I am currently re-writing this story.
it's awful looking back over what I've come up with
I just stare at it thinking "how could I write something as crappy as this"
Anyhoo... Here is the new chapter, revamped and ready to be read all over again
even if the first few paragraphs have remained untouched
Disclaimer: I wish...
By The Way...
I changed my pen name..
I was previously 'Klutzinator'
Bella's POV
Splash!
"Hey what was that for?"
I glared at the inhumanly beautiful person treading water a couple of feet ahead of me. His sodden bronze hair plastered against his head. My accusing glare didn't last long as a tidal wave of water and chlorine hit me from behind.
Emmett.
Edward shot a devilish grin at me and dived under-water
"Don't forget to breathe" I muttered sarcastically under my breath unsure of whether vampires could hear underwater or not, either way Emmett heard me and shook the walls with his booming laughter. Why did the Cullens have to get a swimming pool? What do vampires need with a swimming pool? Stupid question, for all I know they could enjoy swimming as much as the next invincible, non-breathing, not-even-supposed-to-exist creature.
Distracted by my thoughts, I suddenly realised I couldn't trust Edward when I couldn't see him. I searched the glass clear water for him but he was no where. Suddenly a pair of ice-cold hands grabbed my ankles and pulled me under the water.
"Edward!" I screamed as soon as I surfaced
"Guess again" a deep bass voice boomed from behind me
"Emmett, have you seen Edward?"
"I saw him with Alice a second ago. She looked a bit dazed, I think she had a vision"
I decided to go check up on them, find out what the vision was about, for all I know next week I could be sleeping in New Zealand due to Edward's over-reactions when it came to my safety.
In a house this big where would you start looking. I decided Alice's room would be a good place to start. No one in there, maybe Edward's room. No one there either. I turned to head downstairs and got the fright of my life. Rosalie was standing over me; she was taller up close.
"Bella" she said so quietly I had to strain my ears, "Bella you'd better come downstairs". She was gone before I could ask her what was going on. Obediently I went downstairs and sat on the large white couch next to Jasper, who looked rather downcast.
"Okay, what's going on?" I demanded as I looked around the room, everyone was there except for Edward and Alice. "What's happened? Is everything okay? Where's Edward… and Alice? Oh my god what's happened to them? Are they okay?" I started hyperventilating.
"Bella, calm down" Jasper said as he put his hand on my shoulder. A calming wave washed over me and my breathing became normal again.
"I still want to know what happened"
Carlisle came and sat on my other side; "I'm sorry Bella."
Now I was really worried, if Carlisle was apologising to me then something really bad must've happened. And I had to find out what that really bad something was. Now.
"Will someone please tell me what's going on right now before I lose my mind".
Emmett laughed quietly to himself and whispered something to Rosalie whom, although trying to hide it was laughing quietly as well.
With lightning speed, Jasper picked up a book from the coffee table and hurtled it at Emmett who stopped laughing immediately
"I think we should tell her," he said after a few minutes silence "or at least give her the note."
Esme crossed the room, slowly, slower than I had ever seen a vampire move before. When she was standing in front of me she handed me a small piece of paper, I recognised the same elegant script I had seen that first time Edward spoke to me in Bio.
Bella.
Alice and I had to leave; we couldn't keep this a secret anymore. It was too hard on both of us, Alice especially. It's better that you found out this way rather than walking in on us. I fell in love with her when I left you last year, when she came back to Forks to see you I went to the Volturi. It wasn't because Rose thought you'd killed yourself, when you showed up in Volterra I had to pretend you were the reason I was going to commit suicide. Sorry.
Goodbye my love.
Edward.
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Faith
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