Well you guys will have to tell me what you guys thin. Should this story go on? What I did wrong or right is up to you but I do have a surprise in all of this. I also hope that you can enjoy and just to warn you that its been a while sense I played any games. Like last couple I played was link to the past some four swords and N64 games. Also twilight too but thats about it. Rest was research and hopefully I will not disappoint. This was written during my inspiration so I think its really good.
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A slight breeze could be felt in the fields of Hyrule. The leaves swaying with the gentle breeze in a peaceful land blessed by the three goddesses. Though everyone that is familiar with any can tell that the land is hardly at peace.
Not far away from the country was an old ancient worn down path that led to the edge of a field by a rock formation. A short stalky brown horse could be seen with a cart being pulled. A cloak figure could be seen on the cart directing the horse by the reins from where he sat.
The horse was had a couple of scars on him as he came closer to the field. The man pulled at the reins quickly speaking an unknown language to the horse as he slowly gets off the cart. Walking up to the horse he spoke again and the horse nodded its head up and down as the man moved towards the ropes that connect the cart to the horse.
After the ropes slip of the horse, he trances to a thick patch of grace and start to chomp down on the dark green leaves. It ate greedily and then snort to get the ridder's attention. Soon the man notices the horse odd behavior and walk over to where the horse was eating. He notices a green rupee where the horse was eating at and picked it up. He takes off his hood to get a closer inspection of the gem that his horse has found.
The man's face was worn and a warry look could be seen in his dull grey eyes. A white scar across his nose and another that wen under his chin on his left side of his face. His heir was short messy and an unnatural white to it. Is face features were sharp and his skin tanned from being in the sun all day.
He patted the horse for its good job and slip the rupee into his side pouch under his cloak. The horse went on to eat.
As the man walk back to the cart he went about to set up his camp at the edge of the valley. Soon his make shift camp with a fire running was set up as the sun was about to make its final good bye. He then went to the cart for the third time that day and pulled out some dried meat. And looked into the barrel that carried his water. He pulled a spoon full of water to his nose to sniff it. His face went sour and proceeded to dump the water out.
He then grabs some rolled up parchment paper and continued to draw in it before setting it down for the night.
With a sigh, the man sat on a rock that was by the fire and proceeded to eat his dried meat. Looking at the sky that was soon filled with bright lights of the heavens above him. Soon he was asleep in his shelter.
Cia was running through the dark fields of Hyrule. Her clothes were tattered and was panting heavily. She has been running and running on what seemed like forever. One day she was dyeing and now she was here running for her life. Out of all the things that could kill her it was some small goblin creature. I am not even sure what time that I am in. This is not the exact same fields that I did battle on either.
She dived behind the bush just in time for the monsters to run past here. Searching franticly for their prey.
Maybe I will have a chance with Link again. A thought appeared in her head of her dyeing again. Then again, I might pass. Come back later? I probably should gain my powers again before I do anything. Maybe surviving.
Cia got up and tried to brush off the dust even though she could barely see herself. She looks around to see if there were any more monsters around and spot a low glow off in the distance.
Well I have nothing to lose at this point. Might as well see what it could be. Hopefully not anymore Bokoblins. I hope not.
Cia slowly trudge through the tall grass moving closer to the small glow. As she came closer to the glow she notices that it was hot ambers from a fire. Surrounding the camp fire was a cart. Cloth stretches on the side making a makeshift tent for its occupant that was currently sleeping in it. Right by the cart were some rolled up papers laid out.
She crept closer to the cart and notice that one of the papers was laid out with an ink container right next to it. She picked up the paper and notice of how rough it was and could feel the fibers in it. As if it was a crude way of turning a plant into paper. Not much detail could be seen because of the dark but would could be seen was a map of some sorts.
Each section on the map was drawn out a circular like drawing and pointed things. A word of some type was drawn in each circle and a dotted line could be seen going through them until it stops. Her eyes widen as she realizes it was a map. Of different countries. It has been so long sense Hyrule had any trader or other nations visit for a long time. Though this one traveled for a long distance.
Something furry touch her back and she yelps before covering her back. A small horse was looking at her when she finally decides it was safe to turn around. The horse's eyes look at her as if it could see something hidden within her.
Cia stomach growled and she looks down at her stomach hoping that it would settle. Next thing she notice was the horse nudging he towards the cart's seat. She complied and found a little bag of dried meat sitting there. She snatches it greedily and began to eat.
It felt so long sense I last ate. Sure, this meat was dry and nothing special but it will do. I do need to recover my strength so I am sure that he is willing to help a stranger out. I chuckle mentally.
A stick snap behind the horse and a Bokoblin appears behind the horse. No, I thought. They found me.
As I try to step away from the force, my balance was lost. Next thing I knew was my head hitting the side of the cart and my vision went blank. Slowly the thought slip away from Cia to oblivious sleep.
Tell me what you guys think and I hope you guys really enjoyed it. I am also tired of seeing all of these stories center around Link and Zelda also. I mean there is a lot of other focus that could make the story different. Like writing a banish person or a king from after the legends. Something like that.