Uzumaki Naruto The Race to Kamikage Chapter 1: One little change a whole new story, a naruto fanfic

Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ANY OF THE MULTIPLE UNIVERSES THAT I WILL HAVE HIM VISITING… THIS IS THE LAST TIME I PUT A DISCLAIMER FOR THE FIC SO BELIEVE IT (I HATE THAT SAYING)

Ok lets get this started with an overview: Uzumaki Naruto, son of Uzumaki Kashina and Namikaze Minato. When he meets the Kyuubi no Kitsune he is given a new dream of greatness… the Kamikage. Harem, super Naruto, and bloodline limits (lots of them)

UZUMAKI NARUTO: RACE TO KAMIKAGE

One little change… a whole new world

(Emo point of view)

Blood…

There was blood everywhere… how could he…how?

"ITACHI!!" came the yell, the cry of pain heard in the hearts of people all over the city.

As Uchiha Sasuke sat there on his knee's, his arms propping him up, on the outer edge of the Uchiha district… the, former, Uchiha district, he kept thinking of what he saw and what he was forced to see…

"The brother you wanted to spend time with has done this…"

"Nii-san… Nii-san why?"

"To ascertain your "capacity"…"

sob, sob, hiccup, "How could you…?"

"I continued acting as the elder brother you desired, and became your companion to see if that potential lies hidden. You found me disagreeable and hated me…"

"I… I never hated you… I could never have hated you… then." Came the whisper, trying to talk to the past.

"You continued wanting to surpass me. Because of that I will let you live."

"I didn't want to surpass you…" and then, sitting up tall and yelling to the gods and heavens that my have been, "I WANTED TO BE RECOGNIZED BY YOU! I WANTED TO HAVE YOU AS MY BROTHER!!"

"…for my sake."

Falling back to the earth he started to sob and hiccup once more, falling into sleep once more… "for your sake… to forget your guilt……" and he knew no more."

It was ten days later that he managed to return to the academy, it was ten days later that changed so many lives… for the better or worse I wonder.

In front of him he could hear Shikamaru and Choji talking about food, what candy Choji wanted. Behind him he could tell someone was talking about him… His family.

'No I shouldn't be here, learning all these useless things. I should be out training…Why should I train… what am I trying to do… why am I even still alive?'

Then a voice filtered into his mind like an echo, "if you want to kill me…hate me… curse me…cling to your pitiful life… hate…hate…hate…"

"…are you listening Uchiha, what are you doing? Class hasn't even started yet? This is so troublesome."

"Awe, Shikamaru, stop…" said the 'big boned' Choji as he ate his chips, "Munchmunchmunch… Let him be as…munch gulp… as emo as he wants to be. Hmmm I need another bag."

Sasuke didn't know why he did what happened next. Maybe it was just how soon it was since he lost his family, maybe it was a side affect of the Mangekyo Sharingan Itachi had used on him, or maybe it was the fact that he knew he needed to be strong and to do that he would have to be the alpha male, the top dog, and make his superiority know… but really who knows.

Turning to the Akimichi, as he looked through his back pack for another bag of chips, Sasuke let out a growl, "What do you know fat ass?!" this earned an immediate glare from Choji and a nearly unheard 'troublesome idiot,' from Shikamaru, "Did you're your whole worthless clan get butchered like the pigs that they are?" and he sent his left fist into the larger boys gut, "because when they are," now he brought his right around and landed a blow to the boys face, "and you are the last pig standing," as he put his arms on the boys shoulders and brought him into a knee slam, "then maybe you will understand a fraction of what I do now." As Shikamaru tried to run in and stop the boy Sasuke turned around and grabbed him by the shirt and slammed him into the adjacent wall, giving a good right to the boys gut and a left to the head straight on, slamming the pineapple haired head into the wall and the boy out cold, "I'm not being 'emo,'" as he tuned back to Choji, who was struggling to stand up, leaning on a desk, "I'm becoming the avenger that I need to be. A pig like you wouldn't understand a thing like that. I will become strong and I WILL kill brother… and anyone else who gets in my way." And with that he gave one last punch to the hefty boy, the sound of cartilage breaking under his fist.

After that he turned around and started walking to the door, the small crowed that gathered for the brawl moving out of the way for him. When he got to the door it slid open and…

(Pink-Haired devil's point of view)

'Oh I can't wait to tell Ino… ooohh today's the day I let them know that I'm in love with Sasuke-kun!' Haruno Sakura KNEW she was in love. She was going to let Ino and the others know too. What wasn't to like about Sasuke, he had the best grades in the class, he was from a prestige's family, though they were all dead, and he was cute, 'CHA more like fucking hot!' Yes, Sakura was in love, she would do anything for the pretty bo- I mean Uchiha boy.

As she was nearing the school she saw Ino waiting out font for her while talking to a couple of other girls. Seeing the pink haired girl she yelled over "Sakura-chan, come on over, Mahiko-chan was just telling me about her cousin Hayate who was made into a special Jounin recently."

Letting off a big smile she looked at the taller girl, "That's great, do you think you'll get him to teach you some ninja stuff?"

The taller girl, Mahiko, sighed, "I hope so, I don't know how much of this stupid little academy I can handle. If he teaches me then I'll be out of here in no time. Ino's dad won't let her out so fast but maybe your parents can teach you and get out of here with me."

Sakura blushed a little, "My father wasn't a shinobi and my mother hasn't fought for the eight years my parents have been married. I doubt she even remembers the basics from the academy?"

"Oh." Said the girl curtly before leaving, they wouldn't hear about it at all but the girl did get out of the academy early. A year after that she was captured by missing nin… a year after that she was killed when Konoha hunter nin's stormed their camp. The hunter nin's killed her out of mercy, having been beaten, tortured, raped and defiled in a thousand different ways her mind was gone, only a shell of what she was… her cousin never used the sword he used to end her life again, instead keping it as a reminder that he had failed Konoha, himself, and his family.

"Sakura," said an exasperated Ino as they walked into the classroom, "here's your next lesson, never admit that your parents are non-shinobi, even though your mother was one a lifetime ago. In Konoha and other countries it will make you seem like nothing more than a civilian, even if you're a ninja.

Sakura just gave a little blush in return, "Sorry Ino-chan."

"…hhaaa, what are we going to do with you Sakura-chan. Just don't apologize next time I correct you like that, it'll ruin your self-esteem."

