Ryuuketsu: even I can admit it was a good story and I bet there are plenty of people out there who are happy to see it back
General Zargon: problem is I can't seem to remember half the characters I used-sheepish grin-
Ryuuketsu:-slaps face-oh brother
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"SIT BOY!!!!!!!!!!!" a feminine voice shouted and a loud thud was heard soon after "I'm going home!" a teenage girl shouted as she stormed away from the downed half-demon. This girl's name is Kagome Higurashi and she is able to travel 500 years into the past to collect the shards of the Shikon no Tama which she accidentally shattered when a centipede demon dragged her down the well on her 15th birthday. From there she met inuyasha a half dog demon and then they met Shippo the young fox demon who's father was killed by the thunder brothers. Miroku is a monk who's grandfather was cursed by Naraku to have a black hole passed down through the generations to eventually suck them in. Sango is a Demon Slayer who's village was completely destroyed by Naraku and her brother was still under Naraku's control.
Kagome huffed as she landed in her time and started climbing the latter her grandfather had put there 'I really have to thank grandpa for putting this here' she thought to herself as she heaved herself over the rim of the well and opened the door of the well house. She breathed in deeply before smiling and running towards the house "mom!!! Souta!! Jii-chan!! I'm home!!" she shouted as she opened the door of the house and a voice answered her "Kagome!! I'm in the attic!!" Kagome smiled as she climbed the latter and poked her head up into the attic "what are you doing up here Souta?" she asked as she climbed completely into the dusty attic "mom's cleaning the house and asked me to help clean the attic, want to help?" he replied as he wiped off an old chest.
Kagome thought for a moment and then smiled "sure! There might be some cool stuff in here" she said as she joined Souta by the chest and helped him heave it open. They both gasped in awe when they saw what was in it "what is all this stuff?" Souta asked as he held up a sapphire choker with a emerald five point star in the middle that looked liked it fit him "I don't know Souta" Kagome replied as she held up a ring made of ruby, sapphire, and onyx with a small emerald five point star in the middle that fit her finger perfectly. They eagerly dug into the chest and pulled out the contents.
There was (1). An onyx flute. (2). A katana with a black velvet hilt with a emerald five-point star on it and a black velvet sheathe with pearl flames wrapping around it. (3). A slim black kimono with a slit on the right side that went up to the upper thigh and it had a blood red dragon wrapping around it so it's head would wrap around the neck the rest over the heart. (4). A black men's kimono with a dark blue dragon wrapping around the right leg and torso to cover the heart. (5). Another katana with a white velvet hilt with an emerald five-point star on it and a white velvet sheathe with onyx flames wrapping around it. (6). A pair of earrings made of ruby, sapphire, pearl, and onyx with a small emerald five-point star in the middle of both. (7). A black fan with lightning bolt designs on it. (8). Another women's kimono but this one had a dark purple dragon wrapping around it. (9). Necklace made of ruby, sapphire, pearl, onyx, and amethyst with an emerald five-point star in the middle of it. (10). A Chinese dragon statue with a body of emerald with claws and fangs of pearl and eyes of ruby.
The siblings looked at each other and nodded before they both reached for the statue but the minute they touched it a strange glow surrounded it. Soon the glow became blinding and they both had to shield their eyes and when the glow faded they both looked at the statue and blinked in shock. The statue had apparently come to life for where it once was now stood a miniature dragon about 2 ft tall and 4 ft long with ruby red eyes and emerald scales with pearly white claws and fangs "Kagome-sama! Souta-sama! I'm so glad your alive and well!!" he, it sounded like a guy, said causing the two siblings to blink and Kagome was the first one to speak "um, I don't mean to be rude but who are you?" the dragon blinked then exclaimed "ah! How remiss of me! I am known as Yazi, your protector Kagome-sama" Kagome and Souta blinked again at that.
Kagome spoke again "so Yazi, what do you mean my protector?" Yazi replied "exactly as I said! I am the protector of Kagome the princess of the Northern Lands!" the siblings gaped at the dragon and this time Souta was the first to speak up "but how can she be a princess when she's human?" Yazi gasped and exclaimed "you don't know!?" they just looked confused so Yazi explained "you both are the children of the Lord of the North, Raidon!" Kagome and Souta felt shock run through them and Kagome asked "how come we don't remember our father?" Yazi sighed as he looked down and said "that is a long story to tell, perhaps we can go somewhere more comfortable?" the siblings nodded and Kagome led the way down from the attic.
They were soon seated in Kagome's room and Yazi took a deep breath before he began "you were just 4 years old, Kagome-sama, when I took you and your brother, who was only a baby, away from the castle and your father. The Northern Lands are very rich and powerful but there are those who seek to gain control of it for themselves and thus, they hatched a plot to use you two to blackmail your father into giving up his title but I learned of this plot. Unfortunately I was just recently appointed your caretaker and didn't have enough authority to voice my concerns to your father. So to keep you both safe I stole you away in the dead of night. I had heard rumors of the Bone-Eaters well so I took you there and transported you to this time where you could be safe after I transformed myself into a statue" they both sat in shock at what they heard.
