Okay so i dont really recomend reading this if you dont like the idea of the passing of a life... :/
but anyways, Hi! so yeh i was in english today, and because ive allready read Of mice and men like a million times, I didnt read that in class today. Instead, I wrote this. Yes, its depressing, Yes, People think im emo ( Obviously these people dont know that emo is in fact a type of music :p) and yes, i dont like bella. BUT, Im starting to write ALOT more at the moment so i wanna know what you guys think! :) Also, I wrote a peice what im actually quite proud of but it has no charecters in it lol Just a short (like less then a page) story of a couple and train tracks XD So yeh, id be gratefull if someone told me where i could put that up. Thanks, and revieww please! :)
Shes running through the dark, silent forest. Empty. The forest feels as empty as she does inside. She stumbles, over a fallen log but does not stop. Where does she go from here? Will no-one know? Every thing is quiet, except for her heavy breathing. She is not tired from running, but she is breaking apart. A giant hole is ripping its way through her soul. He left. He doesn't love her. All the times he said he did, and he didn't. She finally runs up to the edge of the cliff.
"You don't want me…" She whispers. "You told me to be safe. I told you I couldn't survive without you. You broke your promise, so now I'm breaking mine." She looks up at the sky and Jumps.
She's hit by the icy cold waters and the strong currents. The water drags her down like a demon, pulling her down to hell. She is pulled by the water, smacking her head against a rock. She sees a trail of red in the water.
Her last thought was of him. Her almost future. Her once lover. Her Forbidden apple.
Ew. I just squished a bug. :S