So I tried to take a swing at a Vampire Diaries fanfiction, tell me how you like it!
My eyes flashed open. It took me a moment to realize what was going on. I was on my back in an alley. The stars and moon shown bright above my head.
I sat up rather slowly and pushed my hair out of my eyes. I then realized my brown hair was smeared with something sticky. I lifted my hand away to look at what was on my hair. It was red, it was blood.
The blood smelled delicious, that was odd. I realized there was a hunger inside of me; I had never felt it before. I brought my hand closer to my mouth and without really thinking licked the blood. The taste was revolting at first, and then it got better. I licked my hand until there was no more.
I glanced behind me and realized there was a pool of blood where my head was laying. Then I remembered what had happened. I had been chased my three people, the school jerks. I had stolen an iPod from the leader, Bryan. He had stolen it from my friend, Eleanor, the previous day.
After I took it I ran, they gave chase. I had quickly skidded into the alley before slipping. I remembered my skull had cracked, I heard the crunch of the bones before everything went black. I think I… died.
I checked my head, it felt fine, my skull wasn't broken. Then I smelt the blood again. I dipped my hand into the pool of blood and brought it too my lips. I felt something sharp pierce my fingers as I eagerly sucked the blood. I didn't know what it was and I didn't care. I continued to do this until every drop of blood was gone. But it tasted stale… I wanted fresh blood… and revenge.
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I was in his car, Bryan's car. I don't know what lead me here, the hunger I guess. He was with his buddies at the pool hall. Then outside the car I heard footsteps. I sank down behind the driver's seat and Bryan unlocked the car and got in. He put the key in the slot and the lights turned on.
"Hello Bryan" I said. Bryan looked into the rearview mirror and I noticed his eyes widened. I must have been a sight. My mouth and around it were stained with my blood, my hair a dried bloody mess, fangs out, eyes dark and veins popped out around them. "Bye Bryan" Then I sunk my fangs into his neck. I drank his blood; it tasted so good and fresh. Bryan stopped fighting after a few seconds as I drank all the blood out of him.
I exited his car quickly pulling my hood up over my head. My face was clean from blood. I took out my phone and texted my sister, Samantha, to let me in the house as soon as I ran home, I ran fast.
"Savannah!" she gasped quietly as she opened the door. "It's after midnight, you're lucky Mom has a late shift at work!
"Well I've had a long night" I told her.
Samantha sighed, "Just get in here" she said and I walked inside.
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School was agonizing. I could hear people's heart's pumping blood all day long. Luckily I wasn't hungry. I ate before school, a janitor I think.
"Savannah!" Eleanor shook me gently. I had got caught up listening to her blood. I shook my head.
"Yeah?" I asked.
"I was asking you if you know anything about Bryan's death! You took back my iPod from him that night" she asked me.
"Oh yeah, well I stole it back, ran down an alley and got away, that's it." I lied. I had gotten that down. I didn't feel anything for his death; it was like I turned off my emotions.
"Well he was found in his car with his neck nearly torn out, police suspect an animal got into his car, attacked him" Eleanor said. The rest of the day went by pretty smoothly.
Then I was walking home after school. I was listening to music, trying not to listen to people's blood pumping. Suddenly I was pushed behind a house. I ripped my ear buds out of my ear and looked at who pushed me. Unintentionally I let out my fangs and hissed. I realized it was Cole, a guy in my class.
"So it was you!" Cole said. "You're the killer!"I stared into his eyes.
"Be quiet! You don't know I've been killing people, and you will leave me alone" I told him, this had worked before I don't know how but it did.
Cole laughed. "That won't work on me." Then I understood what he was. A vampire like me, he was holding me against the wall with such force, no human could do that.
"Gosh, I thought I was the only one" I told Cole.
"Savannah I mean it, you've got to stop killing people!" Cole said. "It's wrong! Think about their families!"
"I don't need to think about their families, I don't feel anything!"
"You turned it off, Savannah, I know that seems like the easy way out-"
"Just shut up! Let me go!" I shouted trying to push him off of me.
"I'm older and stronger" Cole said still holding me down. "Listen to me Savannah, one of these times you're going to slip, what if you kill your sister? Or mother? What about Eleanor?"
"Shut up!" I shouted still trying to get away. I wasn't going to slip!
"You need to turn your emotions back on," Cole said. "I know it will hurt, you'll feel the other's pain, but you have to or you going to go to a very dark place."
"I will never!" Cole sighed staring at me for a moment. Then he released his hold on me.
"Fine, but don't come running to me when you hurt somebody you care about" He said. Cole turned around and vanished.