First fanfic so dont be mean with reviews...This is inspired in the novel stardust some of you may already watch the movie :)
EPOV
I was sitting at the dining table with my father asking him about my mother i was 17 years old and i didnt know anything about her, my father raised me all by himself and i do love him but i deserve some answers, but he refuses to tell me about her.
Giving up on getting the truth from my father i decided to go to my true love house and declare myself.
So here i was outside the house of Tanya Denali trying to find the words to make her fall in love with me, she was so beautiful, she had gorgeous blue eyes, long blonde hair and a great body.
I saw the lights turned off at her bedroom so i decided to grab a little rock and throw it at her window i waited 2 minutes and the lights of her room turned on, Tanya came closer to the window and opened it.
"what do you want Edward?, its late" Tanya said
"i just wanted to talk to you and give you this flowers" i said innocently.
"Hmm alright" she said with a bit of annoyance. I just waited until she came out of the house, she looked beautiful like always, she was wearing a light pink dress that hug her curves wonderfully, she noticed my oogling and i just blushed.
She took my arm and we start walking toward a small park near her house, when we arrived at the park i already had settle down a blancket and a picnic, i also bought a champagne that cost all my savings but for Tanya it was all worth it.
We sit down on the blancket and i asked her "would you like a glass of champagne?".
"yes please" she said and take the glass out of my hand. "oh my god this is delicious, it must cost you all your money".
"well yes, but thats the beauty of it there is a great world out there and i can make more money" i explained.
"Look Edward, i knoe You are a good guy Edward but people like you dont get along with people like me, i am beautiful and have a lot of money, my family expects that i marry someone more wealthy, like Jacob" my heart broke into million pieces i never felt more rejected in my life.
"Jacob?" He was the most wealthy man in all England, he was smart, but he always treat people like garbage if they didnt were good enough for him. Tanya didnt deserve him, she needed someone better, and i needed to prove her that i was her best choice i may not have a lot of money but i will provide her so much love, and cherish her every day.
"well yes, actually he is going to propose to me on my birthday, isnt it romantic?, he is looking for the right ring" she said, all i could do was stay there speachless.
"but Tany-" she interrupted me and said "look! a shooting star, isnt it beautifu?".
This gave me an idea "Yes it is, i will make you a deal, i will bring you that star in exchange for your hand." i said with determination.
" You would bring me a star?, You know that no one is allowed to cross The Wall right?" She had a point, for years there was a wall separating our village from something that looked like a field and far away they were a lot of trees hiding something, they are rumors that beyond that field there is a secret world full of magic and stuff you cant imagine, but those are just rumors nobody actually believes them.
"I promise you that i will cross The Wall and bring you the star" i said.
" You have one week until my birthday, if you dont have my star i will marry Jacob, deal?" she said with a smile on her lips.
"Deal" i said shaking her hand.
Later at my house my dad was sitting in a comortable couch in the living room with a white box that looked a little bit old.
"What is that?" i asked him. "This box contains a letter from your mother and some stuff she wanted you to have" He said. I couldnt believe it i was so happy that i would actually have some answers i felt so giddy and sad at the same time, maybe the letter said that she didnt love me and didnt want me so she run away or something like that, my thoughts were killing me, so i just grab the box and opened it.
"I will answer all your questions, im sorry about earlier, but i just wasnt prepare for you to ask about your mother"
I slowly opened the letter and start reading:
Edward You dont know how sorry i am that i cant be with you, but you must know that i love you with all my heart, the reason i couldnt keep you is because in the place i live they didnt allow me to take care of you, so i gave you to your father because i know he will take care of you and you will have a better life with him than me. im so sorry, good bye edward with all my love your mom.
I couldnt believe this she actually did love me, in the box there was one more thing it was a black candle and it had a note it said: This is a babylon candle it would take you to any place you want just light fire on it and think of me, and you will be here with me.
"how is this possible?" i asked my father.
"It would be hard to believe but i did once cross The Wall, Theres where i met your mother, she was selling weird stuff in a black market, when i asked her who she was she told me "I'm a princess, tricked into being a witch's slave, I will be free when the witch dies", i returned home at midnight hoping i would forgot my adventure but 9 months later there was a knock on my door i opened it and you were there in a bascket" My father said. "you may go now to your mother, i know she would love to see you"
I grab the candle and wait for my father to light the fire i was so excited that i would finally meet my mother after all this years, she would also meet Tanya, oh Tanya i forgot about her,
i need to get her star.
All i could see was black but from the sudden i fall from a great hight and fell on a lady, i was crushing her with my weight. "Oh god, mother?. im so sorry are you alright?" i asked her.
"No, im not, and im not your mother so GET OFF ME" She sounded so angry and irritated.
I took a second look at her and she was too young to be my mother, she was probably my same age, she had very long brown hair with soft curls they looked so so soft i wanted to touch it, her eyes were also brown but so big and beautiful, her skin looked so smooth and soft she was exquisite and breathtaking.
"You;re not my mother, sorry" how could i not be with my mother i was thinking about her when i light the candle but then i thought about Tanya and the the star it must have landed here.
"This may seem strange, but have you seen a fallen star anywhere? I asked the pretty lady.
"You're funny" she said.
"No, really, we're in a crater,This must be where it fell. Yeah, this is where it fell." i told her.
"It is. Or if you want to be really specific, up there is where this weird, bloody necklace came out of nowhere and knocked it out of the heavens when I was minding my own business.
And over there is where I Ianded. And right here, this is where I got hit by a magical flying moron!" she said with a very angry voice.
"You're the star! You're the star? Really? Oh, wow. I'm sorry. I had no idea you'd be a... May I just say in advance that I am sorry?" i said.
"sorry for what?" she asked confused.
"For this" i came closer to her and grab her wrist and wrap it on a a magical chain that was in the box that my mother gave to me. "This means you must come with me"
"See, you're going to be a birthday gift for Tanya, my true Iove." I said.
"But of course! Nothing says romance Iike the gift of a kidnapped, injured woman!, IM NOT GOING ANYWHERE WITH YOU" She screamed at me.
"Im sorry, but its late you should probably get some sleep, we need to get going tomorrow morning, by the way what is your name? i asked her
"Bella" She said.
Please Review i need to know if i continue or not. Thanks for reading :)
