Author's Note
Please take into consideration that this my first fan fiction story. Constructive criticism is welcome. I know this story is a little cliche but I enjoy reading them so I decided to write one. Al is still alive and there was no war. Tris and Tobias are not a couple yet but Tris has been through his fear landscape. So enjoy.
Chapter 1
Tris POV
I look up at the ranking for initiation
1. Tris
2. Uriah
3. Lynn
4. Marlene
5. Peter
6. Will
7. Christina
8. Al
The last two were some dauntless borns that I didn't know, but I really didn't care. I ranked first and all my friends passed initiation. My eyes looked for Tobias in the massive crowd of people. I was too busy looking for him that I accidentally bump into someone. I look up to see who I should be apologizing to but quickly frown at when I notice that the person I bumped into was Al.
"Hey Tris"
All I could do is stare at him as I flash back to him groping me has I hung over the chasm. I shiver at the thought.
"Look I'm really sorry abo-" he starts but shuts his mouth close when Tobias come near.
"Hey Tris!" Says Tobias. Al turns and quickly leaves "Um tonight Zeke is hosting a game of candor or dauntless at his apartment and I was wondering if you want to come?"
Coming from abnegation I have played no games in my childhood, they were considered selfish, but since Tobias is playing I figured that it would be alright.
"Sure" I respond as I feel heat rising to my cheeks "Can Christina and Will come to?"
"Yeah sure they can see you tonight at 6" he scratches his neck then turns and leaves quickly.
I couldn't believe it, I made it through dauntless initiation, made new friends, and got invited to my first party. Wait, I just got invited to party and I have nothing to wear. I panic and run to find Christiana.
Sorry, this is a pretty short chapter. I will start to write longer chapter once I get the game of candor and dauntless going. Please review so that I can make a better second chapter and PM me if you have ideas for dares or truths
- Marilyn