I owe the idea of this story to Jackline Potter, but I am adding my own little twist, if you want to see the original idea of this story go to and search that author. Otherwise go on and read my story.
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Lily sighed, it was September 1st, and she was excited to go back to school, but one thing was stopping her from being ecstatic about returning to school, or rather four. The marauders were annoying, arrogant and possibly the most maddening people Lily had ever met. They were comprised of James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew(a/n I am not going into a full description of the marauders here because I assume you already know who they are, and it would make the story to boring to describe people you already knew.) They were always playing pranks, and thinking that they were better than everyone else, when in reality they were just a bunch of bullying toe rags, well except for Remus Lupin, who was in actuality quite pleasant. But mostly they were aggravating, and infuriating people.
It was early morning, and Lily was at one of her best friend Lola's house. The house was extremely nice, Lola's family was very well off. Although, it was early morning, and no one besides Lily was up. She glanced around at her friends beds, realizing how lucky she was to have them as her mates. Lily had three best friends, Lola Brooks, Zoey Barrett, and Nicole Martinez. They were all wonderful in their own ways.
Nicole Martinez, the outgoing one. She was gorgeous, and all the male eyes in Hogwarts were always looking no scratch that not looking, staring at her. Nicole had shoulder length brown hair, and deep brown eyes. She had a slim figure, and their wasn't a male at Hogwarts whose eyes hadn't studied her graceful curves, and everyone knew it, even Nicole. Though don't get the wrong idea, Nicole wasn't arrogant. She just knew she was pretty, and at times wasn't afraid to show it, or use it to her advantage.
Lola Brooks, the studious one. It wasn't an odd occurrence to walk in on her reading a book, in fact it was quite normal and happened regularly. Though she was quiet, she had a deadly temper that no one ever wanted to come in contact with. She was in fact as gorgeous as Nicole but in a different way. She had black hair that fell just past her shoulder with scattered soft curls. Brown eyes that seemed that they could find the truth in anyone. She too was sought after by many boys, but unlike Nicole she turned them down, instead of dating each one for a month or two, she said that she hadn't found the right one yet.
Zoey Barrett, the motherly one. She always knew what to say to make someone fell better about themselves, if you had a problem you went to Zoey for advice. Not unlike anyone else in the group, she too was gorgeous. She had blonde shoulder length hair with piercing blue eyes that seemed to find the good in everyone. She never seemed to get angry with anyone, and if she did was a quick forgive and forget type person. Zoey was countless times being asked out by boys, she would often politely decline. She really was into having long term relationships, and therefore only would go out with guys who she truly liked. Many would see this as a good quality, but people like Nicole though, thought this to be ridiculous.
Lily Evans, the brilliant one. She was every teacher's favorite student, and secretly proud of it, though she would never brag about it. Long fiery red hair that fell in loose curls, striking emerald eyes, and a slim figure was enough to draw the attention of all the boys at Hogwarts, though none of them ever got a chance to make a move on her because James Potter was always around to stop them. James Potter and Lily Evans did not get along, they were like oil and vinegar, James was hopelessly in love with Lily and she hated his guts.
Together the four were the prettiest and most sought after girls in Hogwarts. They matched so well together since they all were so different, and were always there when one needed support, or a shoulder to cry on. Lily shrieked a little as Zoey rolled over in her bed, causing Nicole to wake up.
"Lily why are you always awake at obscenely early hours of the morning?" Nicole asked throwing her face back into the pillow and rolling over trying to pull her covers over her head, but in the process she seemed to be a little confused, and ended up on the floor instead, causing the other two girls in the room to have a rude awakening, and Lily to suddenly be overcome with a case of the giggles.
"Nicole honestly sometimes I worry." Lola said, Zoey and her joined Lily in laughing.
"Oh shut up all of you!" Nicole huffed while starting to make her bed. "I'm hungry Lola, can we have breakfast now?" Nicole asked giving puppy dog eyes. Lola nodded her head and rang the bell for the cook to come to their room.
"Hi Katie, we'll just have some bagels and cream cheese." Said Lola, Katie the cook nodded, and then left the room.
"Honestly you have the life," Zoey said looking at Lola. "I think if I grew up with a maid and a cook, that I might die of happiness." But before Lola could answer, an owl tapped on the window, and Lily got up to let it into the room.
"It's for me?" Lily said, tearing open the letter and glancing over it. "Oh I absolutely loathe him more than anything else in the world!" Lily cried out in an extremely frustrated voice. She then proceeded to throw the letter in the burning fireplace to her left.
"I think I have an idea of who that was from." Nicole said frowning, none of the girls in particular was a big fan of the marauders, except they all seemed to be content with Remus.
"What did it say Lils?" Zoey asked, her motherly instinct instantly racing into action.
"Oh just the normal James Potter crap" Lily replied. The girls all nodded even though they weren't one hundred percent sure what in god's name she was talking about. "You know for once I would really just like to give him a taste of his own medicine." Lily said with a satisfied smile coming onto her face.
