This is my first fanfic so please be nice with your review, that's if
anyone reads it! Which they probably won't but I enjoy writing so what the
hell! I don't mind advice in your reviews just don't make it to harsh! By
the way I'm not gonna update till I get a few reviews! So here goes!
What should I do?
By Chocolate Teddy Bear!!!!
"Camp!" screamed the girl sitting at the table with her parents. Everyone in the restaurant turned around and stared at her. She didn't blush. She never blushed. "Yes. We thought it would be a good idea if you went out and met some new people, rather than stay locked up not talking to anyone." said her mum "What happens if I don't want to go to a stupid summer camp for a week" yelled the girl again. Everyone kept on staring. "I'm sorry Marisa, but we've already decided! That's final!" said her dad. "Fine!" she shouted" I'll go to the stupid camp but I'm not gonna enjoy it!" she pushed her coke of the table and stormed off to the place where she could forget all the problems in life, the beyblade park.
"Hey you, I want a beybattle!" Marisa said as she held her red beyblade in front of her. She knew she could beat anyone in the park. She started the whole craze off on her third birthday. She remembered getting her first beyblade. It was the best present ever and no one could give her something better. "But.I can't beat you.your m.m.Marisa!" he ran off, clutching his weak pathetic beyblade in his hands. No one in her town particularly liked her. They were all extremely afraid of her. Everyone took a few steps back from her and the people with beyblades hid them behind their backs. "FINE! Everyone be that way!" she knew this was definitely not her day. "I'm not that way!" said a girl who was standing at he other side of the dish. She had blonde hair down to her shoulders and she was wearing a long pale pink skirt and she had a light blue T-shirt on. "3.2.1 Let it rip!" screamed someone from the crowd. There beyblades circlaed the dish a couple of times and then Marisa and the girl went in for the kill. "Destroy her Missy!" yelled Marisa. "Take her out Busta!" screamed the blonde girl. Then there was a loud crash and everyone watching stood there, mouths open.
What should I do?
By Chocolate Teddy Bear!!!!
"Camp!" screamed the girl sitting at the table with her parents. Everyone in the restaurant turned around and stared at her. She didn't blush. She never blushed. "Yes. We thought it would be a good idea if you went out and met some new people, rather than stay locked up not talking to anyone." said her mum "What happens if I don't want to go to a stupid summer camp for a week" yelled the girl again. Everyone kept on staring. "I'm sorry Marisa, but we've already decided! That's final!" said her dad. "Fine!" she shouted" I'll go to the stupid camp but I'm not gonna enjoy it!" she pushed her coke of the table and stormed off to the place where she could forget all the problems in life, the beyblade park.
"Hey you, I want a beybattle!" Marisa said as she held her red beyblade in front of her. She knew she could beat anyone in the park. She started the whole craze off on her third birthday. She remembered getting her first beyblade. It was the best present ever and no one could give her something better. "But.I can't beat you.your m.m.Marisa!" he ran off, clutching his weak pathetic beyblade in his hands. No one in her town particularly liked her. They were all extremely afraid of her. Everyone took a few steps back from her and the people with beyblades hid them behind their backs. "FINE! Everyone be that way!" she knew this was definitely not her day. "I'm not that way!" said a girl who was standing at he other side of the dish. She had blonde hair down to her shoulders and she was wearing a long pale pink skirt and she had a light blue T-shirt on. "3.2.1 Let it rip!" screamed someone from the crowd. There beyblades circlaed the dish a couple of times and then Marisa and the girl went in for the kill. "Destroy her Missy!" yelled Marisa. "Take her out Busta!" screamed the blonde girl. Then there was a loud crash and everyone watching stood there, mouths open.