Ok this is my new story:
Its all Lindsay and Danny -- I also thought that I should let you know that the characters may be a little ooc and this story is very AU so be nice :)
Summary: It's the story of love mystery and past relationships not soon forgotten
Also, im not a great narrator so im writing it like a movie script let me know what u think -- hate it?? love it?? Don't be shy!!!
Just so you know the characters ages will progress along with the story but they are gonna start off as teenagers.
Disclaimers: Characters known to you do not belong to me but all the new ones do so there!!!
1997
Joyce (Danny and Natalie's mom): Nat honey do u need me to take you to school today??
Natalie: No mom im walking with Lindsey remember and don't forget she coming after school to sleep over her mom's going out of town this weekend.
Joyce: That poor girl why is it that her mom's always going out of town?
Natalie: Cause its her job
Joyce: What does she do?
Natalie: I don't know I think she's a lawyer or something
Joyce: The lawyers I know, don't travel so much
Natalie: Yeah well Lindsey's mom does.
(Someone knocks on their door.)
Natalie: That's her I gotta go I'll see ya after school okay? (Kisses her on the cheek)
Hey dads coming home tonight right??
Joyce: That's what he said but you know your dad
Natalie: Yeah I do-- Ill see ya later
(Natalie opens the door and reveals Lindsey )
Natalie: Hey
Lindsey: Hi you ready??
Natalie: Yeah lets go
(Natalie grabs her sweater from the rack and leaves)
(We then see a factory warehouse-- there's a guy tied to a chair and he's getting beat up)
Corleone: Where's the money??
Guy: I've got it ok its at my house
Corleone: So is this one of those times when you say you have it, we take you to go and get it and its not there
Guy: no its there im telling ya its there
Corleone: Alright then lets go (grabs him by the hair--Sonny grabs him and puts him in the trunk of a car--Sonny is Danny and Natalie's dad)
Sonny: Sure boss
(We then see Natalie and Lindsey again walking to school)
Lindsey: Are you sure its okay with you parents that I stay over for the weekend
Natalie: Yeah definitely my moms completely cool with it
Lindsey: Your mom? What about your dad? Did you even bother to ask him (she was a little freaked out)
Natalie: He's away for the week, how the hell do you expect me to ask him and what are you so worried about anyway??
Lindsey: I don't know its just your dad he makes me nervous you know
Natalie: (Laughing) Why???
Lindsey: Because, look don't get me wrong, but he looks like one of those mob guys ya know from all the movies
Natalie: That ridiculous my dad would never hurt a fly ( Both of them started to laugh)
Lindsey: Yeah im sure your right--look ill see ya later I promised Danny I'd meet him
Natalie: I cant believe your dating my brother-- just don't get mad when you see what an idiot he is and you have to break up with him
Lindsey: Yeah whatever ill see ya later
Natalie: Sure bye (All the while thinking about her dad looking like a mafia guy from good fellas)
So ridiculous!!!
(Scene goes to a house a man is on the floor dead--someone pulling on him leaving a blood trail then we see close up on face to reveal it's the same guy who was tied up before.)
Corleone: Why is it they all lie?
Sonny: Must be for the car ride
Corleone: heh!! Your funny you know that
Sonny: Thanks
Corleone: I never said it was a good thing--hey im kidding alright, relax
Sonny: Yeah relax
(School bell rings)
Teacher: Lindsey I'd like to see you after class
(Lindsey is a little annoyed by the request but smiles anyways--she's mad because Danny never showed to meet her like he said she would -which made her late to class and That's probably the reason the teacher wanted to see her now)
Lindsey walks up to the teacher
Lindsey: You said you wanted to talk to me
Teacher: Yes Lindsey is something happening at home or are you having problem you need to speak to someone about
Lindsey: No why??
Teacher : Because your grades have been slipping and you been tardy a lot lately-- during class all you do is daydream how do you expect to pass if you don't pay attention?
Lindsey: Yeah I know I've been slacking lately but im gonna start trying again ill get back on track you'll see
teacher: Alright but if I don't see any improvement ill have to bring your mother in to speak with her
Lindsey: good luck ( Lindsey muttered under her breath--she starts to walk away when he calls her back)
Teacher: And Lindsey if u ever need to talk you know im here for u right??
(Lindsey just smiles and walks out)
(Natalie is waiting outside her classroom door for her)
Natalie: So?
Lindsey: (Imitating the teacher) If you ever need to talk
Natalie: UGH!!!
So That's chapter one I promise the other chap will include Danny but I wanted to introduce you to these characters before I moved on
so what do I need to improve on ill take any reviews love-hate its all good for the soul!!