"Oh goodness," Lola said. "I think my life just may be complete." But before anyone could respond to Lola's comment, Nicole burst in.
"I have a brilliant beyond brilliant idea." (a/n incase you picked up on this, yes it was from the parent trap.) She shouted full of excitement.
"Oh do share." Zoey said anticipation beginning to show all over her face.
"Ok, so you know how the marauders are always bothering us, and how much we hate each of their personalities?" Nicole asked the three listening girls.
"Yeah," Lily replied. "What does that have to do with anything?" She asked becoming confused.
"Well what if we became exact copies of them, you know Lily can act like James, I can act like Sirius, Lola can act like Remus, and Zoey can act like Peter. Then they'll realize how annoying we are in our new selves, and we can shove it in their face what if feels like to be treated the way they treat others!" She shouted marveling at her wonderful plan.
"Oh my god," Lola shouted. "Nicole that's brilliant!"
"I know, who knew I could make great plans too." Nicole said becoming instantly happy with herself.
"Oh Potter, you are so going to pay for any annoying thing you have ever done to me." Lily said a grin of satisfaction appearing on her face.
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The four girls smiled as they stepped onto the Hogwarts Express. They began walking up and down aisles looking for a certain compartment belonging to four mischievous boys. After peeking into what seemed like millions of compartments, they finally spotted the boys in the farthest compartment. Smiling Lily said,
"Alright girls don't be afraid to really put a show on." She said not being able to contain her satisfaction at the moment. "Ready?" Lily asked. The other three nodded.
"One" Lola said counting down the seconds until their pleasure began.
"Two" said Nicole not being able to hide her excitement.
"Three" Zoey said in just above a whisper, and with that Lily burst into the compartment.
"Talking about how insanely good looking I am, are you Potter?" Lily asked flipping her hair and batting her eyelashes.
"Oh please, why would they be talking about you, when they could be spending their time much more wisely talking about me?" Nicole asked flashing a smile and strutting over to Sirius sitting next to him and beginning to play with his hair. Giggling frequently and batting her eyelashes as well.
"Oh stop it you morons." Lola said walking into the compartment and rolling her eyes. She sat down and began to read a book, glancing over it to watch the scene unfold. Then quietly Zoey shuffled in and sat down next to Lola sending looks of absolute adoration at Nicole and Lily. The four boys just looked dumbfounded by the girl's behavior. James was the first to speak up.
"Alright what's going on here?" He asked not really sure what the girls were up too, but knowing that it couldn't be good.
"Whatever could you be talking about Jamesie-Wamesie." Lily asked smirking. She absolutely hated it when he came up with ridiculous names for her like lily flower.
"What did you just call me?" he asked completely flabbergasted.
"jamesie-wamesie of course. Don't you just love the name potter?" She asked basking in the moment and taking in the look on his face. Whatever was going on, James decided to play along.
"Sure Evans, any name you make up for me is a blessing, so you want to go out with me this year?" he asked, he was really just doing this to annoy her, and of course because he was completely obsessed with her.
"Nah I'm thinking of playing the field this year, you know." Lily said sending a shocked James into silence. By this time Nicole was actually on top of Sirius kissing his ear playfully.
"Oh, honestly Nicole learn to control yourself." Lola said again rolling her eyes, and turning her attention back to her book. All the while, Zoey just stayed huddled up in the corner, staring at Nicole and Lily.
"Alright well honestly I should be leaving. Every guy in Hogwarts wants me for a good shag." Lily said standing up, flipping her hair once again. Nicole gently slid of Sirius, taking out her compact and glancing at herself intently.
"Gotta check up, all of the guy population of Hogwarts will be looking at me." She said flipping her hair just like Lily.
"Honestly, why I am friends with you idiots I shall really never know!" Lola said closing her book, and gently sliding it into her bag.
"Because without us Lola, who would you have to correct and feel smarter than?" Nicole asked. Lola just rolled her eyes, grabbing Zoey by the hand and leading her out of the compartment.
"Alright boys, now don't think about me too much while I'm gone, that would be unhealthy" Lily said blowing them all kisses and making a dramatic exit from the compartment.
"It's ok I know you guys really like me better, I mean who wouldn't look at me, I'm gods gift to earth!" Nicole said blowing them all kisses just like Lily had, and then strutting out of the compartment to meet up with Lily.
"Oh my god you guys, that was such a success, and did you see the looks on their faces?" Zoey asked, the four girls shared a quick laugh, planning another trip to the marauders compartment later on.
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"So James, still think you are going to win Evans over this year, like she said she's going to play the field." Sirius said with a smug look on his face.
"Honestly Padfoot," James said sighing. "That wasn't the Lily I know and love." And the four other boys couldn't agree more.
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Ok so the first chapter was a little confusing. I hope you understood everything, what with the girls all acting like one of the marauders. PLEASE tell me what you think of the story so far, and if you have the time drop me a review, they really help. Should I continue on with this story? Or just drop it? It's all up to you people. Please leave a review for me. Thanks!