Authors Note: This
isn't an author fic, but I do have some comments, at times…
Oh yeah, and please keep in mind that I have only seen the
second half of season 4, and all that's been aired so far of season 5. So if
there are any continuance errors please forgive me!
Distribution: Ask, please: korse@home.com
Rating: PG-13: for one swear word, at the end, and one
author comment (you'll hopefully know it when you read it :p )
What you need to know before reading:
Name: Person speaking
*authors comments or thoughts*
Actions and stuff *descriptive, huh?*
(a note from the author, usually to explain something)
Scene Change
Now, on with the story:
What I Think the
Season 5 Finale Should Be: The Fan Fic
*coming to theatres near you: March, 2001*
She who cannot be named
Wants to use the Key in vain
But fate shall intervene
And another like her shall rise
In a rage one does the deed
In it's wake much will change
Those who are not to be shall perish
But if they are worthy:
Another life, another time
For now the world reverts back
Into it's past, to change greatly
In the end: life continues,
No one will ever know. ~The Codex (that's the big
prophecy book, right?)
Glory's mansion:
2:00 AM
Glory: I need the Key! The planets are moving to fast,
there's only a week left!
Dreg: Would you like me to bring you the slayer, beautius
Glorificus.
Glory: Put a sleep spell on her first, a semi-useless
minion like you couldn't handle her.
Dreg: I will go prepare the spell.
Dreg leaves the room *presumably to go prepare the spell,
but you never know with minions, these days*
Outside Buffy's
House: 2:38 AM
Spike is standing on the lawn, watching Buffy's bedroom
window *I don't even want to know what he's thinking he could be doing with her
at that moment…eww!* He suddenly turns and looks towards the tree. (the one
where Buffy first caught him standing outside her house) Spike walks towards
the tree, yelling mockingly for the 'nasty little demon to come out and fight.'
As Spike goes around one side of the tree Dreg darts out from around the other
side. With surprising speed, he runs towards the door to Buffy's house. He uses
a spell to break through the uninvited barrier, and puts a spell on the door as
Spike comes charging in… only to be knocked onto the ground, still outside. *It
turns out Dreg isn't as useless as we had previously thought, hmm*
Inside Buffy's
House: 2:45 AM
Dreg creeps up the stairs, accidentally peeking into Dawn's
room, before finding Buffy's room and going in.
Flash to a shot of
Dawn's Door
Dawn's door opens, and she steps out. She looks towards
Buffy's door, to see it closing. Dawn shrugs and goes back into her room.
Buffy's Room: 2:50 AM
Dreg starts to chant semi quietly to Buffy's sleeping form.
He sprinkles something on to her, and she sneezes, shifting about. Dreg starts
to back away, looking like he's about to turn and run. He walks back over to
the bed, as Buffy seems to go back to sleep.
Dawn meanwhile has began to wonder if maybe she should go
check on her sister.
Hallway Upstairs:
3:01 AM
Dawn's door opens, and she steps into the hallway. She
stops, looking like she's listening for something, before walking towards
Buffy's room. The camera follows her, as she walks. Dawn is now in front of
Buffy's door, she looks likes she's debating whether to go in. Buffy's door
opens and Dreg steps out, half carrying, half dragging the sleeping slayer.
Dawn: (yelling) What did you do to my sister?
Dreg backhands Dawn, who goes flying into the hallway wall.
She slumps down, unconscious.
Dreg: Insolent child. *Ohhh! Looks like Dreg's getting a
taste for power!*
Dreg heads towards the stairs, with Buffy.
Flash To Backdoor of
Buffy's House: 3:10 AM *took Dreg a long time to get Buffy down the stairs,
eh?*
We see Dreg open the door, and drag Buffy outside. He's
going out the back to avoid Spike.
Glory's Mansion: 4:38
AM
We see Glory sitting on her bed, with Buffy laid down on the
bed, still asleep. Glory appears to be hypnotizing Buffy, saying something to
the effect of: "Give me my Key, and you shall not perish. Give me my Key,
etc…" This is being spoken in Latin. *I know I've always wondered about
Glory's sanity, but I'm sure of it now: she's insane!* Glory has now reached
the end of the hypnotizing. She says something in Latin, meaning "Wake up
and do my bidding." The camera zooms in on Buffy's face. She isn't moving,
no eyelash fluttering, nothing. Glory being her insane self is getting fed up.
Glory: Why won't you tell me where the Key is?!
The camera flashes
back and forth as Glory paces
Glory: (zooms in on her face) Stupid, stupid, stupid!!
She starts to punch and beat up the still sleeping Buffy,
getting herself more and more worked up. You can tell that Glory needs to suck
someone's brain out, before she goes all limp, like she did in 'Checkpoint'.
Glory: Why aren't you listening to me? (now shouting) Why
not?!
Glory gathers some magical fire *she is a God, and
seems to have some powers, so we'll say she has the power to gather and throw
fire, too. And besides, it is my story* Glory now throws the fire at
Buffy, who starts to burn, catching the bed on fire as well. Glory seems to not
even see the fire, as she continues to beat Buffy up.
Flash to the doorway
of Glory's bedroom: 5:10 AM
Dreg walks in, but seeing that Glory needs a person to suck
the brain out of, he leaves.
Glory's Bedroom: 5:27
AM
Dreg walks into the room dragging a male taxi driver. (I'm
making an assumption that Glory can only take the brains of men, since that's
all we've ever seen her drink from)
Taxi Driver: Please let me go! I didn't do anything!
Dreg continues dragging him towards Glory, who is now lying
on the floor. Buffy is still unconscious.
Taxi Driver: I have a wife who needs me! Please just let me
go!
Dreg has now reaches Glory, who proceeds to suck the brain
out of the poor taxi driver. He gets up, mumbling about having to go drive his
taxi, before stumbling out of the door.
Glory: Much better! Now remove the sleep spell from Buffy!
Dreg reaches into his pocket, pulling out a small bag. He
sprinkles the contents onto Buffy, whose body shimmers, but doesn't move. He
does some chanting and turns towards Glory.
Dreg: It is done, Glorificus.
Dreg leaves. Glory then leans towards Buffy
Glory: (says this in a sweet voice, like she used in
'Checkpoint') Wake up, sweetheart.
Buffy still doesn't move.
Glory: Did you hear me? I said 'wake up!'
Glory starts to shake Buffy slightly. When Buffy still
doesn't move Glory puts a hand to her neck, checking her pulse. Glory gasps.
Glory: (with no emotion) Oh, shit.
That's Chapter 1, did you like it? Please review, and tell
me if you'd like me to continue or not! Thanks!