Hey you guys this is my first story and I worked for a while on it and was hoping that if you reviewed you could go easy on me, that's all so read on. Ta Ta for now.
Once in a small town in texas there lived a man named Sammy Valdez. Sammy seemed like any ordinary
man but he had been through many years of pain. This small town is not where his story starts though, Sammy's story starts at "St. Agnes Academy for Coloured Children and Indians" in New Orléans. As he recalled it was his first day at his new school and he had planned to stay in the corner and not get noticed but that all changed when he saw her. She was amazing he couldn't decided what he liked best about her was it her flowing brown hair or was it the way the light shimmered off of her already beautiful chocolate skin. Sammy knew at that moment that he loved her and that staying in the corner would not help to impress her.
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It was time for attendance and Sammy was nervous, this was the first impression he was going to make on her "Andrew Sorthai," "Present" "Stephen Larnest," "Present" "Emma Gardenee," one after another the teacher called their names. "Hazel Levesque," so that was her name it was just as magnificent as the rest of her. "Harold Coope", "present" one more name then it was Sammy, how would he get her attention? "Danniel Farlen," "Present" "Sammy Valdez" "HEY O SAMMY VALDEZ IN THE HOUSE OR uh school I guess" "hee hee hee" even though the other kids were laughing all he heard was her giggle a few times then stop because the teacher started to yell 'well it's something' Sammy thought to himself.
Hey so what do you think if you like it can you tell me because I want to know if I should continue it or not.