at her work, she smirked and messaged Ino for the go signal.
"Get ready, Pig."
After a few minutes, she received a reply.
"My body is ready!" Ino replied, then Sakura clicked the 'publish' button.
Sakura's eyes twitched when she heard her phone rings. She opened her left eye while the other one is still begging for a rest.
She fumbled for her phone under the pillow where her head is resting. When she finally reached her phone, she slips it out of her pillow and open it.
Pig calling...
She looked at the time, It was 3:00 am. Why would Ino call her this early?
Her growing curiosity made her clicked the answer button.
"Forehead! Open your computer and see the reviews of your latest chapter, NOW!" Ino demanded.
Sakura hissed "Ugh Pig! You disturbed my dream just to make me look at my reader's reviews?!"
"Go ahead and check it for yourself. God, I think you'll be able to beat ScorpionRings in no time!" Ino said in disbelief.
Sakura's eyes snapped open when she heard the keyword from her friend. She eagerly leaves her bed behind and open her computer.
She logged in to her account and saw her story's chapter 17 reached the 1st place in most trending chapter for 4 hours straight.
She smirked. It's working! She clicked to view the comments, almost 2k reviews and still counting!
The surprising part in that is, most of the popular individuals in the top 5 list have reviewed about their thoughts.
"I can sense a small amount of my writing in this chapter, very well done Himitsu-San," - TENJI 09/14/09 (2:57 am)
"I guess that Himitsu-San will able to take over my rank tomorrow or even Scorpion's rank! No words can describe this masterpiece," PervySage 09/13/09 (11:10 pm)
"This chapter is fucking incredible, you win you gay shit," CursingGray 09/13/09 (11:02 pm)
She ignored most of the review because it states similar feedbacks. What she's looking for is something that will declare her victory. But then she failed to find it.
She was about to shut it down and sleep again until one notification appeared. She gulps when she saw the notification she's been looking for.
ScorpionRings commented on Threads of Semen (Chapter 17)
She gulped before viewing his review.
Coldness wrapped her whole system upon reading his review. It was extremely offensive.
"The sudden change of mood is not quite impressive. Your story was all about force sex, and it's supposed to be force only. But why did you put something romantic? The cursing part was distasteful, it's not even your style. You should have stuck your story in your own style, Himitsu-San." ScorpionRings 09/14/09 (3:06 am)
Sakura came back to her senses when she heard her phone ring once again, she answered it.
"Hey forehead. It looks like the Scorpion doesn't want to hand over your victory. He planted a poison on your review section instead," Ino said with a teasing tone.
"Shut up pig." Sakura hissed with an annoyed tone.
After Scorpion's review, reviews with similar rant flooded her reviews section. Sakura cursed.
Ino chuckled "My my forehead, it's his opinion. You need to accept that you can't please everyone."
Sakura hangs up and shutted her phone down. Her temper is reaching her boiling point, why does he need to say that in public? He could just PM her and give her proper advice, but to dishonor her writing style in the review section?
Sakura chose to send a personal message for the Scorpion writer.
"Good day Scorpion-San, I just wanted to say that your review is quite offensive at my side. It was a literal force sex and I putted a little bit romance for the future chapters. Your review shows that you are accusing me for copying other's style, for your information, I'm not copying anyone. Coincidence can be friendly sometimes."
She sends her message, almost destroying the enter button.
A few minutes later, he replied.
"I didn't accuse you for anything. I believe that I pointed out that you should've stick at your own writing style. Cursing was not your style, descriptive writing was also not your style. We are labeled as outstanding writers because of our 'unique' styles. Review section was made for readers and writers like us doesn't have a right to complain just because We didn't like the review."
She suddenly realize what she have done. She felt guilty that made her dumbfounded.
Sakura came back to reality when she received an another reply from the Scorpion writer.
"Oh, yeah, one more thing. It's kinda odd for a man to rant like that in private message. Why didn't you reply to my review instead? That gave me a hint, Hi-mit-su-chan?"
She froze. Her whole system malfunctioned and hands began to tremble.
Sakura closed her laptop while catching her breath.
No.. He can't determine her gender just like that.
After 3 days
"Sucks to be you, Forehead." Sakura pinched the bridge of her nose then rubs it.
"You are not helping." Sakura said while searching for a beta.
Ino lays herself on Sakura's bed "That Scorpion guy surely has a tough nose."
"And I wish that I could break it like a pulp." Ino chuckled at her friend's answer while pulling herself up again. She faced her pink haired friend and raise an eyebrow.
"What are you doing?" Ino asked while taking a peek on Sakura's laptop.
"Looking for a beta." Sakura answered thriftily.