Nodding her head, "Yes Ino-chan, I'm sor-"

"SAKURA!" yelled Ino as she cut the other girl off. They looked at each other with for a second before they started to giggle, "Come on Sakura-chan, we have to make it to class, that new assistant teacher starts today. Hmmm, what was his name?"

"It was Iruka, Ino-chan. He just made Chuunin at the last exam too. Oh and Ino, I need to talk to you after classes today, ok?"

"Yeah gotcha, you and you smart little forehead need to talk to little'ol me."

As they neared the class they could here someone yelling and the sound of a fight,

"Sakura, you hear that?" said Ino as she ran a little farther ahead to the classroom door.

"Uh hu." Was Sakura's smart reply as she walked up behind Ino, "Sounds like someone is fighting in there."

Giving her pink haired friend a devious look Ino said to her, "Well lets go watch the slaughter fest." And with that she threw open the door and they were face to face with Uchiha Sasuke, the psycho- sorry I mean Uchiha Sasuke, the prodigy himself.

'This is your first chance to show him you care Sakura, DON'T miss this chance' And at the same time both her and Ino yell out to the boy, "SASUKE-KUN!" They both looked at each other with questioning eyes, before turning back to the Uchiha, only to be cut off before they can get anymore out of their mouths.

"What do you think you two are doing?" said the Uchiha, Suddenly having his anger turn on the two girls, "If you have time to be gawking at me then you should be out doing something productive, like training. You women need to train twice as much as any man needs to. Now MOVE! The strong have no time for weakling like you two."

When neither of them gave any sign of moving he moved in to attack them like he had Choji, only to have his arm held by a portly Chuunin with a goatee and a bandana around his head that sported his forehead plate, "Sasuke! What do you think you are doing?" he asked, seeing a knocked out Nara and a bleeding Akimichi, "What did you do here?" he asked, more than a little angry at the boys actions, and the fact that he wasn't there to stop it… 'Damn, this could cost me my job Uchiha.'

"Let go of me, I'm done with this stupid little academy, I'm going to do some serious training and leave this stuff to the babies." He tried to pull away, but when the man would not give an inch he tried to attack, only to receive a quick chop to the back of his neck and nothingness after that. Sakura, Ino, and surprisingly a pale eyed girl were shocked by what he did and said, something would be happening... and soon…

They say that a butterfly flapping its wings can cause a sandstorm on the other side of the world… well, Sasuke didn't know it at the time, but he had just flapped his wings… and they were much bigger than any butterfly wings I have ever seen. All around Konoha things were happening …

(Omniscient)

Fifteen minutes after the incident occurred Akimichi Choza, Nara Shikaku, and Yamanaka Inoichi, all of whom were enjoying lunch when they got the news, were picking up the former two's children. The boys in question were in bad shape, Choji had a broken nose, wrapped in a strange looking cast, while Shikamaru had his head wrapped up, most of his hair having been cut off to treat the wound. Both of them suffered from wounded prides.

As the children walked a little farther ahead, not even speaking to each other, the three fathers stayed back so they could talk unheard. Though one would think the booming voice of the usually calm Choza would have carried across the whole village, "Who does that gaki think he is, attacking our children like that!" he said with clenched fists.

"Calm down Choza, we just need to think this through a little that's all." Was Inoichi's response, "The boy just had a major loss. His entire family is gone… his entire Clan."

"I don't care! Assault is assault! You know what, that boy wasn't even supposed to be back yet, the Saindaime wanted to wait a week longer to try and talk to they boy some more, but the damn elders and the counsel-" he was cut off by Shikaku.

"You mean the Counsel that I am a member of?" he said nonchalantly, "It wasn't the members of the counsel… well all of us. Your father, Choza, as well as old man Yamanaka," this earned a grinning glare from the blond in the group, "and myself all agreed that the boy needed time. Heck, we even had the support of Hiashi and Morino clans were on our side. That's two of the noble clans, each with two votes, two clans which have experts in the art of the mind in them, each of which got a vote, and the Nara, bringing the vote up to seven for us, but we were simply overruled."

"Gekko, Inuzuka, Mitarashi, Shiranui, Yuhi, and, for some reason, the Aburame were all against us. With that they tied us up, the Aburame getting two votes from being a Noble clan… a creepy clan, yes, but noble none-the-less, and all the others getting a vote. So it came down to the Elders and the Hokage. The Hokage put in his three votes for us, but the elders put the four votes they get between the two of them against us."

"Wait, wait, wait!" said Inoichi as they walked towards the Akimichi homes, "Your saying all the others clans didn't listen to two clans which specialize in the ways of the mind? And what's with the Yuhi, they are a bunch of brainy Genjutsu users, they know almost as much about the mind as the Morino, how could they mis dyignose the boy. Shouldn't they have-"

"They didn't though," said Shikaka, interrupting his blond friend, "an that's all that matters in the end. Perhaps the clan head went against the rest of their wishes, maybe they were bribed, in the end it doesn't matter… It's the Aburame that have me worried… their usually smarter and more level headed than that, nothing ever moves them away from the path of logic."

"Yeah, I see what you mean." Said a calmer Choza, "Like what they said about the… their position after the Kyuubi attack, and with dealing with the Kumo incident. If anything I would have thought the Hyuga would want the boy back in the school, not the Aburame."

"Please, the Hyuga just wanted to keep the boy away from training as long as possible. Their afraid of him, just like they were afraid of every other Uchiha. The whole Itachi thing has them on edge… Sasuke is Itachi's brother after all, so Sasuke will clearly have pleanty of potential. AHH! its all too troublesome!" was how Shikaku ended.

Hearing this Inoichi decided to change the subject, "So what are you guys going to do about your boys now. That Uchiha did a number on them… you think they'll be ok?"

Choza clenched his fist at this, and though it was slight one could see Shikaku's eyes narrow, "Well," started the Akimichi, "I think its time my boy started to take his training a little more seriously. The Uchiha, by all accounts wasn't even using Taijutsu, he was brawling like some civilian. I know the academy hasn't gotten to teach them much yet, but they should have been able to stop some kid if they had kept their heads. Yeah… Choji and I are going to start working on chakra control, working out, and his chakra levels. Maybe if he gets good enough in the next year I'll start to teach him clan jutsu's and fighting styles."

"As troublesome as it is… Choza's right. My boy has a good mind, just like ever other Nara male, its time we started to bring it forward so he can use it. I was planning to wait till the year he graduates to start teaching shadow techniques… but maybe I should start sooner than later."

