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As they watched, a flash of lightning struck down on the boat. Jack felt the shock through the steering wheel and knew what was coming, he grabbed Ralph and tucked him under the small desk full of maps and calculations and weather reports. Simon and piggy were outside and got electrocuted. Piggy lay on the ground and Simon was hitting his chest trying to reanimate him. Suddenly, another lightning shocked the boat so violently the windows shattered and the electricity went out. They were now all alone in the dark. Jack managed to dodge and block every falling piece of glass. Ralph on the other hand didn't have that luck, he was cut by a small piece and he was bleeding. The wound was deep. Jack took the medical kit and took off his belt, the tightened it around Ralph's arm as he applied alcohol to his wound. The waves were getting stronger and stronger, they were running out of time. Jack took a gauze and wrapped it all around Ralph's arm until all you could see was the perfect whiteness of the bandage. Ralph thanked him and got up. They went back to steering the boat, or at least trying to. The boat was slowly rising as the ocean level increased. The water thickened as they got closer to the huge wave. Small waves were stirring around them, the boat was crawling through the vast blue ocean like an ant crossing a football stadium. Piggy and Simon clung on to the edge of the boat looking out. Jack was trying to save the boat and Ralph was looking extremely scared. The boat was getting wrecked by the waves. It felt as if they were being tossed from one place to another. The water level raised dangerously and the boat had trouble keeping up with the massive increase in water. The ocean seemed to be thickening, a wave crashed on to the boat and broke of the mast. It was clinging lifelessly on the end side of the deck. The water was stirring faster and faster until a humongous wave appeared in front of them. The torrent was extremely strong as they were accelerating up the wave. The water seemed to be pushing back with extreme force. Ralph could barely believe they had already made it this far. Clinging on to the iron bars that secured the fishing boat, Simon ran to Piggy and knelt by him trying to reassure him. Simon wasn't even close to being reassured himself. He tried hiding the fact that they were going up a wave the same size as a 15 story building. The boat was swigging from side to side and Jack had almost no hope left. "Come 'ere you b#%&h!" Jack shouted in agony at the wave. The boat was now more than half-way up the wave and the engines were smoking a black sue that the pipes had a hard time ejecting from the system. The air was filled with this as they continued up the wave. The upper and lower decks were filled with water. Shaking like a building in an earthquake, the boat rumbled as it had reached its maximum capacity. The engines roared so loud it was louder than the storm. BOAOAOAM! One of the engines blew up and the boat fell to the side. The wave came crashing down on them as a giant stomping a scooter. The sound of the boat hitting the water was comparable to two titans clashing in one another. The boat crashed into the sea backwards. It was the end, they all perished.