I do not own Merlin and this is my first fan-fiction so be nice, my spelling and grammar is not perfect as I am dyslexic but I am looking for some to prove read my work. Please enjoy I am always looking for improvements.
All spells are writing in their English translation. They are in italics,
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Chapter 1: The Plan and the Deals
Previously
On the Day Morgause awakes the Knights of Medhir, to kill Uther Pendragon, and everyone falls asleep apart from Merlin, Arthur and Morgana. In the Castle Merlin goes see's the Dragon to find a cure to awake everyone but deals with the Great Dragon's freedom, the next deal is with Arthur last moments before he goes fight all the knights while Merlin and Morgana get away to safety with Uther, he makes a deal which costs him dearly that he promised Arthur he would project Uther and Morgana to his grave. His final deal is bargain with Morgana's life to save Camelot after he poisons Morgana with Hemlock, Morgause stops the spell and Merlin shows Morgause the poison he used.
To the present
Arthur enters the Great hall tired from fighting the knights as Uther awakes and starts arising to his feet while Morgause hugs Morgana and summons a whirlwind to teleport away from Camelot's' boarders Merlin rushes into the whirlwind and tells Arthur
"Do not worry Arthur I will keep her safe as I promised no harm shall come to her" and Merlin vanishes with Morgana and Morgause, leaving a devastated Arthur as he sank to his knees and Uther walks up to Arthur saying "thanks for saving the kingdom and do not worry about Morgana its my fault I am to blame since I am here to project her and Merlin will look after her who know what he like when it comes saving the royal family of Pendragon he saved you the first day he met you remember just make sure patrols are looking for her constantly".
Meanwhile down under the dungeons of Camelot Kilgarrah roars Merlin!
Just outside Camelot boarders in Merlin's hometown of Elydor, Merlin arrives with Morgause and Morgana, as they both do whatever they can to heal her while Merlin goes off to find the herbs need to save her, as Morgause casts a healing spell. It takes a week for Morgana to regain consciences, but during that time Merlin and Morgause are busy curing Morgana they don't fight talk only focusing on her safety, unfortunately for Merlin once Morgana is back on her feet, he is restrained by magical chains, being questioned and tortured by Morgause and Morgana, by slipping him a truth potion, which coursed through this veins.
"Why did you poison me?"
"I was told that you were the source of the sleeping spell by the great dragon hidden under Camelot, he told me this for his freedom which he so sorely needs, of which I seen in the crystal cave the doom of Camelot with his freedom."
"How could you see the future in the crystal cave, only some one of the high priest and high priestess can see the future apart in the crystal cave?"
"I am special, since I was born with magic, and the druids call me Emrys and to prove it I shall break these chains and get rid of the truth potion, I command the chains to release me and let the truth serum by gone." Merlin's eyes shown bright with gold as the shackles of the chain broke and the truth potion being breathed out of his lungs in a deadly grey shade, the sisters were shocked with a gasp escaping Morgana's breath.
Meanwhile in Camelot Gaius was panicking, that his ward was off with Morgause and heard nothing, knowing the destiny that they were against Merlin in the destiny of Albion left him nothing but worried and could not focus enough to make herbal remedies without making mistakes. However he was not alone for poor Arthur he locked himself in his room, no one could enter, apart from George but even he was kicked out quickly and Uther is perplex not able to do anything but fret for his son and his daughter, a secret which in time will soon be known to everyone, the council are busy trying to keep a pretence so enemies still thinks Camelot is strong but the truth is Camelot is at its weakest.
Back to Morgause and Morgana's cave, they are on their knees quiver in fright, wearing chains which Merlin cast binding them of using magic as they look at Merlin with an evil twinkle in his sapphire eyes, they were scared mainly Morgana of seeing an idiotic servant boy who see loved to a powerful man which could kill them in one spell
"Please Merlin what are you going to do to us" whispered Morgause
"Well that depends on what you do next, see I going to give you a choice either you agree with my arrange meant or disagree and I let you leave on the intention if you do anything to Camelot I will kill you, do you understand"
"Of course Morgana and I understand now what is this proposal"
"First we must go to the Isle of the Blessed, then to reawaken an old enemy who hopefully will aids us, ready here we go, conceal us and take us away to the Isle of the Blessed"
At the Isle of the Blessed Merlin releases the chains so they can help him with the chartment, Morgana and Morgause go fetching the items need, a bone of a human, a peice of clothing from the deceased, blood of a sorcerer while Merlin skectches out a circle and starts enchanting
"Bring the one I killed here, bring her back, I need her for the plan so spirits bring her back, and take Cenred's life in exchange for hers, so the laws of nature are balanced" a huge might crack of lighting hit the Isle exactly in the center of the circle where a women appeared, with long curly black hair wearing a red dress, that's tattered and torn, with her evil smile see says "What a surprise to call me back from the dead what business do you seek mainly seeing that you have two enemies by your side of your so called destiny Emrys"….
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Well that's the end of Chapter one I hope you enjoy the read, so to leave it at a minor cliff hanger but all shall be revealed soon, can anyone tell me you they thing this mystery women is. If anyone does want to proof read my work please let me know.
Next Chapter: The High priestess's choice