They walked a little while longer in silence, entering the Akimichi household, until Shikaku turned to Inoichi, "I know it may be a bit soon for her, but maybe you should start to teach Ino while she's at home as well. I mean, once you can understand those damn textbooks you read for fun, then chakra and other shinobi basics are like reading a bedtime story."

Inoichi stared at the man a second, thinking, "Yeah… maybe. Being a shinobi isn't going to be easy for her even if she is the top kunoichi in her class. See you guys tomorrow, my mission starts at about four tomorrow so maybe I'll come over and see what you guys plan on doing with your two brats."

"Yeah, yeah, our brats will be able to pass on the clan names at least," was Choza's reply as he grinned at the blond man.

Inoichi passed on a smile as well, "That is unless she refuses to let Shikamaru keep his last name. I mean have you ever seen the two of them, bickering like an old married couple already."

"I know," Shikaku groaned in reply, "it reminds me of when Yoshino and I met, and she was at least a year behind me. My boy will have to deal with her even during the academy."

"Yeah… can't wait for that wedding." He said as he stood up and walked for the door, "at least her father won't have to keep a kunai to the boys back, she'll have that covered by herself." Chuckling he left.

Later that night Choza asked is son what size he was, ready to get him a set of Akimichi armor, Shikaku told his son that they would be playing some sort of strategy game every night, shougi, Go, whatever. And lastly Ino was introduced, much to her horror, to her new familial partners: Psychology and Sociology… all one thousand, seven hundred, and forty three pages of them.

That day, after the academy let out

"Ino-chan! Over here!" yelled Sakura, not as sure of herself as she was during the morning. "Oh I love him, I know I do, but… would he ever want to be with someone as weak as me?"

"Hey Sakura?" said Ino as she walked towards the bench where they always met after classes.

"Yeah Ino?" she responded as she stopped asking herself such questions.

"You like Sasuke, don't you?" the pink haired kunoichi in training went wide eyed as Ino asked her that, "Don't even try to deny it," she cut in, seeing the girl try to protest, "its written all over your face now."

Looking at the smirking Ino, Sakura lowered her gaze to a puddle next to the bench, "How did you figure it out?" she asked simply.

"It was from this morning, you said you wanted to talk to me about something, then when you saw Sasuke there was how you acted… how we acted, you've never done that before."

"So," she said, looking up as something clicked in her head, "does that mean you like him too?" a slight blush in her face, as she hoped it wasn't true.

"Well yeah! I think every girl in our class does… well everyone except Hinata, but she seems to like a boy in one of the older classes. But after what he said today…"

"Yeah," said Sakura sadly, "He doesn't want to waste his time with weak people, but… but everyone's weak to him, I know it!"

"So?" asked Ino, getting a confused look from Sakura, "We just need to become as strong as he is."

The pink haired girl nodded her head, thinking, when a blush suddenly came over her face, "Ummm, Ino? There might be one… little problem there." The Yamanaka looked at her friend confused, wondering what problem there could be, "Well there are two of us and…"

"And… what?" asked the girl not understanding.

"Well there are two of us, but… only one Sasuke." As Sakura's meaning became clear the girl blushed something fierce.

"Oh! That!" was the intelligent response.

"I mean, we would need to get strong enough to even have him notice us… but one day I want to fall in love and get married just like my mother did. You can't do that if the person your in love with doesn't love only you."

Looking kinda sheepish Ino rubbed the back of her neck, "Yeah… I guess so… but… but we still need to get strong anyway, so we can worry about that later, right?"

Sakura gave a big smile, "Yeah! Listen lets make a promise! Lets promise that we will both get strong before we try and get Sasuke's love!"

Ino's smile could rival another certain blonds, "Yeah! Hey, you said your mom used to be a shinobi before, right?"

Sakura's smile fell a little, "Well once upon a time anyway… why?" she asked.

"Well according to daddy once a person becomes a shinobi they never forget, its like, their minds take stuff in and we remember through there, but our bodies never forget something once we've mastered it. He said that even in the course of the academy we will learn to call up chakra and fight that even after we graduate we could go years without using the stuff and still be able to use it to some extent. I don't know all the details, but that's what he told me, he said that's the kind of stuff I'll have to know to learn the family jutsu."

Sakura was in awe, sure Ino was the strongest kunoichi in the class, but she had never heard something so…. Intelligent! out of her friend. "Oh! Well then… why don't… why don't we ask her if she can help us with anything."

"Great!" yelled Ino as she took Sakura by the hand and started to drag the girl towards her own home, "Say Sakura? What rank was your mother? I mean I know she wasn't from a clan or anything, but there are plenty of first generation ninja with high ranks… so, what rank was she?"

Sakura let out a little blush, "Oh! Well… I don't really know the ranks yet, they haven't taught us yet and my mom didn't teach me any shinobi stuff yet…" seeing Ino's face twist in annoyance she told her the one thing she did know, "But I can tell you one thing! I found an old cloth in the back of a closet in my house last week, it was blue and had the symbol for Fire on the front inside a circle. When she found me I asked her and she said she was a guard once, one of twelve, and that it was something really rare!"

"Really rare?" asked Ino, not fully convinced, "Well maybe we can ask her when we get there." And with that they took off to the Haruno home twice as fast as before.

When they arrived they saw the older pink haired woman chasing away a blond kid who had bent over to smell her flowers with a broom, "Get out of here! You leave my flowers alone brat! They didn't do anything to you!" And the kid fled out of fear for the cleaning device, dropping a pair of goggles which the pink haired women threw after the boy. Turning back to sweep the path to her home Sakura's mother, Ume, saw the two girls run up too her. "Sakura-chan, Ino-chan, my dears, what are you doing here? I thought you would be out playing."

"Hello mother!" greeted Sakura, bowing slightly to her mother

"Hello Haruno-sama!" bowing as well.

"Oh stop that Ino! Sama my rear end! I'm no great Lady, you know you may just call me by my first name dear. Ume is what my mother called me when I was born and that's good enough for me!" answered Ume, a genuine smile on her face.

"Hai Ume-san! Well we were just wondering if you could help us train a bit?" asked an eager Ino.

"Really! Well then, I guess there is a trick or two I might have." Was her response as she put on a thinking look. Though on the inside she was excited, "FINALLY! I've waited for my daughter to start taking kunoichi training seriously and Ino you are the answer! Maybe I should teach her a little of my style too… hmmm? I need to brush up a bit till we get too far, but still!" "I could show you a thing or two… Tell me girls, what are the major fields of combat?"

"Well there is Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Genjutsu." Answered Ino, knowing at least that much of the basics.

