The Real Lily

Chapter 1

Dear diary

In this school are the popular people, the slightly popular, and unpopular, then there would be the outcasts and I would be one of them my name is Lily Marie Evans it's actually Lillian Marie Evans but that sounds so proper so I don't use it. I'm 15 and have long slightly curly dark red hair and really big sparkly emerald green eyes I think they're my best feature, I'm really pale and small but my old friend said I was petite but she's gone now she died when Lord Voldomort a powerful wizard, killed her family for some odd reason we're not sure of but I have a good idea but I wont write it down in here in case this falls into the wrong hands. If I didn't mention it I'm a witch and I'm in my 5th year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. After that happened to Jenn, my mum got me this to write down how I feel and not bottle it up inside like I normally do. My mum is Rose Evans and my dad Sam Evans I have a sister but we don't get along well actually not at all she calls me freak every chance she gets, she's 4 years older then me, we were ok till I got my letter from Hogwarts then we were pretty much enemies but lucky for me I know some pranks and pranked her all summer to get her off my back and to try to distract myself from Jenn's death. Well I'm at Hogwarts right now in Gryffindor common room writing in here for basically no reason what so ever except to say this is the first time I've written in it since mum got me this in august it's now July and the last day of school we go home tomorrow, so I think I'll go for a walk

Later

Lily

I closed my diary, just in time to because the marauders came in through the portrait hole and lucky me saw me, I just happen to be a favorite to pick on you know with no friends or anything. I watched them through my hair which is almost always covering my face even if it is always in a pony tail, but it's not like my huge ugly glasses I wear for no reason except to cover my face don't work, I try not to draw attention to myself especially when Jenn's gone.

"So Evans" Potter said looking down at me, I look up. See the group consist of four people though only three of them are here at the moment. There's James Potter he has raven black hair that always messy and warm dreamy hazel eyes that are slightly hidden by his wire frame glasses, and a tall fit body, he's on the Gryffindor Quidditch team as seeker, good to, he also has a smile that all girls except me and Jenn practically faint over.

Then there is Sirius Black who could be James's brother they look so much alike he has dark black hair, only neat, and dark eyes but there not cold they're warm and seem to always hold laughter even if he's not, he has a killer smile, he's as tall as Potter (5'10 ish) with a great body he's on the team to but as beater. Black is normally always hyper and hungry, Potter and Black are best mates.

Remus Lupin is the third one in the group he is the shy one of the bunch with his light brown/sandy blonde hair that slightly falls into his light blue eyes, he has a cute shy smile. He doesn't have as good a body as the other two but he's still very good looking, he's the reasonable one and is also a werewolf that he knows I know.

Last there is Peter Pettigrew who is there tag a long, he's short and tubby with blonde hair and watery blue eyes, I sort of pity him he's not exactly smart either.

The four boys make up a prankster group known as the marauders.

"What Potter?" I asked not very interested,

"Nothing really just wondering if you would go out with me?" he asked while winking at me and flashing his famous grin. I just look at him like he's totally crazy,

"No" I replied simply, everyone was shocked no one turned down James Potter people were shocked both about that and the fact that the James Potter would ask out outcast Evans, they started whispering and I saw it finally going through Potters head, Black was rolling on the floor he was laughing so hard, Remus was chuckling and Pettigrew was laughing almost exactly like Black you could so tell he was trying to imitate him, I rolled my eyes at them, Potter just stood there I muttered 'all I said was no',

"Wh…What did you say?" he asked,

"I said no, do you want to know why?" I asked him, he nodded, "ok, I wouldn't go out with you if you were the last male on earth, you are an egotistic, bloody prick, you pick on people for no bloody reason…"

"Lily I think he got the point" Remus interrupted me,

"But Remus I was on a roll, before I was so rudely interrupted" I whined glaring at him,

"Lily" he said warningly,

"But…" he gave me a look, "fine!" I huffed, I started to become aware of our surroundings, everyone was silent and watching us, "What?" I snapped, everyone went back to what they were doing, "thank you" I said, I turned back to the boys, Potter just stood there staring at me mouth hanging open, "you look like a cow, you know that?" I told him, he closed his mouth,

"Excuse me?"

"You looked like a cow," I said slowly like he was a young child, he made a funny sound, I looked at him and rolled my eyes,

"Wow Evans I didn't know you had it in you" Black said to me,

"What?"