"Since when did you need a beta?" the blonde woman asked.
"Now, obviously."
"Your plots are perfectly fine, you have no problems in your grammar either. So why would you-" a realization hits the Yamanaka girl.
"Is this..."
"Don't you da-"
"have something to do with that Scorpion guy?" Ino stated while smirking at her friend.
Sakura didn't answer.
Ino laughed that made her friend growls "Oh my, The famous narcissist pink haired girl had her pride swollen!"
Sakura gave her blonde friend a deadly glare "Pig."
Ino throw her hands up in defeat "Alright alright, you are so hot headed."
Sakura proceeded to her unfinished business. Hiring a beta was never in her plan, even in her fresh writing years. Well, maybe because she didn't want anyone to know about her kinkiness? Or she doesn't want to accept someone else opinion? Maybe both.
She began to make a dummy account. Of course she can't use her real account in finding beta, Himitsu's account was too famous. She will never let her guard down AGAIN.
After making a dummy account, she began to search the best of best beta readers on the site, but none of them are interested to work with her since she's a newbie. Lazy self centered assholes.
'You ARE self centered'
'Shut up, Inner.'
Instead of pushing herself to find a beta (almost begging the beta to help her), she proceeded to her plan B. She made a one shot smut story and published it immediately. Of course, she didn't use her professional writing style, she chose to be like a newbie again. She made her story a predictable shot.
It took 2 hours to a review to show unlike in Himitsu's account. She read the first review.
"Nice." OldPup19985
What a nice review.
Sakura sighed and turned her head to face Ino whose busy texting.
"What are you doing?" Sakura asked.
"Texting?" Ino answered. Great.
"I mean, who is it?"
"Deidara is asking me out." Ino stated.
"That would be incest." Ino stopped from tapping her phone and gave Sakura a deadly glare.
Sakura chuckled "I'm kidding, Pig."
"Hey Sakura, instead of heating your chair. Why don't you come with us so the sunlight can hit you once?" Ino suggested while pulling herself up from Sakura's bed.
"Not until I find a beta. Besides, a date should compose 2 people only. I don't want to be a nuisance." Sakura stated while typing.
"That's the problem." Ino said. Sakura stopped from typing and turn her swivel chair around to face her blonde friend once again.
"Why?"
"I want you to come because.." Ino cut her own words off. Sakura watched her friend's expression and she can easily predict that she's hesitating to tell her something.
She saw Ino blushed, it must be something embarrassing.
"I want to settle down with Deidara..."
"And s-"
"On bed."
Sakura blinked "Wait what?"
"You heard me forehead, don't play du-"
"Are you out of your mind?!" Sakura utter that made Ino growls.
"I LOVE him! Okay?!" Ino stated.
Sakura didn't respond. She knows Ino too well and she also knows that Ino will never made a decision that she'll later regret. Ino was been her best friend for 15 years straight that's why it's different for Sakura lend Ino to Deidara this early.
She gulps, what should she do? If she forbids Ino and goes on her way, it will obviously result in a fight. It can cause a crack to their friendship. However, if she supports her decision. It can be either Ino's happily ever after, or she'll be a damsel in distress whenever Deidara leaves her and of course, instead of a prince, she will be a replacement.
Sakura sighed in defeat, Ino is just staring at her. Waiting for her answer.
"Alright Pig, I will do this for you," Sakura smiled.
Ino's face lightens up, "Really?!"
"But in one condition." Sakura paused.
"Anything forehead." Ino stated while listening to the pink haired writer.
"You need to tell me the full details when you have sex with Deidara. Every sweat, every thrust and tell me what it if feels like to reach your first orgasm,"
"That's too much," Ino said with a pout.
"My permission upon handing you over to a man's hand is pretty expensive. It's even," Sakura said with authority.
"What a psycho, you sure will do anything in writing smut," Ino stated while combing her hair with her hand.
"What will I do by the way? Record your first intimate experience for you to post it on your blog?" Sakura joked.
"Not exactly," Ino said sarcastically and raises her two fingers.
"You will play 2 roles."
"That's not good."
"I'll pay you."
"Count my tuition fee for the next school year."
"FOREHEAD!"
"Learn how to take a joke!" Sakura said with a teasing tone.
"Your first ro-" Sakura cut Ino's words off.
"Let me guess, You want me to teach you a few sex positions," Sakura said while crossing her arm.
"Teach me how to satisfy a man more precisely," Ino stated seriously.
"Alright, alright," Sakura said while smiling deviously.
"Your role number 2, the most important role that you must do," Ino proceeded.
"What is it?" Sakura asked.
"Distract Deidara's cousin, Sasori Akasuna."
to be continued...