Ok everyone this is only my second story on ff please review and tell me what you think should I continue? Keep in mind I don't have a beta if you like the story so far and would like to add suggestions or give any tips write a review or send me a message  tell me what you would like to see happen next etc., etc.

This is my rewrite of what should have happened instead of what happened in keg max!

Rory and Jess are upstairs in Kyle's parents' bedroom. She went upstairs looking for him and there he was. Moping in the dark. Soon after she came up, as always when they were together, they started to kiss. This kiss was different though. Rory could feel it. There was a sense of urgency and sadness as Jess slipped his tongue into her mouth. Rory pulled back feeling that something wasn't right.

"Jess what's wrong? You have been looking forward to this party. Why are you up here all alone?"

"It's nothing I was just feeling crowded down there."

"Oh." Rory replies still knowing that something isn't right. She is determined to get to the nub of the matter. Though she has to do it in a way Jess is comfortable with. It has taken her a long time to get Jess to open up to her and he still has a lot of walls up.

"Jess, lets go. We can take a walk."

"Are you sure?"

"Yah, its no problem. You're right it is getting kind of stuffy down there."

Rory and Jess leave Kyle's bedroom hand in hand. Dean, who is standing on the stairs with Lindsay, sees them leaving the bedroom. He never really got over Rory and he still pokes his nose in where it doesn't belong.

When they pass him he grabs Rory's arm.

"Rory are you ok?" Dean asks with a concerned expression on his face.

Jess is standing there observing all of this. He never got why Rory just couldn't cut her ties with this guy. Jess considers him to be borderline stalkerish. Rory has told Jess time and time again that Dean had always been a good boyfriend and she has no reason to be rude. So Rory, always being polite, laughs off Dean's comment. "Of course Dean. Why wouldn't I be?"

She then turns around to leave. Dean grabs her arm again. Jess interjects, "Your getting a little handsy there don't you think bag boy."

Dean looks at him and then back to Rory with a frustrated expression on his face.

"Rory, What were you doing up there in that bedroom?" Dean asks sternly.

Lindsay also sees this is going a little to far says timidly "Dean maybe we should leave."

Rory doesn't like where this is going. "Dean let go of my arm." Rory says politely but at the same time sternly and without a flinch.

Dean isn't pleased with this answer. This time he screams. "RORY WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN THERE WITH HIM?"

Lindsay grabs his arm, "Dean I think we should go. You've had a little to much to drink."

He shrugs Lindsay off his arm.

Jess has had enough. You can see it in his eyes. This is just not the right night. Not after all he has been through today. He was already hanging on by a thread. He had tried to keep his cool for Rory. Now he just can't take it. Bag boy needs to be put in his place.

Jess shoves Dean off of Rory. He then grabs her hand and they continue down the stairs. They are heading towards the door when Dean runs up and grabs Jess and punches him in the face.

We all know what happens from there. Jess and Dean are all over the place. Throwing each other down. Fists hitting skin, each boy has blood on them somewhere. With tears running down her face, Rory is screaming at them to stop. They are eventually thrown outside. Rory follows not knowing what to do. She has to many thoughts in her head to actually act. Jess and Dean are eventually pulled off of each other. It isn't a minute after when the cops show up. Jess goes walking away and Rory follows. Not before shooting a withering stare at Dean.

"Jess wait!" Rory screams while trying to catch up with him.

He stops and turns around; blood is dripping down his face. "Are you ok?" She asks sheepishly.

"Yah, I'm fine. Are you ok? He got a little rough with you back there."

"Yes, I'm fine."

Rory then engulfs him into a hug. He stands there for a minute, and then wraps his arms around her. Jess and Rory don't really hug much. Sure there is passion between them. They cant be together very long before they end up horizontal on the couch. A hug though, a hug is different. A hug represents care and concern. Rory eventually lets go. She looks Jess in his eyes.

"I'm sorry."

"For what. You didn't sick bag boy on me."

"I know but I know you've had a crappy day and I know you wanted to leave earlier and I didn't." Tears are now streaming down her face. "If we just would have left then this wouldn't have happened."

Jess once again wraps his arms around her. He always knew Rory cared about him but tonight things had changed between them. Rory had thought more about Jess and left when she saw him upstairs. Jess had waited for Rory when she was running up behind him. Normally he would have just kept going and not looked back. It's at this moment with Rory crying in his arms that he realizes something.

"I love you." Jess says.

Rory pulls back from the hug but remains in his arms. She looks him in the eyes and kisses him. Rory and Jess had kissed many times but this kiss was different. Jess could feel it. There were no walls, no glass. Just honesty. Jess pulls back.

"But because I love you there's something I have to tell you. I want to be honest." He pauses for a minute, gathers his thoughts, and starts talking again. "Rory, I can't take you to the prom."

She doesn't interrupt. Rory just continues to look him in the eyes and listen.

"I can't take you to the prom because I'm not graduating. I missed to many days. I found out today and I didn't know how to tell you."

Rory doesn't say anything. She just continues to look into his eyes. She then attacks his lips with hers. He is surprised by this gesture. Jess didn't know what to expect. This definitely wasn't it. It takes him a while to react. But when he does it's worth the wait. He licks her bottom lip asking for access to her mouth. She obliges. They stay that way for a couple minutes then she pulls away. "Wow", is all that can escape Jess' lips.

"Jess, I love you. Lets take a walk."

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