Saiyuki Fanfic Chapter One
Summary: as Goku is walking home from school, he nearly gets hit by a car. A young girl saves him. Does Goku develop feelings for the girl or does he shun her for humiliating him.
Disclaimer: I do not own Saiyuki, I wish I did, but I don't. T_T
"text" – speaking
text -Thinking
Chapter One – The Idiot
Boy's POV
It was a hard day at school, year 10 was not his favourite year. So many girls wanted him, but they only looked on his outside and not his inside. They only saw his looks, but not his personality. Occasionally he thought that a girl cared for his person, but it didn't end up being true as the girl was bragging about going out with him.
"Ghaaaaaa!" he screamed as he was thinking over his latest problem. Someone had stuck a love letter into his locker and he was trying to find out who. All his other friends laughed at him as he was trying to figure it out.
Flashback
"Guys, it isn't funny, it's god damn annoying." He screamed at his best friends.
"Yeah, it is" one of them said bursting out into more laughter. The boy glared at his friend.
"Well, you'd better find out soon, before you break some poor girls heart." Another of the boy's friends said in a mocking tone. The boy glared at all his friends, got up and walked away scratching his head.
End flashback
The boy closed his eyes and stopped, thinking or trying to think of who it could be. Suddenly he began walking again in agitation, still keeping his eyes closed. Then he heard the sound of a car coming at a high speed. He opened his eyes and saw the black car coming his way. He knew he wouldn't be able to move in time, so he closed his eyes and braced for impact.
"MOVE, IDIOT!" came a scream and the boy was tugged backwards out of the way of the car, just as it went pasted.
"Whatever happened to brakes?" the girl mumbled to herself staring in the direction of the quickly deteriorating image of the black Commodore.
Girls POV
The young girl with blondish brownish hair was walking home the usual way, she was thinking about her new school she was going to the next day. She was sick of her last school; they never did anything joyous or exciting. She began humming to herself. The girl stopped humming and pushed her long hair out of her face, the sound of a high speed car was approaching. She looked in the direction the sound was coming from and watched as it rapidly grew closer. She shrugged, If they want to die, it's their choice.
She glanced ahead of her and finally rounded the corner where she saw a boy standing in the middle of the road. What an idiot she thought. The car was growing closer and she turned to look at the figure that was much closer than before, and it was heading straight for the boy. She began running in his direction screaming for him to move, obviously he was deep in thought, but then he moved, she started slowing down but realized that the car was nearly at him. She saw him look at it and brace himself.
That put a burst of adrenalin through her and she raced forward screaming at the top of her lungs for the idiot to move. She grabbed a fist full of his jacket and tugged him back as the car sped past. Are there no brakes in cars anymore? What ever happened to them? She hadn't realized she'd spoken out loud when the boy turned around to face her.
(This is my very first Fanfic to be written and put on this site. Please review and tell me how im doing and if you want me to add anything.) - Becstar311