Sakura was next, "Well we learn about Senjutsu, but that's not so much fighting as it is planning out your fights in advanced, knowing your enemy, stuff like that."

"Good! But you missed one, something that I happen to be very good at: KENjutsu! The art of sword fighting!" as she said his she took her broom into a basic stance and went through one of the katta's for some style… both the girls looked at the women weilding her broom around like she was crazy.

"Ummm, mom, I think we get the point… you can stop any moment now"

"Ume-san? Are you ok there… Heeelllloooo?!"

After finally getting the women's attention she led them to her bedroom and pulled out a long box, "This is a box of mementos from when I was a kunoichi." She said as she lifted off the lid, revealing a blue silk cloth on top, the symbol for Fire in a red circle near a corner, "This I got after I became a Jounin. I was offered the position to become one of the Twelve Guards of the Fire Lord." At this she had Ino and Sakura in awe, amazed that such a simple women had once been in such a position, "The Daimyo himself came to me after he saw me in the Jounin exams, saying it was the only kunoichi fight he had ever seen, that my beautiful pink hair drew his attention. He was so handsome!"

Seeing her mother go into lala land Sakura was worried. Luckily Ino did the only logical thing a seven year old girl could do… she slapped the women.

Looking around confused, "Right! Thank you Ino! As I was saying I was a personal guard to the Daimyo himself, working beside people like the Hokage's son, a great Shinobi monk named Chiriku, and lets not forget the amazing Isshin. My personal mentor on the Guard. He taught me so much, even about some techniqes my great great great grandfather had possesed if stories are true. Anyway he was good, but me… I became the best. I fought Momochi Zabuza, a fish guy named Kisami, both of which were a part of the Seven swords men of the Mist, a whole bunch of people oh and then there was…"

Slowly but surly Sakura and Ino's eye glazed over and they started to fall asleep, even academy teachers weren't this boring. Not that the stuff wasn't interesting, but she just pushed on and on. Finally, after an hour of talking the woman put the cloth to the side and pulled out something else, a Konoha headband, then after that a long object covered in fine silk the color of peaches, perhaps a shade of pink, who knew, the color seemed to change as it moved.

"And this" she said, while revealing a sword hilt and pushing it up to reveal an inch of blade, "Was my constant companion through it all! My mother, though distraught by my choice to be a kunoichi, decided that if I would do something made for a man, then I would have a mans weapon, and she couldn't have picked a better blade. When I got her she looked like a piece of junk, I couldn't even get it out o the sheath to see the blade, but a quick cleaning and an unsealing let me fix that and revealed a blade of amazing quality. My mother paid a homeless man a few ryo for the blade he had, and yet I have never needed to sharpen it. Blood, sap, mud, and this one tree, none of it ever stuck to the blade. If it had the original sheath I bet it would have been just as amazing as the sword." Reluctantly she covered the sword back up and placed it back in the box, "I will be teaching you girls the basics of the Sakura style of Kenjutsu, a style said to have originated with one of the Sword Gods, aids to the Shinigami himself. You know Isshin claimed they are the Shinigami, that they were a group of warriors who helped move soul on."

She stopped here hearing the snort from Ino, "Well then, it seems the history lesson is over." Slowly she packed up the boxes contents and she stood up, and walked into the closet with the box. When she came out she had long nine pronged whip in her hands, "Now its time for your physical conditioning!"

She grinned, they ran, and screams were heard

Outside the Haruno home

The young Hinata Hyuga watched as a pink haired banshee chased off that blond haired boy. Who was he? All she had was a name, Naruto-Maelstrom. Why did he train as much as he did? He was, after all, only as old as she and the others in her class.

Yet he was two grades above her. She didn't understand, and didn't try too, she just watched the boy go with sad eyes, as the memory of the Uchiha's speech came to mind. 'If he's two grades above me, then he must be even stronger than Sasuke… So I'll have to be stronger still!' "I will be strong Naruto… my Naruto-kun.

That night she trained with her father and did not stop when he said she could if she wished, for that he was very pleased, even Neji usually stopped more often than not at that point. When her father made small talk at dinner with his brother and her she did not stutter once, though inside she was ready to die from fear of the older two men. Through this she held one thought in her mind 'For Naruto-kun!'

Six months later. During Kumo's negotiations with Konoha.

A soft tapping of feet could be heard against the hard wood floors in the Hyuga Manor. Hinata Hyuga would never have heard them this late at night, save for the fact that she had not fallen to sleep yet, having cried for the first time in months. Naruto Uzumaki, had been beaten badly today and she had watched as he had crawled back to his home after being denied the hospital. The part that stung the worst was the ANBU. They had been there, they had stopped the villagers, and had helped the boy up, but refused to do anymore than that, even telling him that the hospital would not take him in.

It stung, and it stung that she did nothing to help him. 'I WILL NOT BE WEAK! I promised myself that, but her I am, crying, and there I was, with all the power in the world to help him and I did nothing but stand still and watch him.' She cried hard and now just lay awake in her bed, berating herself.

Then she heard the feet and soon saw the shadow outside her thin paper door. Quickly, without seal or word she activated her Byakugan, one thing she made sure she could do, though few could. She saw everything, every movement, every object, and every speck of chakra for twenty-five feet, even the bodies of the two branch members outside her room at either end of the hall.

That had pulled her attention long enough for the man, with his Kumo head protector to open the door, she made no sound as she was gagged and swept up over his shoulder, seeing no reason to tie her hands of feet. That was a mistake.

For a minute she was in shock over what was happening, then, with her Byakugan still open, she stuck once on his back. The man collapsed and she was sent sprawling, making enough noise to waken her other guardian in another room. Hizashi came out to the sight of Hinata standing over a dead Kumo nin, the one heading over talks with Konoha.

"Lord Hyuga's mercy! What is this madness?" In three minutes the compound was abuzz and every Hyuga with the famed all seeing eyes had it active. As for Hinata… oh yes, this night set her path. This Hyuga would be strong. She was the first Hyuga to take a life while still in the academy…

People will grow strong if they have enough motivation… or they shall try at the very least. Kiba Inuzuka though wasn't even given the chance to try. Three weeks after the incident with the Uchiha gaki Kiba took a look around the classroom.

Ino and Sakura now had wooden swords on their backs. Hinata seemed to be advancing in leaps and bounds, quickly taking place as the number one kunoichi. Choji now wore a set of purple and red armor with the kanji for eat on the front. For once Shaky Shikamaru was paying attention, even asking questions of the teacher and contributing to the class! Heck, even Shino carried a weapon around now, a pair of scythes that seemed to make him look like a grasshopper when he took a stance.

