hey guys new story let me know what you think give me some ideas anyway this story was requested by one of the people that read my writing and its were Loren and Eddie are in high school Eddie's popular and Loren's the hot new girl. Anyway I don't own the characters or plotline of Hollywood heights.
Loren's POV
I'm walking out to my porshe in a hot pink crop top with blue jean short shorts on my way to my new school I hope this year is different than last year. Last year every guy was hitting on me I mean who can blame them im sexy. a bad ass, and I don't put up with drama and shit. Not to mention my brother is going to come to this school to that means I'm ganna have to deal with him, his friends and all the parties he's ganna throw I just hope that these friends are nothing like his other once that would always flirt with me.
At school...
as im walking into the school many people are staring at me and them I see a flash of neon colors invade my eye site
Girl: hi im Mellissa but you can call me Mel. Are you new here?
: yeah im Loren
Mel: well I can see were going to be aweso...
all of sudden she stops talking I wonder whats going on
: what is is
the next thing I know she points behind me and its non other than my brother and what looks to be his new crew I mean school hasn't even started yet and he has 7 new friends. I shrug at Mel and she is looking at me as if im crazy
: what
Mel: how are you not drolling over them there the hottest guys in school and the new guy is the hottest
: that new guys is my brother Anthony
Mel: tha..tha..that's..you..your brother
: yeah
next thing I know the idiot comes up to us and puts his arm around my sholder and all his friends look jealous
: what do you want Anthony
anthony: what I cant come see my sister
all his friend look relieved and I just role my eyes
: no you cant unless you want something
Anthony: I want to throw a party tonight
: so...
Anthony: mom and dad left for a few weeks and left you in charge because of what happened last year... anyway so that means that I have to ask you to let me and it seems stupid but whatever
:I don't care
Anthony: wow really?
: if I said no would you have listened
Anthony: no anyway thanks
I opened my mouth to say something but then Anthony added
Anthony: I know I know no one goes up to you floor of the house
Mel: your floor?
: we live in a giant house I have my own floor with a gym, kitchen, bathroom, master bedroom, guest bedroom, game room, and living room same with Anthony and my parents and then we have a floor that none of us stay on so its used for parties
every ones jaws dropped except for my brother
Anthony: anyway the guys are sleeping over to
: what ever but again they step foot on my floor I hope you told them im a black belt or did you forget what happened to eric
Anthony: Lo that was one time and your the one that decided to come back from you jog sweaty and in short shorts and a sports bra
: and he's the one that decided to fallow me and the only reason he didn't go to the hospital is because you and Ryan decided to separate me from him
Anthony: hows Ryan anyway?
: we broke up
Anthony: oh im sorry
then he hugs me and I notice that everyone was still there
: its whatever anyway you ganna introduce me to your friends
Anthony: yeah Loren this is Cameron ( pretty hot)...Adam( not my type but cute)... Dylan( pretty cute)... Ian( cute but not my type)...Tyler( bad boy but is really sexy)...Eddie(hot and sexy but you can tell he has a huge ego) guys this is my sister Loren
: Anthony this is Mel
I give him a huge and whisper
:she thinks your hot just don't hurt her
After school...
Anthony: Loren were here
: okay im in the kitchen
they walk into the kitchen and they see...