Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Zoidian terms/names/zoids... hey that sounds weird, Zoidian zoids.. Well anyway, I don't own them.
Summary: You know that all the organoids have an Ancient Zoidian... except for Shadow. What if Raven was a part Ancient Zoidian, and they didn't know? What if the A/Zoidian blood was slowly killing him?
Rating: PG-13 - for safety.
A/N: never mind the totally meaningless title.. I might change it. Well, here's the first chapter and hope you like it! And REVIEW PLEASE! Flames and Stones accepted. Oh, and the whole Reese/Reiss/Ryss thing, I just decided that the original Japanese term, Rize looks MUCH more nicer, so I decided to use Rize. Might change to Ryss [my second-fav] in another story.
The Lost
Chapter 1: the Discovery
Written by. Firemoon
It was a clear, bright morning, and Rize found herself humming some merry tune as she walked around the -for once- newly-built Guardian Force base which was located in somewhere green.
Yes, she had joined the Guardian Force.. but not in that sense. She just thought [and secretly, them] to give them a second chance and also try them out for a bit- and that was already a year ago. She stopped her humming when she remembered how Raven had left her with nothing but a blanket and Spacula, and felt the old pent-up anger rising inside her.
"To hell with him! That stuck-up, arrogant smirking bastard. I DON'T care about him. I don't, I don't, I don't..."
Snaring to herself, she angrily kicked a small stone that has happened to be by her boot. It flew into the nearby bush, and made a strange clanking sound of stone striking metal. But Rize, muttering the mantra to herself and her mood completely spoiled, turned around and started to walk back to the base.
...She was completely oblivious to the blackish-purple metallic head that shot out and stared after her with its blue eyes.
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"Good morning, Dr. D."
"Good morning to you too, Rize. Pancakes?"
"Yes please.. Thank you, Doc."
Rize piled some more syrup and butter to her plate and walked over to the table where Van, Fiona, and Moonbei were sitting. Fiona smiled at Rize, who smiled back as easily as her now. Dr. Di came and sat beside her, and passed another bottle of salt to her-Fiona had used up the other one-.
"Rize, have you seen anything strange lately?"
Van mumbled as he gulped down some water. Rize raised her head questioningly.
"No, why?"
"Well, you see, the area had been strangely quiet lately, and.. he doesn't seem to be causing any damage anymore. Something's not normal."
Rize flinched a little- just barely, so nobody had noticed. She made her voice as normal as possible.
"I s'ppose that the stupid baka finally settled down. I told him that wandering around isn't going to help him get his memory back."
Van gave her a disbelieving smile. He was quite trusting, but he still felt a little bit uneasy with Raven, especially if he hadn't been seen for the past year.
"Relax, Van. He might be a good citizen now."
"But it's been quiet lately.. a little too quiet."
As soon as Van said that, the alarm bell went off. Van looked at the shocked faces around him, and shrugged.
"I told you so. Never be slack."
"-Look who's talking."
Irvine's palm crashed into Van's spiky head and Van yelped, jumping. The older man regarded the boy silently.
"I told you to clean out the cockpit of that zoid of yours. It smells like shit."
"Hey!"
A uniformed soldier ran towards them and saluted smartly.
"Sirs, a black organoid is seen heading towards the base. It will be in a firing distance in 1 minute and 30 seconds as we speak. Shall we shoot?"
"Raven."
They said in union, looking at each other's faces. Rize stood up, and her face was as white as the tablecloth.
"No, Van. Please."
"Huh?"
"Please, don't shoot Shadow, Raven might be in danger."
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A minute later, they were all standing outside, looking at the approaching organoid. Rize and Van took Spacula and Zeek with them, for fear of attack although Rize did not think so. Van muttered as Shadow prepared to land.
"This is hopeless. Shadow could overcome both Spacula and Zeek if he tried hard enough, and Raven can easily lame one of them, too."
"I don't think he will attack. Look, he landed."
And slowly, cautiously, they approached the unmoving form of the black organoid. Spacula and Zeek growled something, and he answered something back. Rize and Van both took a step closer, and Shadow immediately opened his breastplate and raven crumpled to the ground as the countless cords that held him disappeared. Rize shot forward.
"Raven!"
She turned him over, and all of them could see how thin he had become, but strangely relieved to see that he was still breathing. White breath wheezed out of him as he breathed out the still cold morning air. Dr. Di, however, became grave and serious all of a sudden and quickly went towards Raven and Rize. Fiona, after the reassuring look towards Van, followed Dr. Di.
"Hurry up, carry him to the Infirmary... Dr. Di? What are you doing?"
Dr. Di was trying to find any cuts, and finding none, called towards Van.
"Van? Your knife, if you please."
Without giving Rize a time to say anything, he made a very small cut in his arm. Rize stopped in mid-taking in breath, and she finally stuttered out.
"Doc? Why...why is his blood.. purple?"
And she was right. Everyone looked at Raven's pale skinned arm as a thin line of blood poured out, leaving a trail that was as purple as his eyes.
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Hehe... hey! I've done my best! Well, hope you liked it and PLEASE, PLEASE post a REVIEW!! I'll appreciate your KINDNESS and GENTLE NATURE if you PLEASE show some MERCY ON ME.