The only ones who hadn't changed were himself and Sasuke Uchiha, though that boy was already surpassing the rest easily. Kiba felt like he had to do something, so he vowed to go to his sister and mother today and start the family training. But it was not to be.

"No son, you're not ready to start that training yet." Were the first words out of the Inuzuka matriarch's mouth after hearing her son's request.

Kiba was angry at her, though he could not see why she had chosen things to be this way, "But you started Hana when she was my age, why can't you be reasonable? I deserve-"

"You deserve nothing!" she hissed between clenched teeth, a small trickle of killing intent leaking out, "I swear to Cerberus you are the most stubborn child I have ever met. Listen well, you will not start training because you are not in your last year of the academy. Eight years ago Hana was rushed into being a Genin because of the Kyuubi's attack on our village. It is because of that, not HER that the training started early. Secondly, you have yet to bond with a pup, your chakra is not matured enough for that, even Hana had to wait until she was ten for that to happen. I do not want to hear anymore of deserving what you clearly do not!" and with that she left the trembling Kiba all alone.

Hurt, angry, sad, envious, scared, and most of all ashamed of himself, he had very good reson's to be trembling. Kiba would fall to the last place in their class, till a certain blond kid entered in the last year. That year Kiba started training, yet his grades never raised and his rank stayed second last. Akamaru bonded to him when he had turned nine, and was strong enough to join him in classes, yet he never seemed to grow, and his mother never let him push past what he was ready for. To him he was being held back, but he could not fight it.

Who would have though one little fight would leave Kiba Inuzuka in the dust of his peers.

ENTER THE UZUMAKI-

Naruto wasn't happy. No, Uzumaki Naruto was having the worst day of his life.

Why? You may ask.

Well today is Naruto's eleventh birthday, the day he, unknown to either him or those of his generation, had the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox sealed inside of him. Yes, eleven years ago on this very October day Naruto was made the Jailer and Warder of the Kyuubi no Kitsune, the most powerful demon to ever walk the realms of earth.

Normally on this day Naruto knew enough to stay away from the town and even his own home, out of fear of being beaten and chased by the village folk and shinobi alike, though he knew not why they chased him, beat him, called him a demon, and, worst of all in Naruto's mind, spread evil lies to their children and the rest of his generation, leaving the poor boy friendless in the cold world of the shinobi.

But today Naruto couldn't help but come out of the shadows, for he heard a rumor of an ambassador being escorted to the Hokage's tower today, a man from the Whirlpool Country, a place he had never heard of, since it's shinobi village was so small and secretive. But these aren't what made him come out to see the old man, it was his name: Uzumaki.

It couldn't be, he had no family… right? But he had to know, one way or another. So, dressed in all orange, as it was his favorite color… and that they would sell him nothing else but the ugly bright orange outfit, he left that morning to wait for the Diplomat to arrive. People who passed him by saw nothing, as he had finally gotten the hang of the Henge and made himself blend into the wall he sat by.

One hour, he was patient, two, he was bored, three hours he was ready to tear hair out. After four hours Naruto was ready to leave when he saw them, a group of ten ANBU Black Ops all in dark cloaks surrounding one man: Uzumaki Kinto, a tall man, with golden red hair and beard, eyes as green as emeralds. The only problem was, he had let the henge drop, and on this day, this close to a foreign diplomat, that spelt certain disaster. The first to see him was not the Villagers, or the ten ANBU, all save one of which, a certain Hatake Kakashi, would gladly see him dead, no, it was in fact the one Naruto came to see.

For a split second the two seemed to look each other straight in the eyes, Deep blue of youth and the Hard green of time. In that second they questioned themselves. From Naruto it was questions he had asked himself from the days he lived in the Konoha orphanage: "Do I have a family somewhere? Is this person related to me somehow? Should I bother getting my hopes up again?" From the man it was about something he had thought he would never see again: "Those eyes, are they? No!… Are those his eyes? It means nothing, if they are but… my Shina-chan." Then their eyes drifted, Naruto's towards the symbol on the mans chest, that of the Whirlpool, and the mans towards the patch on Naruto's shoulder, a Whirlpool in a flame.

Before either of them could say, do, or think anything else the ANBU had moved into action, six jumping around the man while the other four charged towards Naruto.

"Stay away from the Ambassador you little demon Child" yelled one of the masked men, as he unsheathed his sword. Seeing this Naruto jumped into action himself, throwing down a smoke bomb and making a run for it.

"Who was that boy?" asked Kinto, nearly afraid to ask.

Luckily for our hero Kakashi answered, "The child's name is Naruto, he is an orphan who attends the Ninja academy here. Why do you ask Lord Kinto?"

"Hmm… go find him and bring me his jacket. Leave the boy alive though, he does not seem the most liked here."

"HAI!" And Kakashi jumped away, glad that he had been the one sent, knowing the others in the group may have been a little more… fatal in carrying out these orders.

--With Naruto--

"DAMN IT!" Naruto was not having a good day, "Stupid rope!"

"KILL THE DEMON!" "LYNCH'EM" "FINISH WHAT THE FOURTH STARTED!"

No Naruto was having the worst day of his life. Why? You may ask.

"I had to be a fucking retard and run into the middle of the GOD DAMN FUCKING FESTIVILE!!"

Yes it was true, normally Uzumaki Naruto was better than his, the could keep his head and managed to outrun ANBU on a few occasions. Naruto, though he was the dead last in the academy right now, was not stupid nor untalented, he had managed to memorize every path and passage through Konoha, otherwise known as The Village Hidden in the Leaves, he could already do the henge, replacement, and Bushin jutsu's (though the last had taken him all summer to get the hang of), he was great at hiding, tracking, and his taijutsu were above that of most of his fellow Academy students.

Right now though, that didn't matter, because now he had been caught, tied to a wooden pole and was being carried to a tree meant to hang traitors and enemy shinobi from. "Hey, come on! I'll buy you all ramen if you let me go!!"

"Shut it demon child, we don't want anything from you!'

"COME ON! Everyone loves ramen!" Naruto, beg, pleaded, and hoped to be let go, but if the power of ramen wasn't enough then what was?

The answer to that was a lightning covered fist that shattered the pole and let Naruto fall to the ground and jet away. The Hokage himself had been prepared to intervene, watching from his crystal ball to see if anyone there had the guts to stand up for the boy. He was glad to see Kakashi stop the ignorant fools, but still saddened to know they had to be stopped in the first place.