"You actually yelled at people, your normally so shy and quiet" I had to nod at that I normally am shy and quiet barley even talk actually, but at home I'm different, way different, I had to roll my eyes at what he said next, "it must be the red hair. Now if we could see it out of that ponytail" he started advancing, I backed up and looked at Remus and asked him with my eyes to help,

"No I would actually like to see"

"Well I don't so" I stuck my tongue out at them then pulled it back in quick I didn't want them to know I have my tongue pierced even my parents didn't know, or that I have my belly and nose, but whatever,

"No what's that I see on your tongue Evans?" Potter asked me,

"What is this become obsessed with how Evans looks like day you don't care member? I'm just an outcast. Why do you care?" I whined before I sealed my lips shut, then Black froze me I glared at him, he came up be hide me and pulled the elastic out of my hair and I could tell he was surprised by how soft it was and the fact that it went more then half way down my back, "not bad Evans, now if we got ride of those glasses" Potter came and grabbed my glasses, I glared daggers at him and the others, "holy shit Evans, who would of thought you were somewhat pretty, now if you had a figure" I blushed, "I still want to know what's on your tongue, Padfoot is there any way I can see her tongue" he nodded, shit, "what is it" Black gave it to him and he said the spell, and I found myself sticking my tongue out they gasped I rolled my eyes,

"Who woulda thought perfect Lily Evans has her tongue pierced and is actually pretty" he unfroze me and I ran from the room.

3rd person's POV

The marauders were shocked how could ugly loner Evans be pretty? "Who wants to bet she has a good figure?"

"I will" James said, "how much?"

"3 galleons, oh and she forgot her glasses" Sirius told the others, Remus shook his head at them,

"We'll give them back to her tomorrow" Remus said,

"Who woulda thought that she had her tongue pierced, oh I don't know if we'll be able to give her, her glasses because we leave tomorrow"

"Right" they went up to there dorms,

"Do you want to go for a fly?" James asked, they nodded and grabbed their brooms and headed down to the quidditch pitch but someone was already there and they were a good flyer and a girl! Judging by the long hair and feminine curves visible from here, she stopped suddenly and saw them and turned and flew over the forbidden forest then down, they flew after her and when they came to the spot where they saw her dive the broom was hovering above the ground, they had just landed when they heard a shriek and a Griffin came flying out of the woods it landed in front of the marauders, they were shocked they had never seen a Griffin before, "Padfoot lets change it might not hurt animals we'll have to protect Moony" he nodded, him and Sirius changed into there animagus forms James a silvery stag and Sirius a big black shaggy dog,

Who are u? the griffin demanded of the boys,

'I'm Prongs' James answered, thinking her voice sounded familiar, 'that's Padfoot, and that's Moony, and you are?'

Eneyla

"Eneyla?" Remus asked, that's Lily is Elvish he thought, Lily realized that he knew elvish

Remus only u can hear me right now, please don't tell them please and I won't tell about them or blab about you as if I would anyways but…

Of course I won't Lily

Thanks Remus

Welcome, was that you flying?

Yes

Your good

Thanks

'do u know who that broom belongs to?' Prongs voice interrupted their conversation,

yes

'whose is it then?' Padfoot asked,

a girl

'no really' Padfoot said sarcastically, the griffin rolled her eyes,

"you know you can turn back to normal it would be easier for me" Remus told them, James and Sirius turned back,

"sorry" they both said,

"it's ok, so who's is it Eneyla" Remus asked her,

Lily

"Lily Evans?" James asked incredulously, the Griffin nodded her head,

"so she does have a good figure then, pass over that 3 galleons Prongs" Sirius said putting his hand out to James, the griffin reared up and snarled, "sorry, sorry, do you know her?"

yes you could say that, Remus started to laugh,

"what?"

"nothing"

"so where is she?"

why do you want to know?

"we wanted to know who was flying and since it's her we can…." He trailed off but was still moving his mouth,

you cannot lie in a griffin's presence

"oh"

"well we'll be going now" Remus interrupted, Eneyla nodded, the boys got on there brooms and flew back to the castle.

That was close Eneyla thought changing back into Lily, she got back onto her broom and flew to her dorms open window and went to bed.

A/N hope you liked, i know its kind of confusing but work with me please!

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