HELLO FELLOW AUTHORS, THIS IS MY FIRST STORY SO PLEASE HELP ME WITH IT WITH YOUR REVIEWS ALSO ENGLISH IN MY SECOND LANGUAGE SO PLEASE BEAR WITH ME.

SO FIRST OF ALL I HAVE BECOME A GREAT FAN OF THE VAMPIRE SERIES, IT IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ TILL TODAY. NOW RECENTLY I READ A NOVEL 'THE DARING DECEPTION' AND I THINK ROSE AND DIMITRI WILL BEST FIT INTO THE STORY SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.

SO HERE I GIVE YOU MY FIRST CHAPTER

CHAPTER 1

DIMITRI'S POV

'Hell' is what I could call my life if you ask me to describe it in a single word. And women are the root cause of them. There was a time when they were the spot light of my life. I looked upon them as challenges as a winning trophy but know they are nothing but a headache. Especially because of two women in particular the famous Tasha Ozera and Mia Rinaldi. Mia Rinaldi now a widow was the wife a landlord whom I had met on many occasions. I liked to flirt with her a lot that applies to every woman that make themselves impossible for me as I said I like challenges. She had tried to resist me a lot but at the end she had fallen for the Dimitri Belikov charm. She was a real joy until her husband died in the war and just after one month of mourning she appeared at my footsteps the 'downtown abbey'. First I thought she just wanted to have a good time to forget her sorrows and I was more than ok with it. but when she said to ask her hand in marriage to her father I knew I was in trouble and needed to get out of it and to my help came by best friend Ivan Zeklos who invited me to stay with him and I was more than happy to comply. But to my bad luck I was just moving to the war front.

When I visited him it was thanksgiving and his mother made me feel at home. She reminded me a lot of my own mama Olena who had died when I just seven I did not have much memories of her but I knew she loved me a lot. Then came Tasha Ozera a friend of mine but if u know what they say a man and woman can never be friends. We had a secret relationship to satisfy our needs for years. I knew she wanted to seduce me into accepting her as my wife. But I did not want to get married and have myself restrained from the pleasures. I don't think a singly women can satisfy your needs u tend to get bored with a single one.

I managed to keep myself from falling into her traps and kept getting what I wanted but this time her trap did not have a loop hole.

So what do you think it is the first one so I kept it short like short and sweet next I will continue with dimitri's pov rose is gona enter in the third chapter I want to give a base before the actual story so do u think I was good at building the playboy character of Dimitri do let me now and I don't mind if u correct me I could appreciate a negative review only if it shows my flaws