As Naruto ran, towards the forest since his home was no doubt being ransacked and defiled, he could feel the tracking eyes of someone behind him. As soon as he stopped in a familiar clearing he bent over to get a quick breath and felt a sharp pain on the back of his neck, then knew no more.

"You should be safe here until tonight." Said Kakashi as he took off Naruto's jacket and threw his own black cloak on top of the boy.

--With the Hokage and Kinto--

"Sarutobi-Sama, I thank you for your men as escorts." Said the red haired Uzumaki.

"Of course, Konoha will do anything for its allies, and this such a small thing, how could we not. Please have a seat. Were there any problems on the way here?" asked the elderly man, already knowing the answer.

"No, no." said the man as he sat across from the Hokage in his amazingly paper free office, "Though your men mistook one boy for a threat. It is nice to know that they were protecting me but the poor lad nearly had his head removed. What was his name…. Ah yes Naruto… very intreasting eyes that one."

"Indeed! Perhapes you would like to know his full name?" he said knowingly, as a knocking came at the door, which one of the two ANBU guarding the room answered, and took something orange in his hands.

"Yes, he had a patch on his coat that was… ah here it is." He exclaimed taking the orange parcel from the ANBU and pulling out one of the sleeves to see the shoulder patch.

"Lord Uzumaki, why is Naruto's jacket here?" a little upset that he would have something stolen from the poor boy.

"Just to confirm something." Looking closly he said softly to the Hokage, "He is an Uzumaki, isn't he Sarutobi-sama? He is Kushina's son." The older man could only nod in response. Taking a breath and handing the jacket to the "professor" he went on, "So, has he awoken the Refiner? It is a very rare gift for someone of mixed blood to have."

"It is hard to tell if it has, he has… something else… that makes it difficult to tell. His stanima is beyond the human level, he is fast, and his senses are very acute."

"So he has it!" said the bearded man, a smile snaking onto his face.

"No." said the Sandaime, taking a deep breath, "He has a… tenent, I guess one could say, that does all of those things for him already."

"A tenet. What are you talking… about… yes," said the man, hearing the sounds of the party outside, "eleven years ago, the man who my neice left us for died… killing… IT... He couldn't could he? It was a demon after all."

"No, he couldn't"

"So he sealed it away… fufu."

"You find this funny?"

"Yes, in a way. You see Naruto has been exiled from his clan unless he can awaken his powers, and he has something inside him that could boost them to the levels of our forefathers."

A frown had formed across the elder mans face, "Uzumaki Naruto is not some thing for you to use. If you try anything Uzumaki-san, then you will-"

"Please, Sarutobi, I said nothing of the sort. I just found it ironic that if he could awaken his powers he would be beyond any pureblood of our family, fufu. Well I hope you shall give him his jacket back for me. But we must really start these talks on how we may repay you and the rest of Konoha. If it weren't for your men then my country might have been a dent in the earth."

"Hmm, well, there is one way. An open alliance would be more than enough to get good trade through both lands and give each of us more man power."

"Yes, maybe it is time for our hidden village to come out in the open. That is how we Uzumaki like to fight, so why not lead the village the same way."

"Kukuku, that is exactly like Naruto. He hasn't even met one of you and he acts the same way…" The great Kage wanted to say something, he couldn't let it rest, "should I tell the boy?"

With a sigh, tired of talking of things from the past, "I will tell you the same thing I told Kashina-chan, if and only if he awakens his bloodline, then we will tell him everything of his clan. One of the ANBU said he was an orphan, so I assume they and he knows nothing of that man… Minato was his name, your Yondaime?"

"No one, not even he himself, knows of any of his family and it is against the law to speak of his 'tenant' on pain of death." Then as he rubbed his head, "Though that has not made his life any easier. The older generation name no names, but they poison the youth of today against the boy."

"Well, if he wakens the Refiner then you know where to turn, there is special training he will need that only we may offer. Know this, his clan will not shun him for what he holds back."

A smile apeared on the wrinkled face of the Hokage, "Thank you, and for that I think we might be able to reduce some of the loans Konoha gave you… for privet services rendered." "One day Naruto, I know you will have a family some day!"

--The next morning--

"Ow, my neck!" complained Naruto, sitting up and pulling the cloack off his neck, "Who ever did that's going to pay for it in ramen… HEY, my JACKET!" standing up, protecting himself from the morning cold with the cloak Naruto made his way to the Hokage's Tower to complain.

When he got there he was greeted with the sound of paper work, "HEY OLD MAN! YOU HERE YET!" He yelled, earning a disapproving look from one of the assistants.

"Hey now, no need to yell so early." Said a tall man with a black beard, hair, and sideburns, a cigarette lit in his mouth, "You Naruto? Yeah, probable" he said not even waiting for an answer, while handing Naruto his jacket "Listen, names Asuma, I was told to get your jacket for you and to get a report on what happen yesterday from you, so why don't we go talk over some breakfast. What you want?" Give you three guesses and the first two don't count.

"RAMEN!"

--one walk and ten bowls later--

"Alrighty then, well I came out to see the ambassador from the Whirlpool Country, when he came one of the ANBU wearing a boar mask comes out and tries to cut my head off. So I throw down a smoke bomb and run for it. As soon as I realized he wasn't following me though I was being held down by someone and my arms and legs were tied up and I was being carried like a deer towards the hanging tree. After a few minutes someone came through and destroyed the pole I was being carried on and I'm making a run for it. When I reach the forest though, someone knocks me out, steals my jacket, and gives me this thing around my back."

Asuma, playing with his first bowl of ramen, looks at Naruto, "Unless you can give me some names the only one we got is the ANBU and he is practically immune from prosecution since he WAS on guard duty, he could simply say that he was taking an action he thought was necessary at the moment even if it was later learned to be unnecessary." Taking a long drag from his death stick he went on, "You COULD try and get him, but you need to be a Konoha Shinobi to try and bring anyone up on court-martial, and besides, that will just lead to him using that excuse and your at point zero again. Just try and not to get into those situations again, you ain't a Shinobi yet and are not afforded the benefits of being one."

"Don't worry, I have the Bushin down flat now, in eight months I'll be a ninja and anyone who messes with me is going to get their asses handed to them."

--N-A-R-U-T-O-eight months later-U-Z-U-M-A-K-I--

"NARUTO!" yelled a very pissed of Iruka, "YOU FAIL!"

"But, but, but I know I did it right, I had it down since last summer! You know that, you're the one who helped me with it!" said a nervous and upset Naruto.