Souta was the first to speak "if we're really demons then how come we look like humans?" Yazi replied "before I sent you through the well I gave you both a potion that would seal your demonic traits so you could live as humans" Kagome snapped out of it and said "hold up! Demons?! Us?! You got the wrong kids buddy! We can't be royalty!" Yazi looked at her and replied "you can and you are, Kagome-sama, your father loved you dearly and no doubt suffered greatly when I stole you away and your real mother died shortly after giving birth to Souta-sama" they looked at each other and Souta asked "what kind of demons are we?" Yazi replied "you are black panther demons" just then Kagome spoke up "wait, if you're my protector then who's Souta's protector?" the siblings looked at Yazi who cocked his head.
Yazi replied "your cousin, Talon" Kagome and Souta gaped and Kagome exclaimed "if this Talon is our cousin then how come he's Souta's protector?!" Yazi replied calmly "Talon is the daughter of your father's brother out of wedlock and often resents her heritage but since she is a white tiger she cannot be granted the privileges of normal family members" the two sat quietly and absorbed this while Yazi waited patiently for them to accept it "is there anyone else we should know about?" Kagome asked tiredly and Yazi replied "your father's most trusted generals, Inferno the dragon, Blizzard the snow leopard, Earthquake the coyote, Thunder the tiger, Timber the bear, Vice the crocodile, Kenyan the grey dog, and Morzan the raven" the siblings absorbed this while Yazi thought for a moment.
Then Yazi perked up and continued "ah! I almost forgot to mention Kagome-sama's friends! There is Tauros the bull, Zaku the black and white wolf, Murtugh the son of Morzan, Sagasaki the snake, Dasios the black dog, Ramiro the shadow fox, and Ganado the dark spine dragon" there was an even longer pause as the stunned siblings digested this information and Yazi sat there swishing his tail merrily "hey Yazi, if our dad's Lord of the North then who are the lords of the other lands?" Souta asked and the dragon replied "last I knew the Lord of the South was Adrian the hawk demon, the Lord of the East was Dartanian the weasel, the Lord of the West was Inutaisho" Kagome snapped out of it and said "he died and now his son Sesshomaru is Lord of the West" Yazi nodded and 'hmmed' quietly.
There was a long silence until Kagome yelped and covered her face with her hands and moaned while the other two looked on in worry "inuyasha is not going to like this" she said after a few moments and Souta immediately responded "who cares?! You're a full demon now you can take him!" Kagome lifted her head up and replied "even if I knew how to use my powers you forget that inuyasha still has the tetsusaiga" Souta paused as he remembered that and he caught Yazi's confused look so he said "inuyasha is a half-dog demon and the son of that Inutaisho guy you mention and he has this really cool sword made out of his father's fang that can slay a hundred demons in one swing" Yazi nodded to show he understood and looked thoughtful for a moment.
Yazi perked up and exclaimed "I have it! You can go to your father for help with this inuyasha!" Kagome immediately protested "I don't want to kill him it's just that I kind of shattered the Shikon no Tama and now I have to help put it back together" Yazi nodded and replied "than me and Souta-sama shall accompany you" Kagome yelped while Souta cheered at that comment. Kagome slumped in defeat and sighed before saying "so tell us about the Northern Lands" Yazi nodded and began his tale.
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A tall, black-haired man sighed as he leaned his head on his fist. This man was Lord Raidon of the North, his hair was pitch black and went down to his butt while his eyes were emerald green and he had an emerald five-point star in the middle of his forehead. He was dressed in black and dark blue robes and he had gold earrings in his ears with diamond shaped emeralds hanging from them. He sighed again as he swept dull eyes over the empty room 'oh my children, I hope you are safe and happy wherever you are' he thought sadly as tears glistened in his eyes before he raised a hand to wipe them away before they fell 'I have shed more than enough tears for my children' he thought with a sigh just before the door banged open and a crimson haired man ran into the room "my lord!! I have urgent news!!" he shouted as he struggled to regain his breath as Raidon sat up in his throne to pay attention.
Inferno caught his breath and continued "scouts report hearing word of a priestess named Kagome traveling around to collect shards of the Shikon no Tama!" Raidon shot out of his chair as hope flared in his chest "Kagome? My daughter?!" Raidon questioned as he crossed the room in great strides to stand in front of Inferno "the scouts say the priestess is human but it is possible that it is merely a concealing spell or potion" he replied with glistening eyes as he watched the light return to Raidon's eyes "go! Bring her here! I must see is she is my daughter!" Raidon ordered and Inferno saluted before turning on his heel and sprinting out of the room.
They were both however unaware of the person at the door listening in to the conversation 'Kagome? My old friend?! She will be so happy to see me!' he thought to himself as he ran from the palace and once a good distance away he transformed in a giant black dog with a purple diamond on it's forehead and took off towards Kaede's village when a horrible thought occurred to him 'what if she doesn't remember me? Well I'll cross that bridge when I come to it' the dog sped up, becoming nothing but a giant black blur to human eyes, and narrowly avoided stepping on a human caravan. The dog gave a grin as he struggled to increase speed to find his friend.
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General Zargon: chapter 1 finished!!!
Ryuuketsu: just make the announcement
General Zargon: right!! As with the old version I need you reviewers to submit a character and it must list these things:
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General Zargon: now that that's done please R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ryuuketsu: yeah R&R