Hi, my name is Victoria Wolf. Some one is actually reading my fic yeah! Runs around screaming YEAH this is my first fic so no flam throwers please. (Sorry if I ever creep you out but I am so excited))
It was a warm day pleasant with tons of sun and birds all singing and cheerfull suddenly they took off as a crash resounded threw the forest. The gang had been resting, Inuyasha had been sitting in a tree when a smell that was all too familiar caught his nose. He was leaning over when Kagome told Shippo to sit down he was going to hurt himself.
Inuyasha let out a startled yelp as his rosary lit up and he crashed to the ground. "I'm so sorry Inuyasha I didn't mean to are you all right?" Kagome rushed over to see him followed by the rest of the gang that were hard put not to laugh.
"Well I was just sitting there trying to sniff out Naraku… when you sat me!" Inuyasha snapped at the group that was now clustering around him.
"Naraku." Shippo let out a squeak as he dived under Kagome's hair.
"Lets get going before he is out of range." Miroku said but the gang was already leaving. "Hey wait up." Miroku shouted as he ran out towards the cloud of dust that was the gang.
As they get closer Inuyasha made them slow down. "He's just up a head. Everyone better be careful and keep your eyes peeled. I don't want any one hurt. Got that." He whispers, everyone nodded consent. They could see their 'unsuspecting' prey just ahead. "Okay everyone get into their positions."
Shippo transformed into a bush as planed, Inuyasha toke out is sword, Karrara transformed, Miroku got ready with his staff, Sango got her boomerang ready, Myoga was long gone, and Kagome got her bow and arrows ready.
They rushed out at the signal, but Naraku was ready. He dove at them tentacles raised. He got Shippo right away; obviously he had seen him change.
"You BASTERED!" yelled Inuyasha. He dove at Naraku, but was knocked down and thrown aside hitting his head through about eight of the trees making a sickening crunch. Kagome shot an arrow at Naraku's head but he dodged and whipped her in the air.
"Kagome!" Screamed everyone at the same time (except for Inuyasha he is unconscious). Right as Kagome was about to hit the ground Naraku captured her too.
"Put them down!" Yelled everyone else. Miroku attacked Naraku with his staff, but was soon subdued as well. Now it was down to a dizzy Inuyasha, Karrara, and Sango. Karrara attacked ripping most of the tentacles, that was useless because for every tentacle she tore apart three appeared in its place. In the end she was held prisoner by the swarming tentacles too. All four where now conscious as Sango threw her boomerang, but that to was futile as like everyone else she to was captured.
"LET THEM GO YOU ASSHOLE!" Yelled Inuyasha as he was once again on his feet. He dove for Naraku, Tetsuiga (?) forward but was batted like a rag doll. A tentacle shot at him and pierced threw his stomach to his back.
Naraku just laughed. "Do you really think you can beat me?" He said in a deceptively calm voice. "No one can beat me." He picked up the injured Inuyasha. He began to squeeze the life out of them all. They could feel the blood rushing to their heads. Just as it was starting to go black they heard a voice say.
"Put them down honey." In a bored manner the voice seemed to be casual about ordering Naraku around. All the sudden the tentacles loosened allowing air to once again rush into their lungs.
Cliffhanger! I hate them ( but I am technically grounded from the computer. Too much fan fiction net my parents say (Yeah like you can ever have enough fic) so I can't write long if you R&R I will have another one up in no time. Sorry if it was bad but I think that my other fic is better.
Disclaimer: Don't own any of the characters except for Victoria.
(Sorry But I updated by fixing some mistakes)