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Nico's POV

"But dad, why cant I take Cerberus to camp? He will love Mrs.O'Leary."

"Because he has to stay down here with me in the underworld. He is the best security system, except for the furies," he replied.

"Fine, but can I at least ride him there and I will tell him to go back."

"Okay but he better be back in 30 minutes."

"Sweet, come on Cerberus! Time to go to Camp Halfblood. You will love it there."
Now that I have some time, I'll explain things to you. First of all, I'm a halfblood, the son of Hades. Cerberus is a huge three headed ferocious dog that surprisingly likes red balls and he lives in the underworld. His best friend is Mrs.O'Leary. Mrs.O'Leary is a huge hellhound that was Daedalus's, but is now Percy's pet.

Percy's POV

"Hey, Conner can you or your brother take my shift for sword fighting lessons? I have to go get Mrs.O'Leary. I see Nico coming riding on Cerberus."

"Sure," Conner said, "I'll take your shift if you go hippocambi riding tonight."

"Fine, but only for an hour. Rainbow gets tired with someone on her back."

That night at dinner, I had some pizza. But Mrs.O'leary insisted on sitting by me. So every time I looked around, I would have one less piece of pizza. After dinner I had to take Conner Hippocambi back riding. But Rainbow was fine with it. She said she was going to go for a swim anyways. Hippocambi are water horses that have Rainbow scales, just if you were wondering.

Apollo's POV

Today I knew Zeus was angry because right when I got up, I saw a note that Zeus left,

WHEN YOU GET UP YOU BETTER GET TO THE MEETING ROOM RIGHT AWAY. OUR HEISTA WILL BE THE NEXT OLYMPIAN.

So right when I got up, I sprinted to the meeting room because I liked being an olympian. When I got there, Zeus was not impressed even though I was the first one there. He yelled at the top of his lungs, "you're late!" Then right when I sat down, Hera came in and I was happy she came in so he would start yelling at her and not me. But instead, he said, "oh Hera, you are so early I'm impressed!" in the nicest voice I've ever heard Zeus use. Right after Hera went to the bathroom, he started yelling at me again until Hera came back in. After everybody came in Zeus started talking. What he said bewildered me. He said that he was has recently been contacted by Chiron and he told him that he has found a really powerful halfblood. He has not been claimed yet but he thought that he might be a son of Gaea. But that wasn't possible because she was asleep. But with his powers it's questionable.

Percy's POV

Right when I got up I knew something was wrong which the way wasn't very bright of me because Tyson left a not saying,
somting as rong
So I went outside to see what was wrong but that wasn't very hard to figure out because the hole camp was destroyed cabins falling into the ground the climbing wall was sinking in something that looked like quick sand. And all of a sudden when I was looking at my half finished pepperoni pizza being being eaten by the earth I started sinking. Its like the earth was trying to eat us up and that could only mean one thing, Gaea.