my only poem so far, can i get some feedback please!
Disclaimer: nothing is mine, the characters and stories belong to Charles Lutwidge Dodgson(Lewis Carrol)
She wandered around the bushes and trees
Oh please! Oh please!
Has the world gone mad?
Why is this cat so glad?
He pursues me with undeterred determination
He might be able to control a nation!
I walk into all sorts of fanatical desires
That anyone can see are normality fires
He stalks his prey
Oh how trivial a play!
That he merely seeks to give me a fright
But he might as well set me alight
All these things I see
Oh what a curveball life has thrown at me
First too big to go through a door
And then too small to see anymore
Then those dreadful flowers
Who taunted me for many hours
Then that infuriating caterpillar
Who was as slow as our nearby miller
Then, oh of course
Tweedle-Dum and Dee who lacked any remorse
Who refused me passage, until my ears were clear
I had to listen to a story quite mere
Then at that pitiful tea party
Everyone there was no smarty
The hare was there
Of course there was that idiotic mad-hatter
Oh it burns me and is enraging
The white rabbit that caused this upstaging
That damned creature
That led me to my oh, so favorite feature
That Queen of Hearts
Who I preferably call the Queen of Darts
Who challenged me in the game croquet
Yet, managed to win even when there was no way
Oh then that trial
That king is very much in denial
He is at a constant undermined position
But in his kindness offered the inquisition
He has saved my head
But still into my stomach went lead
That was caused by those idiot tea party advisors
And the queen made sure that there were no survivors
But then to my displeasure
I discovered my mind greatest treasure
I was under a tree, near my study
Only to ascertain that I had never left this ground so muddy.