"Iruka, this is the third time he took the exam, and you have seen him make a clone, right?" said a platinum haired Mizuki, "we could let him pass."

This brightened up Naruto's day a lot "Yeah, Yeah, YEAH! I was just a little nervous Iruka-sensei!"

"I'm sorry Naruto, but you both know the rules. Besides if you cant take the stress from this little test then what's going to happen when you get in a real fight."

"But Iruka-sensei-" Naruto begged once more, only to be just off.

"No Naruto, you will have to take the test next year…" then, so even Mizuki couldn't hear, "I'm sorry Naruto…"

Upset, our young hero walks out and immediately goes outside to sit on swing, watching as all of the other people, the happy families. Fathers and their son's who have just become men. Mothers and their daughters. People all so happy that their children are going off to kill and be killed, "At least I'm not as delusional. I know what's going to happen. I already have a taste of what the worlds going to throw at them… and even my little taste would be too much to handle."

Getting up Naruto starts to walk to the trash he calls a home, a place that has been raided over the years just for the fun of it all, destroyed and defiled for something he had no control over. Hated as a lair for evil because something he still had no idea about.

"Naruto." Came the gentle call behind him, "What do you want Mizuki Sensei?" "Come on, lets go talk some where."

Five minutes later and they were on top of a building looking at the Hokage's Tower, "You know Iruka-sensei wants you to pass, right Naruto?"

"Yeah."

"But he is a very serious person and he can't just let you through without earning it."

"I know that, but it feels like he's just picking on me. I mean he knows I can do a bushin, he saw me do one yesterday after I painted the Hokage's Monument."

"He probably see's a little of himself in you… he just wants you to work hard and earn what you get."

"I still wish I could graduate with the others!" at this a smirk crosses Mizuki's face.

"Really? I guess you just need to know the secret…" Naruto shivered, like a sixth sense was telling him something… "What is it Mizuki-sensei?"

"I knew I was right to use a Genjutsu! He just might be able to get it and take the blame too… I love sweet revenge!"

--Hokage's Tower--

Walking up to the tower Naruto still couldn't help but feel something is wrong. "Why… why something like this… Why does this feel so wrong? Why why whywhyWHY!" then it struck, like a bolt of lightning, "He wants the scroll… I am such a moron… hehehe, I'm ALSO the king of all pranksters… and I LOVE sweet revenge!"

Twenty minutes later Naruto was in the woods with a large scroll, all thanks too his lovely new jutsu, though he still felt bad, but for a different reason, "I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! Ojiji-san is a pervert TOO!"

Finally settling down in a clearing Naruto opens the scroll and starts to read the first one, "NO! Not another clone jutsu!" with a sigh he starts to read its description:

'Kage Bushin no jutsu- as is well known in the world of shinobi, bushin's are a golden necessity. With the most basic of cloneing techniques you may fool the simple minded into attacking a false image. When an element is added you create a solid clone, though with an added effect, a zap with contact in the Raiton: bushin, an explosion with the Katon: bushin, extra durability with the Doton: Bushin, the great speed of the Fuuton: bushin, and the flexibility of the Mizuton: bushin. The downside of these being that they can be detected quite easily if you know what to look for, tremors in the earth, sudden moisture, movement, heat, or static in the air, a well trained shinobi can sense such things, and a doujutsu can see them even faster than the well trained shinobi can sense them. It is because of such things that the Uchiha clan first tried to create a better type of clone. In the end, after they formed an alliance with the Woodland Tribes, they created this jutsu. Though it does not draw on the shadows to create a clone, which would make it a specialized elemental clone, when used properly for spying from the shadows it is truly the perfect clone. Solid clones that can perform the basic- distracting- function of clones as well as no extra elemental output, memory use (Naruto didn't exactly understand what that meant,) a chakra level is equal to that of the original so they are undistinguished before most doujutsu, and they have the same SKILL level as the original as well as an equal portion of the originals chakra, allowing these clones the ability to perform jutsu and retain a sort of self awareness from the point of creation. Some have dared to say that this is akin to creating life based off of an original mother, and so it very well may be, though all scientific attempts to reproduce a permanent kage Bushin have been unsuccessful at best.—also see Shuriken Kage Bushin, Kage Bushin explosion.

…thump

……

"Damn that's a lot to take in!"

Looking on farther Naruto saw that this was only the start of the technique, it went on to explain jutsu theory and, if he would have read it long enough, an explanation for 'memory use.' Naruto being Naruto though skimmed to the end where the hand signs needed and how to manipulate your chakra was listed for practicalities use.

However Naruto noticed something. The scroll was huge, there had to be hundreds of jutsu in here. Yes, he could work on this technique for the next few hours… or…

Searching through his side pouch Naruto produced a pen and a blank scroll, "Lets see, Kage Bushin no Jutsu, alright, just write that down… good. Next… Avada Ka- nope…lets see Mokuton, why would I want to make tree's… hmmm, the Rasengan, requires great control and was the jutsu of the fourth. While strong and requiring great control it was placed in this scroll not because it was evil or a danger to the user, but so it could be passed to his son one day… guess he won't get that wish, he never had a son. Guess I'll just write these three steps down… good… and… good. Next up…Balefire… DAMN! Even Kiba wouldn't have the balls to use this… good thing I have more balls than Kiba… one more should be enough, especially since they are getting harder and harder. Lets see Storm God's Summoning….. What in the name of the Kyuubi is this."

The particular jutsu in question was of epic proportions, requiring beyond perfect chakra control and reserves only a demon could hope to have, to call upon all of the elements at once to create a storm that would tear apart friend and foe and possibly a whole nation with it. But that was only part of the solution. If you found a place with the proper conditions then one could call forth a great being of immense size and power to do your bidding. It was far beyond Naruto right now, in both Chakra control and chakra amounts needed.
Standing up and hiding his little scroll Naruto started to learn his first jutsu… you know where this is going folks!

-t-h-r-e-e-h-o-u-r-s-l-a-t-e-r—(AH where'ed that voice come from)

Naruto now sat in his bedroom, thinking about what happened a little over an hour ago.

He could hear those kunai wizzing by as Iruka was struck saving him even now. He could see Mizuki's face as he informed Naruto of his deceit this afternoon

"Figured it out huh? You were smarter than you ever showed at the academy, why else would I have to use genjutsu's om your tests so you'd fail, or at the end of the year exam. You made three beautiful clones, though I guess my little trick covered up your work... oh well, clones aren't going to get you anywhere now."

