This story is a traslation of "Un amor eterno"


Love for eternity

It was a stormy night, sad, but at the same time joyful. Finally she would be united with her love; anyone would stop them, all is ready. Prized in her room, she looked at her reflection in the window, her chocolate eyes where full of tears, while she hold the coup that contains the venom. Her hands were trembling as she bring the coup near her lips, her cheekbones were colored in rage, rage against the world, world that had killed her love, Edward.

She missed him, his kisses, his caress, his words, his love… She remembered clearly how hardly twenty four hours ago the real guards had killed Edward, and she also remembered how his lifeless body fell to the ground.

Edward was the lackey of Lord James, Bella´s fiancé. Their wedding had been concerted two months after the arrival of the Lord. He was a bad person, she didn´t love him, but he was in a good social level, he could help Bella´s father economically, so he wouldn´t lost his lands.

Edward was young, handsome, joyful, just the ideal person for her, when Lord James went to his duties, Edward his lackey waited patiently in his room until the arrival of the Lord While he was gone Bella went out her room and visit Edward. They talked for hours, laughed or they mostly looked at each other eyes, with their glance they could said all, they didn´t need words. They could stay long hours in that way, inversed in each other eyes. They had fallen in love, it would be an eternal love, nothing and anybody would separate them, at least that´s what they thought.

Bella didn´t want to be married with Lord James, so she told her father, and him, furiously for her acts, he enclosed her in her room until the day of the wedding. She had been three days enclosed, when Edward opened her door and told her his idea, they would run away together.

It had passed three days since her run away, they lived in poverty but they didn´t mind, because they waited for the arriving of a ship that could brought them to America, and there they didn´t had to received orders, they would were happy, anything would set up against their love, in other words, they could be free. But when they were going to put on board, the real guards made presence, dividing forever Bella and Edward. He has been accused of kidnapping in other words he had been sentenced to death.

Now that she had taken the venom, nothing could stop her destiny, live forever with Edward. Slowly she felt as her heart was expiring to the arriving of the imminent death. Heart that beat for the last time thinking in him, in her love, in her Edward.


I´m spanish so it can be not very good written.

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