Ok, this is my first story and I am really proud of it and where it goes. I would really appreciate it if you read the whole thing and reviewed so I could get some feedback, because I want to know if I am doing ok! :) So let me know! I do not own maximum Ride, but I do own this story and it's original characters. Max will be in it and I am pretty sure you guys will be happy with the ending, thanks! -Seadiva
Fang's P.O.V.
I still don't feel as though i have left the flock, I wake up look around waiting to see Nudge pop up in front of me
and try to carry on a conversation, or Iggy and Gazzy making some type of explosive that was sure to help us get
out of a situation as usual. While Max, unsuccessfully, tries to untangle angel's golden locks we had all come to
love. Where was Dylan you ask? The latest edition to our flock, or now just max's flock, would be watching Max
with admiration clearly expressed on his face.
It's been nearly two weeks since, and probably the most painful of my life, and thats saying allot. But I cant go
back, they are not safe when I am around. Too many distractions, which is why I had to leave. It's hard but I'll live,
trying to put old memories behind me, and focus on the present and future, instead of dwelling on the past.
I had flown out of colorado , towards the east coast. Im somewhere in North Carolina going to catch the first bus to
a rumored mutant hang out, as weird as that sounds. Hopefully to find some other bird kids, and teach them how
to defend them selves and how to fly and all the normal Avian-American things we do in our free time. Once i had,
helped them and trained them, I determined that I would send them to Max, they might be able to help her save
the world, or to do whatever she's supposed to do.
As I approach the bench next to the bus stop. I notice a person 14 or 15, starring at me curiously with their warm
hazel eyes. After a few seconds, he broke eye contact, and started to run. What did I do? I ran after him of course.
I mean, what else was I supposed to do? He stares me down then takes off running? Who does that? Anyway the
bus didn't come for a couple of hours, and I was too curious to let them get away. I turn the corner fast enough to
catch a glimpse of him launching into the air unfurling his WINGS.
Ok, I know it was a bit rough, but it gets better! I promise! If you don't believe me, skip ahead to chapter 7 or 15, (those are my personal favorites) although there are some major spoilers if you skip ahead. I really hope you will keep reading. Oh, and the chapters get longer. Love you guys! -Seadiva
