THIS STORY WILL HAVE A COMPLETE OVERHAUL.
Now I DON'T KNOW WHEN I'LL REWRITE IT BUT BE AWARE THAT IT IS PROBABLY DUE TO AT LEAST ONE OF THE FOLLOWING REASONS
It is poorly written and have a mixture of spelling and grammar errors (aka poorly written)
It was poorly researched (Could mean anything here and as such, expect the rewrite to be less...judgmental for the lack of a better word)
It feels rushed
ALL OF ABOVE
IF YOU STILL WANT TO READ THIS STORY, THEN GO ON RIGHT AHEAD, BUT PLEASE TAKE THE ABOVE NOTICE IN CONSIDERATION BEFORE READING.
