I didn't change my A/N because well, I didn't want to :p
But I edited the story and the grammar should be better, I tried to fix my mistakes and I hope I didn't miss too much.
Anyway, if someone's still reading this in December 2013 then well, I hope you'll like the story.
Disclaimer : CSI : NY is not mine, obviously, except for the OC character.
Pairing : None. Really littleDanny/Lindsay
Rating : M (I guess. I'm not shocked easily so, yeah, maybe M)
Summary : Danny get trapped in an elevator with a dangerous man.
So, I was looking for this kind of story, a long time ago, and I found none. So I've written one myself. First of all, english is not my native language (i'm french, and French are really bad in english lol -i'm kidding, i don't know how french's english is, i'm just assuming-) and i was not good at all at school in english (but i improved later (:) Grammar may be wrong and conjugation may be for sure bad, but i hope you like it anyway.
The story's already written. So, you'll have a complete story for sure - isn't that great ? ) - I'd be lying if I was saying I'm hoping review, so, I would not lie XD Reviews are welcome, mainly for my english, i'd like to know how bad i am lol, and for the story too, it'd be great. The story will not be really long (10 chapters if i don't adds some between, lol).
The first chapter is not really good (because of the english and all, sorry) i hope that in a few chapters the english will be better.
I'm done talking -i talk too much sorry- so, enjoy.
I.
The day started peacefully at the crime lab. The last case was not one of those you needed to give everything you have to solve it. A man was shot in an alley and bleed to death. Stella and Lindsay were on it and were progressing rapidly. Mac, Sheldon and Danny working on a double homicide meanwhile. A couple was killed in their home, and the three CSIs were just arriving at the lab after processing the crime scene.
Mac, Sheldon and Danny were talking about the case when Messer's phone rang.
« It's Lindsay. He said before answering. Hey Montana. He smiled, the two other CSIs watching the younger one's face change slowly.
- Danny ? Worried Mac, but his CSI didn't hear him. Danny ? He called once again after he hung up.
- It's Lucy. He blurted out, suddenly pale. She's at the hospital. His two co-workers were immediately worried.
- What ? Snapped Sheldon. Why ? What happened ?
- Hum… Lindsay… Lindsay said she's a fever… and the babysitter brought her at the hospital because the temperature was too high and she couldn't do anything. Oh god… He whispered, a hand passing in his dirty blond hair.
- Danny. The called man looked up at his boss. Go to the hospital.
- But…
- No. I'd call you when I'll need you. Your daughter needs you now.
- Lindsay's already on her way to the hospital. He argued.
- And I'm sure she would love to have you with her right now. Go check on your girls, then come back to the lab. Danny looked hesitant then sighed.
- Thanks Mac. I'll be back soon. He said then, already leaving.
- As soon as Lucy's alright. » Answered Mac and Danny smile.
Walking through the hallway up to the elevator, Danny called back Lindsay, anxiety making him chew on his lower lip.
« Hey babe, you're at the hospital ? He asked and stopped to wait the elevator. Okay, I'm on my way…Mac let me… Okay… See ya… » Then he hung up and the elevator's doors opened.
Beside Danny, two officers were in the cabin as a man wearing a suit. Mind full of preoccupations, he was not paying attention to the other people around him, too focused on his daughter right now.
He could just hope she would be alright and would be home soon.
The elevator stopped then and the officers stepped out, leaving Danny and the man inside. As the doors were closing, sudden screams alerted him and made him look up in confusion.
« Stop him ! Were screaming policemen, running from the stairs towards the elevator. Danny frowned, ignoring what was going on. STOP HIM !» The shouts were getting closer and closer, and Danny was about to stop the closing doors of the elevator when a hand pinned him against the wall.
Hissing in pain, he was met by the barrel of a gun when he looked up; his first reaction being to froze in place and reach for his own gun once the surprise passed. But the man cocked the gun closer to his face and he stopped any movement, panic rising in him.
He could hear the screams resonating in his head but he could not really hear them anymore. His eyes glued on the gun centimeters from his face.
The elevator's doors slid shut then, and the cling announced the descent. Danny could not move nor think for a few seconds.
