Hey guys, g83 here, with part 2 of Revenge of a General! Note that the following chapters will switch from POV to POV.


She couldn't decide. Which was worse; going to war amongst every threat the gods have ever faced in existence with only 200 years of training, having a 1 to 400,000,000 chance of actually living through it, or having to wrap her arms around Shadow whilst the Pegasi (Blackjack as Thalia so greatly pointed out, used to belong to Percy) soared through the air at Thalia knows how long. (As in the saying 'How fast we were going? Only Zeus knows.' Like that.)

Right now she was leaning toward being so close to Shadow. After Shadow took her to Olympus where Chaos confirmed it was time to leave, it was agreed that her and Shadow would go scope everything out and set up camp. Once everything is settled the rest of the army would come at different times so as not to drag attention.

This was really happening. She was finishing off what her father had started, whether she lived to see Olympus again or not. Brenna expected Shadow to say something along the lines of 'everything will be okay' but she was glad he didn't, because if he did, she would probably believe him.

There was just something about Shadow, maybe her teenage hormones were finally kicking in and that 'bad boy' phase was kicking in. Whatever it was, the way he was quiet and still but dangerous at the same time was just intriguing. The way he barely looked at her though, it hurt. She found herself always pulling out a mirror or something, checking to make sure she looked fine, or at least decent. She just couldn't understand why the hell she always felt giddy..

Brenna knew that she had quite a few traites from Thalia, she could feel it when they both gave the fact same description on.. Whatever was the topic if conversation. But something's about Brenna, didn't quite match up with Thalia.. Like how sword handling came incredibly natural to Brenna but her mom couldn't sword handle for her life, and preferred a spear.

Did she get it from her dad? Just that one thought sent butterflies to her stomach. How she wanted to know Percy.. She desperately wanted to know her dad. He was a mystery, and Brenna often found herself trying to imagine what he was like: was he cocky? Timid? Arrogant? Sweet? Aggressive? A pang hit her in her heart, sure she had conversed with him through weird passing out/sleeping dream thought things, but that had been over two hundred years ago. She knew what he looked like, but Brenna was mature enough to know that the way someone looks has absolutely nothing to do with their personality.

"Psst, Brenna.. Hello? Come ON!" She opened her eyes to find herself being piggy backed, by Shadow. Hurriedly she scrambled off and gave a feeble cough in effort to kill the awkward silence. "Sorry, you were seriously zoned out there and I tried to get you to come back from wherever you were but you wouldn't budge so I waited but I got too anxious waiting in one spot so I just carried you along with me." Wow, Brenna thought, all in one breath.. I bet he'd be really good at making out.

Woah, okay.. She thought, lets not get too excited.. Breath. A small smile tugged at her lips as she nodded a quick thanks to Shadow, his expression shocked. "Thanks Shadow.. I guess I owe you one." An arrogant smirk pulled on Shadow's lips. Confused, Brenna asked "what?"

"Two. You owe me two." At Brenna's confused look, he chuckled and slowly moved aside some vines hanging in the way revealing a large, emphasis on LARGE, base camp.. Full of monsters.

"We're here."

The sight took her breath away as she sighed, "What now?"

He glared at her, his mood switching almost instantly, irritated with her. "Why, we prepare for war." He summoned a Small blizzard, Frosting over her hair as he murmured while walking towards the camp, "Idiotiotic yahoo." She glared at him. Trying uselessly to tame her hair, as she followed him to the campsite. Under her breath was a barely audible, 'what does that even mean?'

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For some reason, Shadow seemed so familiar to her. It was like she'd seen him in the past, before she had met him as her "protector". But with him being mysterious and all, she just couldn't swallow her pride and ask him, so that left it up to her own instinct, but she just couldn't put her finger on it. She felt like she was in the presence of Chaos, yet not, like she was in the presence of a god, yet she couldn't figure out where, or who, he or she, is.

It took all of her courage to walk up to Shadow and ask, "Have I met you somewhere?" He paused and said, while smiling like he was remembering something funny, "Brenna, Brenna, Brenna. You have meet me before, you just dont remember." His mood changed after he replied while continuing on what he was doing, "Now leave me alone and set up your tent."

'Again with the moods..' Brenna thought. Shadow mysteriously pitched an adverage sized tent that seem like it could fit only a mattress, in seconds.

He then asked her, "Why are you still here? Get out of here. I'm merely the messenger of my dad, am I not?" She nodded and went to set up her tent as she recalled that Shadow is, apparently, the son of Chaos. The last thing she saw when she looked back, was him entering the tent while running his right hand through his hair. (In a incredibly sexy matter, if she did say so herself)

When she set up her tent, it fell instantly. She saw Shadow staring at her and back at the tent. Finally, irritated, she asked "What? I'm getting it set up." He picked up some folded paper and asked, "Did you read the manual?" She turned red as she murmured, "No." He read the paper and exclaimed, "Well, what do you know." He handed her the paper and clapped twice. She witnessed the tent pitch itself. As he walked away and put his hands in his pocket, he muttered "Just let me know if you need help on anything, okay?" She replied, "I will."

When she entered the tent, she came right back out to walk around the outside and go on the inside. She only said this after five seconds inside, "It's bigger on the inside then it is on the outside."


Breena: Really? 'It's bigger on the inside than it is on the outside'?

g83: What? I some time watch 'Doctor Who' on YouTube.

Shadow: Really? Two claps?

g83: Hey, I'm keep it simple.

Breena: Now that I think about it, you do seem familiar.

Thalia: Spoiliers!

g83: Of my prequel, Shadow's Past. If you, the reader, are new to this and don't know who Shadow and Breena, I highly recomend to read the first "Revenge of a General" by Jacksonluver101 to make sense of it along with my prequel.

Shadow: And please review!