Hello, this is my first poem fanfic that I have written. It's basically just about Kenshin. I'm not great at poetry, so I'd greatly appreciate any reviews, that I would.
Rurouni, Rurouni
You act so foolish,
But what do your eyes see?
They're full of great sadness.
Is it due to the war?
The war is long over,
Worry your head no more.
Time for killing is done,
Time for peace has reign now.
Kill men no more, repent.
Your sins shall be buried
Forever in shadows.
Live now in the warm light
And relieve your scarred heart.
You no longer slay men
Save those who are repressed
Relinquish your title
Live by your human name
You are not a soldier
You are a wanderer.
Remember the present
Forget the bloody past
Rurouni, Rurouni.