-Firemoon
Summary: You know that all the organoids have an Ancient Zoidian... except for Shadow. What if Raven was a part Ancient Zoidian, and they didn't know? What if the A/Zoidian blood was slowly killing him?
Rating: PG-13 - for safety.
A/N: never mind the totally meaningless title.. I might change it. Well, here's the first chapter and hope you like it! And REVIEW PLEASE! Flames and Stones accepted. Oh, and the whole Reese/Reiss/Ryss thing, I just decided that the original Japanese term, Rize looks MUCH more nicer, so I decided to use Rize. Might change to Ryss [my second-fav] in another story.
The Lost
Chapter 1: the Discovery
Written by. Firemoon
It was a clear, bright morning, and Rize found herself humming some merry tune as she walked around the -for once- newly-built Guardian Force base which was located in somewhere green.
Yes, she had joined the Guardian Force.. but not in that sense. She just thought [and secretly, them] to give them a second chance and also try them out for a bit- and that was already a year ago. She stopped her humming when she remembered how Raven had left her with nothing but a blanket and Spacula, and felt the old pent-up anger rising inside her.
"To hell with him! That stuck-up, arrogant smirking bastard. I DON'T care about him. I don't, I don't, I don't..."
Snaring to herself, she angrily kicked a small stone that has happened to be by her boot. It flew into the nearby bush, and made a strange clanking sound of stone striking metal. But Rize, muttering the mantra to herself and her mood completely spoiled, turned around and started to walk back to the base.
...She was completely oblivious to the blackish-purple metallic head that shot out and stared after her with its blue eyes.
----------------
"Good morning, Dr. D."
"Good morning to you too, Rize. Pancakes?"
"Yes please.. Thank you, Doc."
Rize piled some more syrup and butter to her plate and walked over to the table where Van, Fiona, and Moonbei were sitting. Fiona smiled at Rize, who smiled back as easily as her now. Dr. Di came and sat beside her, and passed another bottle of salt to her-Fiona had used up the other one-.
"Rize, have you seen anything strange lately?"
Van mumbled as he gulped down some water. Rize raised her head questioningly.
"No, why?"
"Well, you see, the area had been strangely quiet lately, and.. he doesn't seem to be causing any damage anymore. Something's not normal."
Rize flinched a little- just barely, so nobody had noticed. She made her voice as normal as possible.
"I s'ppose that the stupid baka finally settled down. I told him that wandering around isn't going to help him get his memory back."
Van gave her a disbelieving smile. He was quite trusting, but he still felt a little bit uneasy with Raven, especially if he hadn't been seen for the past year.
"Relax, Van. He might be a good citizen now."
"But it's been quiet lately.. a little too quiet."
As soon as Van said that, the alarm bell went off. Van looked at the shocked faces around him, and shrugged.
"I told you so. Never be slack."
"-Look who's talking."
Irvine's palm crashed into Van's spiky head and Van yelped, jumping. The older man regarded the boy silently.
"I told you to clean out the cockpit of that zoid of yours. It smells like shit."
"Hey!"
A uniformed soldier ran towards them and saluted smartly.
"Sirs, a black organoid is seen heading towards the base. It will be in a firing distance in 1 minute and 30 seconds as we speak. Shall we shoot?"
"Raven."
They said in union, looking at each other's faces. Rize stood up, and her face was as white as the tablecloth.
"No, Van. Please."
"Huh?"
"Please, don't shoot Shadow, Raven might be in danger."
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A minute later, they were all standing outside, looking at the approaching organoid. Rize and Van took Spacula and Zeek with them, for fear of attack although Rize did not think so. Van muttered as Shadow prepared to land.
"This is hopeless. Shadow could overcome both Spacula and Zeek if he tried hard enough, and Raven can easily lame one of them, too."
"I don't think he will attack. Look, he landed."
And slowly, cautiously, they approached the unmoving form of the black organoid. Spacula and Zeek growled something, and he answered something back. Rize and Van both took a step closer, and Shadow immediately opened his breastplate and raven crumpled to the ground as the countless cords that held him disappeared. Rize shot forward.
"Raven!"
She turned him over, and all of them could see how thin he had become, but strangely relieved to see that he was still breathing. White breath wheezed out of him as he breathed out the still cold morning air. Dr. Di, however, became grave and serious all of a sudden and quickly went towards Raven and Rize. Fiona, after the reassuring look towards Van, followed Dr. Di.
"Hurry up, carry him to the Infirmary... Dr. Di? What are you doing?"
Dr. Di was trying to find any cuts, and finding none, called towards Van.
"Van? Your knife, if you please."
Without giving Rize a time to say anything, he made a very small cut in his arm. Rize stopped in mid-taking in breath, and she finally stuttered out.
"Doc? Why...why is his blood.. purple?"
And she was right. Everyone looked at Raven's pale skinned arm as a thin line of blood poured out, leaving a trail that was as purple as his eyes.
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hehe... hey! I've done my best! Well, hope you liked it and PLEASE, PLEASE post a REVIEW!! I'll appreciate your KINDNESS and GENTLE NATURE if you PLEASE show some MERCY ON ME.
-Firemoon