This is my first story based mainly on Abhirika and some on Abhi-Daya friendship. plz tell am i capable of writing story. after reading this one.
Chap 1
At Night(9:30pm)
Abhijeet's home-
Abhijeet in his bedroom and lying on his bed. He was looking at something smiling. Then suddenly Daya entered in his room and Abhijeet hid the the thing behind him. Daya noticed that and begun to ask Abhi about that.
Daya(questioning): kya baat hai abhijeet, kya dekh rahe the tum? or musse dekh ker tumne apne piche kya chupaya hain?
Abhi(scared): are yaar kuch nahi hain. meto bas yunhi...
Daya: are zara dekhu to sahi wo hai kya hai jise dekh ker tum muskora rahe the aur achanak se chupa liya?
Abhi(trying to be normal): mein..
Daya(teasing): ha tum. aur koun mein...
Abhi(could'nt understand what to do): kya daya tum bhi na...
Daya: mein kya?
saying this daya grab the thing from Abhi's hand from his behind.
Daya(smiling and tesing): accha to ye baat ha. janab ki photo dekh rahe the aur akele akele muskora rahe the. Kya baat ha abhijeet tum to bare chupe rustam nikle...
Abhi(shyly): oh accha. mein Tarika ji ki nahi hum sabka wo picnic wali photos(Holiday murder case) dekh raha tha jo Freedy ki gaw me kiche the.
Daya(teasing): are boss pakde gaye to juth bol rahe ho. boss tum hum se kuch nahi chupa sakte. agar tum hum sabke photos dekh rahe the to ye Tarika aur tumhare satme khichi hue photo khuli kyu hain. sach batao tum yehi dekh rahe the na...
Abhi(could'nt understand what to do): kya Daya tum to piche hi par gaye. ab mere tang kichne ki elawa tumse raha nahi jatana.
Daya(naughtyly): Boss kya kare hum? hume tumhe tang karne mein bohot maza ata hein!
Abhi: tum aur tumhare adat aur khana. kabhi nehi sudhar sakte...
Daya: ye to hein. By the way, tumhara tabiyat ab kaisa hein? bukhar utra ki nahi.
[abhijeet had high fever. so he was in home for taking rest.]
Abhi: ha ab bilkul thik hu.
Daya: aur tumne dawai li?
Abhi: ha matlab nahi...mein bas abhi lenehi wala tha ki tu agaya...
Daya: ha muse pata hein tum kitna sach bol rahe ho. agar mein yaad nahi dilaya hota na to tum kabhi dawai nahi lete...
Abhi: nahi yaar saach me mein...
Daya(ordering): ab kuch nahi. pehle tum dawai lo baad mein baat kate hein...
saying this Daya got a glass of water and tablets in his hand and gave to Abhijeet. Abhijeet took the medicine without saying like a 5 years child.
Abhi: bas ho gaya. le li medicines. abto khush mere bhai.
Daya: ha ab bolo kya bolna hai.
Abhi: wo beauro mein jada kaam to nahi tha na. matlab mein nahi tha aur naya koi case to nai aya na...
Daya: ha tha ek naya case. baas chori ka case tha. 4-5 ghante mehi chor pakda gaya.
Abhi: pata nahi log ye sab karte kyon hain.
Suddenly Abhijeet got a sms and became happy. Daya noticed shyly smile on Abhi's face and asked him about that.
Daya: kya baat hein Abhijeet Achanak smile kyun kar rahe ho. kiska sms hein. mein bhi to dekhu.
Abhi(shyly): nahi kuch nahi. wo bas aise hi. mere ek dost ka mms hein aur kuch nahi...
Daya(teasing): ha wo thik hein hume bhi to pata chale ye dost hein kon?
Abhi: Daya tum bhi na. mein bas abhi ata hoon
Daya: kaha ja rahe ho tum?
Abhi: mein kahi nahi...wo mein bathroom ja raha tha.
Daya: thik hein. jaldi ana.
As soon as Abhi went to bathroom, Daya begun to laugh and...
Daya(thinking): ye Abhijeet bhi na. kitna sharmata hein. chupke chupke Tarika ki photo dekhta hein aur smile karta hein. mein kuch puch ta hoon to baat tal deta hein ya pher sharma jata hein. pata nahi ye kab dil khol ke baat karna sikhega.
Now think, whoose mms has Abhijeet got and why did he went to bathroom?