I decided to redo chapter 1 and change a few things, like names and the storyline, hope you like it. If you read my original chapter pretend you haven't.

Chapter 1: My life sucks

Cassie's pov

The whispers and looks increased as I past people. Some eyes lingered on the new tattoo below my ear, some people weren't quiet enough "Did she really try kill herself ?".

Tears threatened to spill as I retrieved my books from my locker. I smiled slightly at the photos of my friends from England, Hope and Lizzie pulling faces at the camera, Trenton and I laying in a field of buttercups. Slowly I touched the photo that made me cry every time. Trenton, Freddie, Jake, Lizzie, Hope and I all at the year 11 prom, the same night my mother died. Salty tears streamed down my face dripping to the floor noiselessly. The bell rang, causing the few people still in the hallways to rush into their home room, leaving me alone crying at my locker. I cursed the ambulance crew, if they'd been a couple minutes late then I'd be dead, not dealing with the hell that is my life.

*********lunch*******

I sighed and sat down under a tree in the school field eating an apple. Then I got a feeling like someone was watching me, turned my head to the right, then the left but there was no one there. Probably just my senses going whack.

******walking home*******

I pulled the coat tighter around my body as I walked back to the apartment I used to share with my abusive uncle. Suddenly something hit me with so much force it knocked me flying into an alley, I struggled to my feet but I was quickly pinned to a wall. My head started to bleed from the impact and my eyes lost focus, when I regained my vision I saw something truly terrifying...

Standing in front of me was a chalk-white woman with crimson eyes and wicked sharp fangs, but her legs were one of the most oddest things I've seen, her right leg looked like it belonged to a donkey and the left one was human shaped but metallic and hollow, judging by the sound it made as it clanged against the wall. She shoved me harder into the wall and my head polled on my shoulders, just as she went to scratch my face she exploded into a weird gold dust, that stuck to my clothes, the last thing I saw before I passed out was a guy with curly black hair and chocolate brown eyes frowning at me...

Yay, chapter 1 redone! Hope you liked it, I preferred this version. Should I carry on? Please review, and vote on my poll, please. The chapters will get longer, I promise.

Ta ta for now~Goddess of distractions :D