ray: hi all this is redone of the firs as you can see

hearone: she ash her brother for help

ray:sorry if its fast i proms it will get longer over time it jest takes time

herone: sorry on her writing if its bad

ray:i have a disability so to say i have a hard time with my writing.

hearone: she is going to school

ray: so if your jest going to say the the same thing on my writing don't comment

hearone: it be nice if you help her out in stead

ray: i like that very much and thanks all who are wiling to read it

hearone: transformers are is not hers go to there right full owners

though

'though in dream world'

dream world

"normal"

"twin bond"

flashbacks

Name: Racheal
Other names: ray, midnight, mid, and night
Age: 16
Gender: female
height: 5` 2"
Eye color: blue
Job: space police or police protectors of all space.
Job rank: second in command
Description: light dirty blonde hair comes to the bottom of the shoulder blade and hair is slightly curly. She is well built with some muscles on the arms and a flat stomach, legs are thick and are used for running and swimming. Skinny, but has a thin waist always and has a belt on. Her light tan skin in the summer, but looks more pale in winter. She has pants on, and the blue and red shirts are her favorite to wear at school. Racheal uses dark grey and white eyeshadow,and brown mascara ,but she doesn't usually wear has some shoes that are black and are Nike that are meant for running.

I look at all the boxes I had packed for my trip to california. I was doing something special for my school. I was going to a public school for my dad was in this state and well I didn't want to be stuck with my mom, at all. so I look over the boxes when a knock came from my door I went to get it squeezing throw all the boxes that touched the ceiling. I opened it to see two moving trucks I pointed at the stuff letting the six men I who were to help me move to california for this school year. I helped them get it all to the truck once done I pay them to get it to my new home in california. I then grabbed my cat and the few things not packed and put it in my car as I drove it to the hotel I was staying at for to night. tomorrow i was to head to california but not before I said goodbye to all my friends

I slowed down at a rest stop it was 12:00 at night and it had no Signs on staying here for the night. So I went to the bathroom then back to my car let my cat out to go to the bathroom. He then came back in and I lay down for the night. I had stay longer then expected I had said goodbye to my best friend she did not like it then said she come out to meet me on brake. I had told her brother who wanted to come and live with me that he could if wanted to. She then said they would move in with me but at thanksgiving break they come out. So I lay there but I then I felt something off, something odd but old, as I slowly fell to sleep for the night after the long drive.

-Dreams-

When I open my eyes I was in the woods near my home I think. It look normal then I saw big blue eyes but they look like light from a flash light. "Human we need your help" it said.
"yes your help" said another voice as more eye flash light blue fell on me a total of twelve eyes that I counted.
"Add us human"
"you are different human"
"you are strange human" the only female voice well I think it was female with how it sounded.
"You will save so many"
"add us to live on"
"your help is nee-"
"stop! I am not human I lost my human self a long time ago. What you need my help? Tell me now then!" I said not happy over this they seemed shocked over my words backing up.
"Will you help are kind then" said the first one
"yes I will. what is it you need me to do?" I said to them.
"You shall find out but you must pass the test" said the female then wherever we were vanish.

-End of dream-

Her eyes shot open then she sat up in the seat started the engine and left the place. Never seeing the land had changed and there was a mustang police car or the fact that a con was sitting next to her recharging and was startled awake from her driving away suddenly. He watched her drive off something had waked her up, but he didn't care at the moment falling asleep once more.

Ok so I need help with my writing so if you want to help me and are not a guest jest sand message now if you don't want to do that or are a gust email me.

"midnightberry4 " is my address ill get to you as soon as i can.

till the earth burns in fire and the sky is red like blood

the last dragon rider