Fix me
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Prolong:
I was woundering around the woods when I heard some crackling voice from the back. I turned "who's there? come out, I won't hurt you" I said thinking of an animal must have come this side, It was then the vision came. It was dredful, 'I saw a huge door, one of the pipe line's door but it was so wierd except of the bold and nuts, the snakes were drawned all over it. It was then I saw a boy one of my age, I was not able to see his face as he was facing the door, then he said something, something in parseltouge, I knew it was snake language. The door was opened and he went in, I followed him inside.
It was a chamber inside, on the pathway there were statues of snakes it was real scary, seeing all this but I went on anyway. At the end of the pathway was a statue of devil like structure. The boy stood infront of it. He again said something in parseltouge. The mouth of the devil opened and there came a huge snake. I saw his eyes it was all so creepy, I felt myself stuck there. I was not able to move" As the vision finished I felt limp on the grass. The last thing I felt was water droplets falling on my cheeks.
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"you can't do this Riddle" she said
"what are you talking about?" he asked confused
"you can't kill people" she whispered.
His face was one of shock. He took her inside one of the empty classroom. "how did you know" he asked while clenching his wand in his fists. "you should not open the chamber of secrets. It will not do any good to you. Please don't let the monster out" she pleaded. "first you tell me how the hell you know?" he said while pushing her towards the wall. "I can't tell you that" she said meeting his gaze. He was so furious 'how the hell she know?' he kept thinking. He didn't tell anyone about his plans even his followers were not fully aware of it.
She pushed him away "you are a lot better person then you think you are Tom, don't loose your precious self. Don't do all this. I assure you that the consequences will not be good. Don't be Voldmort the dark lord, just be Tom Marvolo Riddle." she said with concern. She knew it will do no good to her but she thought it was worth a try. Less does she knew that the consequences were a lot more different than she expected it to be.
"First tell me how did you came to know about it?" he said playing innocent again. Seeing his face she sighed "Tom as you have your gift of parselmouth. I also have my gift as for now its merely an request, but don't forget if you didn't stop, I will not hesitate to tell head master Dippet about this" she said with full honesty. He giggled as if making fun of her "he wouldn't believe you" he said smirking "with proof anybody would" she said smiling at him slyly. "oh really how would you prove it?" he asked while sending a crucio curse against her. He was surprised when it didn't hit her. He was expecting her laying on the ground begging him to stop but none of that happened, instead she held a shield to cover her from the attack as she was already aware of it. "Oh don't worry I have my means" saying this she left the classroom leaving an angry Tom alone. He hit the wall hard with his hand clenched into fists. He need to take his anger out on somebody. So, he called upon his followers that night. Less does he know that it was only the beginning...
As from now on his whole life was going to change...
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