ok so dis iz my firt story so go eazy on me plez
hello mu nam is Yu Shizune Dark Lady Pearl, i liv in the hidden leaf billage. i am 17 and dis is my first day heere
i walked around seeing alll da peoples cauze i have good eye sight and shet with mah red ayas.
"hey" saud sumon who looked all cool "hi" i replied examinug hin "my nam is SASUKE ansd u?" he asked me "it iz Yu Shizune dark lady pearl, plz call me Yu." I sad but den run awf cuz my firsnd were hut
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Ok do tell me how it iz111 NO FLAMxx CONTIN WHEN I GOT 2 GOOD REVOWS!111