Author's Note: Okay this is the fixed version of my new story. Well its Thanksgiving and I'm thankful for everyone who has read my stuff. Your all the reason why I write stories. So because of Thanksgiving I decided to make an original fic by me. I'm mean lets face it the last time I did that was about 5 months ago. So heres my second original story.
Chapter 1
On a regular day in OOO Finn decided to go hang out with Marceline, since Jake is getting a room ready for the his kids. As soon as Finn arrived at Marceline's cave he knocked on the door waited for her to answer. After a while she opened the door. "Hey Finn." Marceline greated him looking troubled.
"Hey Marceline! Mind if I come in?" Finn asked.
She sighed "Sure." she said letting Finn pass. As soon as he was inside he sat down on her very uncomfortable couch. He then looked at Marceline and noticed that she seemed down.
"Why the long face?" the boy in the bear hat asked.
"Well for starters, I'm pissed of, my dad is making me go to this dumb bussiness meeting to try and make me join the business. He asks me every year and to come to this stupid meeting and I'm sick of it." she explained.
"Well if you dont want to go then dont. He cant force you." he said.
"I know but if I dont he'll just make me do some other stupid thing for not going." she explained.
"If he's that big of a problem why dont you just abandon him all together?" the boy asked.
"I love him. But he always on my case, even if he is trapped in the Nightosphere." the 1000 year old lady explained. "Well I guess I'll just sit through the boring meeting."
"Well if its as boring as you say it is why dont you just sleep through the whole thing?" the adventurer asked. That just made her look at him in a weird way.
"That's a great idea. I'll just sleep through the whole meeting while I look like I'm awake and I wont have to deal with for another year. Thanks Finn." Marceline said as she headed upstairs.
"No problem." Finn said.
Author's Note: I dont think this that big of an improvement but oh well. I'll just continue this and see where this goes. Hope you enjoy. Also if you guys have a title for this story I could really use one right now.
