Mushra's New Life
Prologue
After defeating Lanacuras, Mushra felt sad because when he had been informed of his past, he was informed that if he called upon his celestial powers, he would have to return to the Celestial Heavens and become the protector of Shinzo and Enterra like he was before he was placed on Enterra. (This was when he gave up his immortality to imprison Lanacuras; his guardian friends placed him on Enterra.) Mushra was happy because he would see his old friends again but have to leave Sago and all his other new friends behind
This is the prologue to my 1st fanfic. It's an alternative ending to the 2nd timeline. Do you think it's good? I'd love to know what you think but don't be too harsh as it's my 1st fanfic and also any ideas for a better title or new character.
Prologue
After defeating Lanacuras, Mushra felt sad because when he had been informed of his past, he was informed that if he called upon his celestial powers, he would have to return to the Celestial Heavens and become the protector of Shinzo and Enterra like he was before he was placed on Enterra. (This was when he gave up his immortality to imprison Lanacuras; his guardian friends placed him on Enterra.) Mushra was happy because he would see his old friends again but have to leave Sago and all his other new friends behind
This is the prologue to my 1st fanfic. It's an alternative ending to the 2nd timeline. Do you think it's good? I'd love to know what you think but don't be too harsh as it's my 1st fanfic and also any ideas for a better title or new character.