« Your gun. Said the man, Danny blinking before the words registered in his mind and made him hesitate. Now ! The man pressed the gun against his forehead and he grabbed his weapon, handing it away without a second thought.
- What do you want ? He blurted out, looking up at the man who smirked before answering.
- Keep my freedom. Then he hit the stop button of the elevator, making it jerk abruptly until it went to a final stop. For now. » He added.
Danny looked up at the doors with panic in his eyes, wondering why this man did that. Why trap him in an elevator with him ? Would he die ?
« Wha…
- Turn around ! » Ordered the man before he could voice his thoughts.
Danny shut his mouth sharply and glared at the man. Why ? He thought but did not have time to say it that the man forced him to turn around face to the wall.
« Don't move ! » He said then, the gun pressed against his neck, which made him shiver at the contact and stopped him from trying anything.
The man searched him and before Danny could think much cuffs were around his right wrist then the bar of the elevator.
« What the… He tried to back away from the wall but the man pushed him back against it, making him grunt in pain and close his eyes.
- I said, don't. Move. Hissed the man at his ear, the gun still on his neck.
- Okay, okay… Growled Danny, putting his free hand up. Take it easy. He added.
- Don't tell me what to do ! Shouted the man in his ear, forcing a pained wince out of him, not only because of the loud sound resonating in his head but the barrel pressing forcefully against his neck's skin.
- Okay, okay… He panicked, praying he would not die today. I'm sorry. The man relaxed and stepped away from the CSI.
- Good. He smiled, walking until the opposite wall, his gun aimed at Danny who finally faced the man. They stared at each other for a minute, the CSI wondering what the man would do now.
- What now ? He asked, frustration winning on him, and the man smirked.
- We wait.
- What ? He snapped back, dumbfounded. Why ? He added when his only answer was another smirk.
- I told you… He pushed himself off the wall, gun in hand. I want to keep my freedom… And I can't leave the building for now because of your little friends. He stopped a step away from him, and Danny looked up at the man, unbelieving his bad luck as the man's plan.
- You won't step out of this building after what you did. He stated and the man smirked.
- Believe me… He stepped forward, staring straight at Danny. I will. He added in a low voice.
- How ? You're trapped in an elevator at the 24th floor with an officer against who you aimed a gun. You're screwed man. » He tried to reason, but the man just grinned and before Danny could react wrapped a hand around his throat to strangle him.
His legs slowly weakened under him, the man's hand the only thing stopping him from falling on the ground.
« Did I ask your opinion ? » He whispered at the CSI's ear.
Danny thought it was the end and he would die, but oxygen suddenly penetrated his lungs and he fell on the floor, coughing and breathing heavily; a hand on his throat.
He pushed himself in a sitting position against the wall then, a burning sensation in his throat. Sitting silently, he stared at the floor, his right arm held up because of the cuffs around his wrist and the bar.
How something like that could be happening to him ? Why him ? Was he that unlucky today ? First Lucy and now… Lucy. He thought suddenly.
He had forgotten about her for a moment and was worrying badly for her now. Biting on his lip, he clenched his fist on his knees raised against his chest to keep under control his emotions.
Lindsay would freak out, after what happened with the Irish, she would certainly be freaked out. With Lucy at the hospital he could not help feel guilty to do that to her. Scaring his wife was not one of his wish when they married, and now he would be the reason of her worries. He hoped he would get out of this alive. He did not want to think about what his wife would feel if he had to die in this elevator.
« What's on your mind ? Asked the man suddenly, and Danny glanced up at him, rage boiling in his stomach.
- Nothin' . » He blurted out, looking away.
His eyes caught some movement towards him then, and before he knew it the man was crouching in front of him, eyes locked with his.
« You wouldn't lie to me, would you ? He asked in an alarming way. Danny felt the panic raising in him once again, pushing away his anger.
- No. » He answered, praying nothing would happen to him.
The man smirked and without letting him any chance to do anything he twisted his free arm in his back, the gun pressed against his neck. The CSI cried out in a mix of pain and surprise then gritted his teeth.
« You're lying to me right now boy… He said, twisting Danny's arm even more, making him hiss in pain. And I hate liars. » He added, scaring Danny even more.
Would this psycho break his arm like this, for no reason ?
To be continued...
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