Chapter 1: Look At Me
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Conventions
1)[Narration of Sorts]
2)*Character Thoughts*
3)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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-Part One-
[Inside club, music playing, people partying.]
*A bodyguard. That's my day job. My real purpose is to fight. That's all I live for. There is no better warrior than me, everyone should know that. I am the winner, I will always be the winner. My boss is to shallow to know that. That's why he's here with all these clubbers. I'm not like these clubbers. They're all mere college students. Hmph. Going out wasting their time. Laughing, drinking, acting like fools... I'm not like them. They know it too. They stay away from me out of fear. These little kids, I laugh at how they're so scared of me. I'm not even fighting and these college students reek with fear of my superiorty. They are so weak.*
[Jann-Lee looks around the club. Everyone near him avoids his iron gaze. He takes notice of the kareoke area.]
*That girl, singing at that kareoke thing. Another one of those college students. Jet black hair, pulled into braided pig-tails circled beside her ears. Brown eyes, they look soft... She must be one of the wea....... Why is she looking at me? I must have been looking too long. She won't break her gaze. She's looking at me with a strange expression. What is she doing to me?... I can feel it, she's trying to penetrate me... She won't stop looking. Brown eyes... her brown eyes are digging deep into me. How long has it been? How long has it been since we first locked eyes? It's been too long. This is strange. What do I do?*
"Hey Lee!"
[Jann-Lee's boss calls him from behind.]
"I'm getting tired of this place. You've been doing a great job as a bodyguard. You can go home now, I'll leave with someone else."
*I can leave.*
[Jann-Lee exits through back door.]
-Part Two-
[Lei Fang and her friends are sing kareoke.]
"Go Lei Fang!! Sing it girl!!"
"Don't call me baby
You gotta know that baby that'll never do
You know I don't belong to you
It's time you knew I'm not your baby
I belong to me
So don't call me baby!"
[Lei Fang takes a deep satisfying breath and hands the mic to someone else.]
*That was fun. We gotta do this more often!...*
[Lei Fang looks over her shoulder.]
*Someone is looking at me...*
[She searches throughout the club when she spots Jann-Lee looking at her.]
*Who's that? Not another one of those pervs back on campus! If I have to deal with another one of those dogs I'll scream!*
[Jann-Lee's face doesn't falter as Lei Fang looks at him.]
*No... He's different. His expression is too hard for me to read, he's not even budging... His eyes. Like steel. I can't stop looking. I want to know who he is... Maybe I should go up to him and say hi... No. I don't think I can. I feel like just looking back at him.*
"Hey Lei Fang, wanna go to the bar with the rest of us?"
[Leifang's attention is drawn away. Leifang looks and turns to glance back at Jann-Lee. He isn't there.]
*He's gone... I might as well home.*
"Sorry guys I think I'll just go home now.
[Lei Fang heads to the back.]
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Alright, chapter one done! This is my first fic, comments and suggestions are warmly welcomed. This format is a little weird, I'm probably going to change it so that there'll be a regular narrator instead of things in brackets. As always, standard disclaimer apply.
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----------
Conventions
1)[Narration of Sorts]
2)*Character Thoughts*
3)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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-Part One-
[Inside club, music playing, people partying.]
*A bodyguard. That's my day job. My real purpose is to fight. That's all I live for. There is no better warrior than me, everyone should know that. I am the winner, I will always be the winner. My boss is to shallow to know that. That's why he's here with all these clubbers. I'm not like these clubbers. They're all mere college students. Hmph. Going out wasting their time. Laughing, drinking, acting like fools... I'm not like them. They know it too. They stay away from me out of fear. These little kids, I laugh at how they're so scared of me. I'm not even fighting and these college students reek with fear of my superiorty. They are so weak.*
[Jann-Lee looks around the club. Everyone near him avoids his iron gaze. He takes notice of the kareoke area.]
*That girl, singing at that kareoke thing. Another one of those college students. Jet black hair, pulled into braided pig-tails circled beside her ears. Brown eyes, they look soft... She must be one of the wea....... Why is she looking at me? I must have been looking too long. She won't break her gaze. She's looking at me with a strange expression. What is she doing to me?... I can feel it, she's trying to penetrate me... She won't stop looking. Brown eyes... her brown eyes are digging deep into me. How long has it been? How long has it been since we first locked eyes? It's been too long. This is strange. What do I do?*
"Hey Lee!"
[Jann-Lee's boss calls him from behind.]
"I'm getting tired of this place. You've been doing a great job as a bodyguard. You can go home now, I'll leave with someone else."
*I can leave.*
[Jann-Lee exits through back door.]
-Part Two-
[Lei Fang and her friends are sing kareoke.]
"Go Lei Fang!! Sing it girl!!"
"Don't call me baby
You gotta know that baby that'll never do
You know I don't belong to you
It's time you knew I'm not your baby
I belong to me
So don't call me baby!"
[Lei Fang takes a deep satisfying breath and hands the mic to someone else.]
*That was fun. We gotta do this more often!...*
[Lei Fang looks over her shoulder.]
*Someone is looking at me...*
[She searches throughout the club when she spots Jann-Lee looking at her.]
*Who's that? Not another one of those pervs back on campus! If I have to deal with another one of those dogs I'll scream!*
[Jann-Lee's face doesn't falter as Lei Fang looks at him.]
*No... He's different. His expression is too hard for me to read, he's not even budging... His eyes. Like steel. I can't stop looking. I want to know who he is... Maybe I should go up to him and say hi... No. I don't think I can. I feel like just looking back at him.*
"Hey Lei Fang, wanna go to the bar with the rest of us?"
[Leifang's attention is drawn away. Leifang looks and turns to glance back at Jann-Lee. He isn't there.]
*He's gone... I might as well home.*
"Sorry guys I think I'll just go home now.
[Lei Fang heads to the back.]
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Alright, chapter one done! This is my first fic, comments and suggestions are warmly welcomed. This format is a little weird, I'm probably going to change it so that there'll be a regular narrator instead of things in brackets. As always, standard disclaimer apply.
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