This is going to be about if Percy became immortal with Annabeth but someone is out to break them apart forever. Please Please Please review
Prologue
Eris was annoyed as her apple was not working she groaned in frustration as she watched the couple see the apple and share together, just like the day before.
The couple Eris was trying to break apart were Percy god of Beaches and Annabeth goddess of Planning. But for the past week her apples appeared to have no affect.
It seemed the goddess thought that they were so into each other they ignored all other beauty accept for Aphrodite but even then Percy still stayed by Annabeth's side, unlike that shameful Zeus. Just then Eris saw the couple look at her and Eris teleported back to her palace to brood.
Percy
I looked at Eris and realised that she was the one that was drooping the apples and looking at Annabeth I said "Oh that's nice of her to give the apples maybe with we should thank her as they were nice". Annabeth sighed and whispered "They're meant to be so beautiful nobody can resist having it, how could you not know that Seaweed Brain that's typical". I laughed and replied "it is?" Annabeth rolled her eyes and gently walked away I looked to where I saw Eris but she had gone then slowly it dawned on me what she was trying to do and decided to get her back.