loony: Alright, first off, thank you to everyone who reviewed, they are very much appreciated and deserve Sea Salt Ice Cream!!! (KH fans know what I mean =D) Seriously I never thought I could get so many reviews for a story I started out of boredom, and to be honest never expected for people to like ^^' On the other hand, I'm very grateful, really it means a lot to me that a lot of people like how this is going.
But something I'm not so grateful… well, I don't like reviews who give me orders instead of saying what you like about the story, like example I got one like, "FINISH THE DAMN STORY" all I could actually thought was, "ON THE ORDER BOSS!"
…whoever wrote it can shove a stick up their backside… in a pleasurable kind of way if they know what I mean =D
When you review, you say what you liked, disliked, how can they improve, what they did wrong, if they liked the writing style, use of vocabulary and more stuff that could make each author progress or make notice of mistakes in a positive way, or just a simple "Great chapter" to sum it up all. Not just write to finish something that won't get improved because they just want you to finish it.
Okidoki, after my very well written… thing, I'm gonna try and continue, BUT I don't guarantee anything… just enjoy =D
Enjoy~
Shadow's Point Of View
"Amy!"
It took me a second to realize, dashing to her side the second the window turned into a million crystal pieces. She had covered her face as the window broke yet again from another gunshot.
How can this be happening?
I covered her body with my own, only to see her shiver and gasp every time another one of those deadly sounds that scared every soul after just thinking of how it would feel if it penetrated our skin.
Thinking fast, I pulled her down to the floor as the guns kept shooting, this was really impossible to happen, what in the world was going on? Were we about to die? Is this our last day? Our last breath? The last time we'll see the sunlight?
No, it cannot end like this.
Amy, she cannot end like this.
I have to protect her, I promised my Mother I will, I promise her Dad I will as well, I promised her friends as well.
I promised myself I would protect her.
My eyes shut tightly as well as the embrace around her body, I didn't care at the moment for her whining about me being this close or any physical contact whatsoever, it didn't matter at the moment, I didn't give shit about that. What matter right this stupid second was that we had to keep ourselves hidden from whatever was happening.
What exactly was happening?
Amy flinched under my shield, shaking, trembling, gasping lightly and I could even feel a few tear drops falling on my tights as I embraced the last thing I could, her well being. I heard one more shot, then silence spreading at our surroundings, quietness is such a stupid way to end this little show.
At the silent treatment we got after such loud and dangerous atmosphere, I quickly decided to check if we were indeed alive and in one piece.
I inhaled quickly then slowly let the air taken in sighed out heavily but without much to notice, I was too caught up making sure I didn't hear another gun shot before doing anything else.
I looked down to the trembling girl, glance around her figure as I made her look up at me. I need to make sure she was alright, I needed to make sure she was not hurt, injured, cut, penetrated by those bullets, or just… I just needed to make sure she was conscious.
"Amy? Are you okay? Can you… can you hear me?" I whispered and tried to keep my voice the most soothing way my voice could manage, it was frustrating to see myself in such a state of confusion but the most important part of my little braking fiasco was that she looked up at me with those big eyes of hers (which were for the moment reddish because of her constant crying).
Instead of answering me, I figured her voice would have broken if she did so anyway, she nodded at me and gulped, shoulders shaking and sobbing, you could have guess she was also panting.
Before I could, as more red lights blinded my sight for a moment from the upper side of my quills, sirens started to be heard, my sight came back and slowly I unfolded my knees to push myself up, Amy was about to do the same.
"Stay low, I'll… make sure it's safe." Again, it was hard to keep my voice soothing, my voice is so hard it might have seem I was making a harsh order instead of meaning her safety.
She bit her lips oh so slowly and stayed low with an approving nod, "Mhm…"
As I looked up passed the obviously broken window...
Shit, the police was here.
Which means…
"Get those guys the hell out of here! Move! They need medical treatment for god's sake! Move your legs! MOVE it!"
Rouge…
Amy's Point of View
"Shit."
"Is it… is it safe?"
"You could say that…"
SugarhogRose --- Hey Guys =D for any of you that have read the story Hidden Affection by loonytwin then you will probably know that I'm going to continue it =D I've got permission-don't worry.
The above Chapter is the last thing loony wrote and I've kept it as it is.
The rest of the chapters will be written by me- SugarhogRose.
For the first 6 chapters please go to loonytwin's profile ! Anyway hope you'll enjoy it =D