He could still hear Iruka's pleas to stop until he final told Naruto the truth hidden since his birth.

"Traitor!" Spat Naruto, "Oh really! Am I the traitor? You know you were betrayed by the whole village, even the Hokage."

"He would never betray me!" yelled Naruto wit hate, wanting to leave and… and yet he couldn't move as soon as he heard those word, any form of plan forgotten.

"Oh yes, you see there is a secret that the whole village has kept from you."

"STOP!"

"You see, eleven years ago the Fourth sealed the Nine-Tailed Demon inside a child,"

"MIZUKI! STOP THIS!'

"That child, Naruto, was you! YOU ARE THE NINE-TAILED FOX!" And then he lifted his giant shuriken over his head and charged Natuto… who started to glow red.

After that it was like a haze came over everything. Sure he remembered it, but it all seemed so surreal. He remembered blasting Mizuki back with a roar as the Chuunin prepared to attack Iruka and himself. He remembered calming down and creating a thousand plus clones and beating the living shit out of Mizuki-teme. And then he remembered Iruka giving him his shinobi headpiece and feeling overjoyed, and yet not caring at all.

After all how often do you hear that you have a millennium old demon sealed within your navel.

"So I have a demon inside me?" said Naruto as he lay awake on his bed.

"Yup"Said… actually Naruto didn't have a clue who said that.

"Who's there!" He yelled, jumping up and pulling a kunai out "Show yourself!"

"If I could I would! As it is I want to kill half the villagers for what I've seen them do!" said the voice…….. the Kyuubi! "Hey! You figured it out!, and I didn't even need to yell at you."

"Damn I must be tired if I'm talking to the little voice in my head. That sounds way to nice to be the Kyuubi."

"Oh, ok. HOW DOES THIS SOUND MUCH MORE VIOLENT FOR YOU! DO YOU WANT ME TO TELL YOU THAT I'M GOING TO RIP YOU THROAT OUT AND FEAST ON YOUR INNERDS! Is that what you want to hear?"

"No, I'm good… and pissed myself" said a shocked Naruto, who suddenly started brooding again, "What do you want, make my life even more hell than it already is? Now even if I leave the village I'll have a portable hate machine!"

"Damn, this kid is really down,Tell you what Gaki, the only reason I came out is because we need to talk."

"Oh, and what do we need to talk about teme?" asked Naruto as he buried his head into a pillow.

"First, you need to stop booding, I like happy people over sad ones, and because YOU used my chakra."

"Wait, did you just say you like happy people? You're a demon, why would a demon like happy people."

"It's a little off topic but they give a better crunch in every bite if you must know. But I was talking about when you used my chakra. When you did that you made it so I can finally get out a little, you know talk and help boost your powers. You know how good your senses are?""Yeah, so?""There about to get much sharper. When you used my chakra it forced your bloodline awake."

This got Naruto sitting up straight, "Bloodline? As in a Kekkai Genkai? A Bloodline LIMIT!?"

"Well that got you up, kukuku. Yes a bloodline know as the Refiner. Very interesting. You see I have read into your DNA some… you have another bloodline through your father as well and the potential for an under developed Doujutsu."

"So what's it do, what's it do?!" he asked as happy as he was just a day ago.

"Kukuku, settle down, it increases your sense, all of them, and helps your body out by giving you more strength, speed, stamina. By the end of the month you should be a few inches taller as well. Just think, with my power already coursing through your veins you will be able to pick up on the smallest sent, taste poisons before they can harm you, feel the air move as things move towards you, and will practically see with your eyes closed. Then your speed, strength, and stamina will increase to match your new senses. You'll be able to out due that pathetic Uchiha in a second. And your other bloodlines… just imagine it, you as the Greatest Hokage ever… that is, without my help. With my help I can make you greater than all KAGE's that have come before. You will rise above Hokage… you will become the Kamikage, a virtual god on earth."

"The Kamikage, the godshadow…But why, why help me?"

"Why?"he asked, reading Naruto's mind, "Why not, to get there you will need to unify the world, gain the respect of everyone, become more powerful than anyone… Naruto, were going to be stuck together a long time, my chakra will expand your life time to that of a hundred men, and if you die, I die. I'm just trying to expand my life here, maybe someday I can escape, who knows, but until then I want to make sure you live. To ensure that, you need to be strong… and that is were I can help. All I need from you is to let me control your chakra for a minute or two and I can take you somewhere where you can get stronger, multiple places actually."

"What do I have to lose, I'm weak as it is, being the Kamikage sounds much better than the plain old Hokage." "Alright fox you got a deal, but two things, you never try and hurt those close to me and you never force me to do something if I don't want to."

"Alright, SO I will not harm anyone close to you, make you do anything, and help you become strong as possible. But I need something more than life, since our lives are already intertwined. If you have a chance to set me free without killing yourself, then you take it and you will actually listen to what I have to say, Deal?"

"Deal! If you break your word then I swear your going to go down with me!" yelled the boy, hitting his head, trying to jostle the fox around,

"Hey gaki, a few other things, one I'm in your stomach not your head, two you can't hit me like that, and three, you never need to worry about a demon going back on his word. Any verbal contracts with a demon are like soul pacts, If I break mine then you'll get all my power an vice versa, if you break your word then I guess I'll simple gain controll of your body… I don't like your body yet."

"Shut it Fox-Teme. So when's my training start, how we going to do it, when's my bloodline going to activate?"

"Calm down, that's lesson number one. Next, your bloodline is already active, it's just starts up slowly so you an get used to it. In two days it should be up and running without a problem. Next thing is we are going other places to get training, places where time is meaningless to your body, so you won't grow and your bloodline won't start activating. Now remember what I said, I need control over your chakra for a minute. Just relax and let go… good, next stop Coruscant.

And with that Naruto took his first leap into greatness… well its more like he fell really, but that's a story for a different day.

Auther Notes- I'll try and keep this short.

One, Naruto will be going to a bunch of worlds, learning qa bunch of shit and will be a demigod of sorts. Oh there will be challenges, and in a few chapters when I bring back the rookie nine and other's you will understand.

Now Naruto will not have everything all at once, and I do need help with what my doujutsu will look like. There will be no sharingan for Naruto so don't even suggest it

Just send me a good description of the eye's look after activation, along with what its later level's will look like and I will decide one of my own or one of yours.

Send in all the comments you want and can, and please feel free to criticize, I love to make fun of you guys who just complain.

Adios senorita's db3200, out.