Usual disclaimer i do not own One piece this is a non profit fan made parody story all characters and ideas belong to their original owners, anyone caught trying to make money from this fanfic should be reported at once, hope you enjoy
Hey everyone this is a new story i'm thinking of writing ill make a chapter or 2 and wait for some reviews to let me know what you guys think and if i should processed with it, so if you like where its going please leave a review and ill keep working on it.
First review is from Luke Eden who has suggested i give Nathaniel a nick name Nate to for easier Read i will be doing this in all future chapters (3 and on if i want to do more i'm thinking ill stop around 5 and wait for more reviews and suggestions)
Also don't judged the chapters, grammar, spelling to much as i said i'm not sure if i'm ready to commit to this story yet, but if i do ill be adding lost more stuff to it thinking of aiming for around 15 - 20 chapters in total if i do want to commit to it but for now only expect 4 or 5
Right I've added more the chapter 3 and uploaded part of chapter 4 (yay i get to write more about Nate playing with him and what i'm going to do with him is fun) as i said i may only do 1 more chapter then i'm stopping till either i get some reviews with ideas where to go or inspiration hits so enjoy for now
Ok guys the other half of chapter 4 is up ill start of chapter 5 soon and that will be it as i said im still unsure if im going to finish this story so might be a wait for other uploads, also if anyone has read my other story One piece Times up ill be uploading new chapters to that soon