Ok I'm a bit new at this so critique me and I do not I repeat do not own
any of these characters! Please read and have fun tell me if you want more
because I am willing to make it "interesting " thanks so much!
It was an average day for Ryu and his yami Bakura. It was a cool Saturday morning and they were in the park resting. While Bakura leaned up against a tall oak Ryu began to snuggle into his shoulder. "Damn Ryu get off me you pussy "Bakura said as Ryu's head fell to the ground " Ouch Bakura you BAKA fine I was trying to be nice but if you wasn't to be an ass about it then I" m going to scoot away from you " fucker " Ryu murmured under his breath after yelling at Bakura. Bakura's mental thought God he is so sexy when he's, wait did I just say he's sexy oh shit; well he is when he is pissed. He's so damn sexy! End of thought While Ryu looked away sadly thinking " damn he is so cute but why does he hate me so?" Bakura grabbed Ryu from behind and held him close " I'm glad I'm rubbing of on you Ryu you were such a wimp a while ago now your being a bastard to me YES your such a smart boy, I love you my hikari " " What did you just say?" Ryu asked in pure shock " I said that I love you Ryu now look at me " Ryu revolved slowly he spun his body in Bakura's direction so they were chest to chest. Ryu looked deeply into his yamie's deep brown eyes "oh Ryu I love you so much! I can't tell you that enough in this life time " Bakura held Ryu's feeble jaw in his rough hands and kissed him fully! But what surprised Bakura was that Ryu didn't object. He held Ryu close to his body then abruptly stopped. "Ryu you no what I just realized?" "What?" Ryu asked groggily " We are being watched, " he said chuckling " Holy shit lets go!" Ryu replied looking around in horror. He grabbed Bakura by the wrist and yanked him forward "come on you idiot if were going to make out we might as well do it where no one is watching!" " Well alrighty then" Bakura said with a devilish smirk lets have some fun!!!!!!
So what you think? Do you like it well its only the beginning so tell me if you want more please review because I really want to write more so give me a clue that you want more
Bakura: you no Dorothy you sound very desperate. Dorothy: I do damn well oh well just review and ask for more if you like it! Bakura: there you go again, your hopeless, just review so she will shut up!
It was an average day for Ryu and his yami Bakura. It was a cool Saturday morning and they were in the park resting. While Bakura leaned up against a tall oak Ryu began to snuggle into his shoulder. "Damn Ryu get off me you pussy "Bakura said as Ryu's head fell to the ground " Ouch Bakura you BAKA fine I was trying to be nice but if you wasn't to be an ass about it then I" m going to scoot away from you " fucker " Ryu murmured under his breath after yelling at Bakura. Bakura's mental thought God he is so sexy when he's, wait did I just say he's sexy oh shit; well he is when he is pissed. He's so damn sexy! End of thought While Ryu looked away sadly thinking " damn he is so cute but why does he hate me so?" Bakura grabbed Ryu from behind and held him close " I'm glad I'm rubbing of on you Ryu you were such a wimp a while ago now your being a bastard to me YES your such a smart boy, I love you my hikari " " What did you just say?" Ryu asked in pure shock " I said that I love you Ryu now look at me " Ryu revolved slowly he spun his body in Bakura's direction so they were chest to chest. Ryu looked deeply into his yamie's deep brown eyes "oh Ryu I love you so much! I can't tell you that enough in this life time " Bakura held Ryu's feeble jaw in his rough hands and kissed him fully! But what surprised Bakura was that Ryu didn't object. He held Ryu close to his body then abruptly stopped. "Ryu you no what I just realized?" "What?" Ryu asked groggily " We are being watched, " he said chuckling " Holy shit lets go!" Ryu replied looking around in horror. He grabbed Bakura by the wrist and yanked him forward "come on you idiot if were going to make out we might as well do it where no one is watching!" " Well alrighty then" Bakura said with a devilish smirk lets have some fun!!!!!!
So what you think? Do you like it well its only the beginning so tell me if you want more please review because I really want to write more so give me a clue that you want more
Bakura: you no Dorothy you sound very desperate. Dorothy: I do damn well oh well just review and ask for more if you like it! Bakura: there you go again, your hopeless, just review so she will shut up!